DuskRipper [2018-08-19 09:00:55 +0000 UTC]
Great work on the expression changes for Melanie.
I do like that she is struggling in her mind for the first two panels. Unsure how to use it.
But getting the hang. Also the last page has a really nice expression, showing the way melanie and vision see what is happening. vision has this self confidence, but also seems to sort of having fun being able to fight with melanie, while melanie seems more practical in this approach and is not too keen on all of it.
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