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LordoftheWolfDale [2011-09-03 18:58:11 +0000 UTC]
the shield maiden werent soldiers, theres only a hand full of them, the women of the kings house are shieldmaidens so in the time of Theoden, only Eowyn would have been a shieldmaiden
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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to LordoftheWolfDale [2011-09-03 20:23:08 +0000 UTC]
I honestly didn't know that, but still... What's the point, then? If there's only one of them, then why even teach her to fight at all, since her death could be a serious blow to the line of the king? That really just hurts their case even more, since it means the women of Rohan were just as helpless as everyone else, even though they obviously didn't *have* to be.
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LordoftheWolfDale In reply to Blank-Page-Emperor [2011-09-03 20:32:45 +0000 UTC]
its just women arnt warriors in that world just like in history, its just not there place. and in the book eowyn only rode to war because she was looking for death. in the movie they made it more heroic.
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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to LordoftheWolfDale [2011-09-03 20:51:03 +0000 UTC]
Hey, if that makes my idea a bit more original, then I'm okay with that.
Anyway, not trying to sound like a dick here, but I'd like to ask you to respond to my work or else not comment on my piece, because I really am looking for feedback on it. I do appreciate you setting me straight on those aspects of Tolkien's world (and I agree, Jackson's take on it was really different from the books' ) but it mostly just reinforces my desire to make good on the idea behind Eowyn's personal bravado as it was presented in both places.
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PurpleLikeWoah [2010-08-30 17:17:48 +0000 UTC]
I really enjoyed this. Great work.
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RebornDead [2009-12-22 23:32:22 +0000 UTC]
I agree with everyone's comments, this was amazing. I was really surprsied reading it and had to scroll up to make sure it was you. Not that I don't think you could write it, but because it's just so new and different! I enjoyed every bit of it. And you made it SO believable, which is what made it so emersive. I would love to read more if you ever get to expanding out the scenes and characters.
I am, however, totally going to steal the genre idea epistolary . Maybe it'll break me out of this terrible block to try something new... But I'll do it far enough down the road so no one suspects I stole your somewhat-original idea. <_<
>_>
^_^;
Anyway, yeah. Loved it.
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RebornDead In reply to Blank-Page-Emperor [2009-12-24 01:13:20 +0000 UTC]
Maybe the hardest part would be in keeping the language consistent? That was my first thought. Other than realizing how much modern English blows. Old English is gorgeous. I love how it flows so poetically.
I shall try. At some point. When I hunker down and do some writing.
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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to RebornDead [2009-12-25 05:39:03 +0000 UTC]
I. Wouldn't. Know.
So I'll just write it and let you put it in Old English. 8D
But yeah. You can do a really simple epistolary or a really tough one. There's just so many avenues!
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Sain-Nayuakuioa [2009-12-20 17:12:15 +0000 UTC]
Man, that was incredibly emersive! I really, really want to read more of this story. Fairly unique among things I've read recently and one of your best things ever.
Maybe we could collab on something? I'd love to try my hand at a series of corresponding letters.
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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to Sain-Nayuakuioa [2009-12-21 19:55:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I really feel like maybe I should take a crack at a novelisation of it. 'Cause of course you know the Ram's-Head is... *stops before spoilerz LOL*
I'd be perfectly willing to do something like that with you if you've got an idea or something. I'm not currently super-occupied, but I probably will be come next semester. F***ing graduate. X_X
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ShadowtheRipper [2009-12-19 07:17:31 +0000 UTC]
I love Mila! <3
Great story, btw.
Definitely NOT fantasy, I agree with you.
Just... ancient story-telling.
c:
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Moon-Willow [2009-12-18 23:53:22 +0000 UTC]
this is a best seller in the making... seriously dude... I would read EVERY single page...
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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to Moon-Willow [2010-01-27 07:36:30 +0000 UTC]
I'm looking into this, BTW.
The issue here is that I DO need a formal editor, and that this has no screening process. I'd like to think that I could make a better impression here than on deviantArt, and I'd make money for whatever impression there is, BUT
This allows ANY crap onto it, and that's the tough part.
Maybe I'll toy with a few of my stronger ones. IDK.
I appreciate the support, but I'm just not comfortable enough yet with my work for this sort of thing, for the most part.
If there's any story you think I should throw onto it, I'll take suggestions. C:
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Moon-Willow In reply to Blank-Page-Emperor [2009-12-28 19:21:18 +0000 UTC]
hmmm.... you need to look towards the future then of the digital downloads, like the kindle and get a profit from each download.... hmmmmmmmm
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Blank-Page-Emperor In reply to Moon-Willow [2010-01-27 07:37:29 +0000 UTC]
Thinking about that sort of thing, myself, BUT
Editors are a good thing, and I need zem. I want to see if I can talk to real publishers about it.
Plus I hate reading on the computer. Hate hate hate. Books never run out of batteries or get viruses.
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