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Published: 2011-12-05 08:54:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 6504; Favourites: 178; Downloads: 350
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Adelaide was destined to die. Her death would've brought about the doom of the world, releasing the malevolent spirit of Isra, the Dread King. Isra's servants had nearly succeeded to if it wasn't for her savior, Cuthbert, tearing her away from the necromancers' scheme.Taking her as his own, Cuthbert educated Adelaide in the ways of being a member of the White Star Order. Through her training, she became an ordained templar, a ward against the darkness that creeps across Aunturia. But dangers from the past haunt her still. Even now, the necromancers are hunting Adelaide, to spill her life's blood and unleash the Dread King back into the mortal realm.
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Oh look, another red-headed heroine. I must like them or something
I don't want to gush out her entire backstory now, or else there won't be anything to discover when I actually get around to writing this thing. I'll have a short story featuring her and Cuthbert up shortly, just so you can get a taste of what their world is like.
Adelaide, characters mentioned © Me
Tools: Xara 6/CS3
Music: Storytime by Nightwish
Heroes:
Villains:
Short Story "Black Death": [link]
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Comments: 25
This is what my parents were going to name me if I was born a girl.
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I was gonna get stuck with Heidi
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Huh, I really like this design, it comes together really well. I thought her gender was kinda ambiguous at first but I realize now that it adds to the character. Sword Sistahs ftw.
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Flippin' tabbards. Covering up lady parts.
Thanks!
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I think she looks really great.
Nice work! I love her cloak.
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And people think chicks need to dress skimpily to be sexy~
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I like the character, but I find myself wishing her pants went all the way up to her waist, and didn't look like a pair of overlong stockings. Really takes away from the determined heroine look and just makes me think "Easy access port/what if she trips."
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Might be a little less sexy, but it does the character more justice
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Red-heads are awesome. I have my own red-headed heroine...must be a plague or something...
Great work, and quite an interesting story, draws my curiosity!!
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She's actually sturdily built, and not one of those metal bikini volleyball-girls. Cool.
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Simple, girl next door, heroine. I like it.
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In a word, she looks hot. Now fort going into detail. I like that outfit of hers. The white cross on her chest looks really cool, and I think her cape/hood is awesome. Her back story, or what you've told us, is pretty cool too. She had best keep her eyes open for those necromancers.
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>-> she's a no-nonsense babe.
Thanks
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No-nonsense, I like that. Give her a task and she'll get it done. I like that a lot.
You're welcome.
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Eventually she'll have to break being so rigid and disciplined
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Have her warp over to Scala's and let her hang out there for a little while, or even send her to Leila. 
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