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gayluigi69 [2024-11-08 04:06:38 +0000 UTC]
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Taxouck [2019-04-18 12:03:25 +0000 UTC]
Hello there! Just bingeread this story after being linked to it last night. It was a very cute ride, though I cared more about the survivalist/partly-infected chapters than the "you are fated to become the second mother" ones, though you went in a great direction with that, with Sarah fighting back, freeing the minds of the Neko, and delivering an important life message to Lily.
Now more importantly, the reason I'm bothering to post a comment on an old story - this specific line, "My Neko have taken to calling me Sarah [...], and I have to say that the name rings some sort of cord within me, as if the name were always mine."
I must say, as a trans woman, this sentiment rang so true for me when I changed my name. My old one always sat a bit weirdly for me. I found it ugly, and its meaning was something I wasn't. It felt like I responded to it purely because that's what I'd been trained to do. The contrast I felt when I chose one that fit better, I would've easily compared it to fate due to the sheer scale of positive emotions it brought me.
There's definitely something freeing in realizing that, yes, becoming a woman is just something you can do IRL, and that it's okay to want that. I spent many years consuming all the TG content I could desperately wishing for it to happen to me. I was convinced it was just a fetish and that I was a straight dude - that I *had* to be a straight dude - and then, fuck no, I'm a lesbian woman, turns out! And now I'm the one writing the TG content I wish I could've read when I was younger!
Anyway, hoping you manage to find whatever is the source of your depression, and write more cute stories like this one. <3
Félicie
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Orion2442 [2018-09-26 02:46:32 +0000 UTC]
This is the best neko apocalypse series ever
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derpleaf [2016-08-09 04:50:17 +0000 UTC]
This was an incredibly bizarre concept when I first saw it. I thought to myself, "I got some free time, might as well just check it and see if it's worth reading". Boy, was I glad I did that because this is quite amazing. Who would've thought this would have become some emotional surreal sci-fi. There are a few loose threads and plotholes, but someone else already brought those up. For being your first story it's quite good. Better than the vast majority on thos site.
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juju712 [2016-07-29 14:29:06 +0000 UTC]
The unanswered questions I mentioned before were:
"With their one track mind, how could Neko agree to let the old man that sold the pair, well, sell them? Were Big Sisters more aware than others? Mother was there? What is the point of putting a prime to his head? Nekos don't care about that and humans wouldn't know of it or how to sell them without being transformed."
"If he was so important to her, why didn't the Mother leave the town to follow Sarah?" Because he was not ready? What changed since then? (already asked, I know)
"how did 'Sarah' escape 4 years ago and how was he able to prevent total transformation for all this time?"
"Why was Carson so hateful and angry?" and "What happened to him after that?"
We have one of the answers (different from what I expected too, nice one). What about the others?
I wondered why the character's name was never given, it's a nice twist, but if you imply the whole series was extracts from the journal it is awkward at best.
I have not much hope given how old it is but is the sequel still planed?
There were a few weird points and maybe plot holes but overall it was an excellent series. Congrats.
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BlazorHeson In reply to juju712 [2016-07-30 01:47:46 +0000 UTC]
Finally!
Thank you for giving me some real feedback, I have been trying to get some for a while now.
First off this was always a first attempt at this story so getting someone to nit-pick it is really gonna help me with the re-write. Now that I know what some of the plot holes are I can work off that. So thank you.
Second, there is a sequel planned. It has just been really hard to write lately (been a really bad year) so please don't give up on me.
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juju712 In reply to BlazorHeson [2016-07-30 10:55:35 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome. ^^
A rewrite and a sequel!? that's excellent news! And I know how hard it can be, I'll wait patiently.
If you need help or ideas I'd be happy to give.
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Uncle-Ben [2016-04-02 07:05:21 +0000 UTC]
Kudos to you.
I'm not entirely certain how I ended up here, but I'm glad I did. A fine story you have here.
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GoldenLongsword [2015-10-17 10:19:41 +0000 UTC]
Great Story, I usually don't cry with stories but I swear a tear dropped for this one, looking forward to seeing more awesome stories like this!
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Soynd In reply to GobboKilla [2015-06-19 23:07:50 +0000 UTC]
She remembers his face. She'll get him eventually. Four slash marks on a guy's face are hard to hide let alone forget.
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GobboKilla In reply to Soynd [2015-06-21 07:31:29 +0000 UTC]
I do hope so. He's an asshole and deserves to... well, whatever she will do with him.
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Soynd In reply to GobboKilla [2015-06-21 20:15:38 +0000 UTC]
I believe that he should die in the end, not because of his simple evil intro, but because of how many people (nekos included) he' killed. Seriously, the nekos have killed a grand total of zero, count it in the story, zero people. As seen at the end of the story, all the tgtf'd people weren't dead, simply out of control and under an outside influence but all in all still alive, more so than ever before. When you look at Mr. Evilwiththeface, you find that He has killed (with complete prejudice) Hundreds of innocent people for what I can only guess to be money and influence. As a side note I hope that soldier turned neko at the end lives.
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GobboKilla In reply to Soynd [2015-06-21 20:17:06 +0000 UTC]
True that... the nekos only did what their instincts told them (the mother included, even though her pathing was somewhat wrong)
Him on the other hand... AARGHHH! I just want to burn people like that to crisps!!!
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Soynd In reply to GobboKilla [2015-06-22 05:31:18 +0000 UTC]
Agreed and. AGREED!!!
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08jwd4462 [2015-04-06 08:47:10 +0000 UTC]
Cheers for writing this series, I really enjoyed it. Looking forward to the sequel.
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devon2501 [2015-03-25 02:51:20 +0000 UTC]
No one notice the dark shadow of the man. No one noticed it's malice and evil. No one noticed how it seemed to smile. And no one noticed the faint chilling whisper in the room, "my turn".
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Taelanus2-Icehawk [2015-03-23 08:21:16 +0000 UTC]
Lauren: *growl, my tail swaying with my fur on end* I wanna eliminate that madman.
Calm down Lauren, I'm sure the doctor will get what is due. **smirks as a blade slides out from under my wrist* Ain't that right my good sir?
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Soynd [2015-03-23 02:43:09 +0000 UTC]
Urge to kill evil Boss-Man rising exponentially. Current Levels over nyine thousand.
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Zatmani7 [2015-03-22 23:12:52 +0000 UTC]
yay, I hope the sequel is as good as this one
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