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blckxwngxdragon — WIP - NaruSaku Crit please v2
Published: 2008-03-23 14:37:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 495; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 7
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i just wanted to see if there is anything you think needs to be changed or addedtitle for final piece is "The best of you....."
will be scapped later version 1 [link]
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I think the heads are a bit too big and Naruto's back looks a bit too hunched over for the position he's in, i think Sakuras shoulder might be a bit far to the right. This is just my opinion tho i'm really liking the loo of the image tho, the faces look fantastic.
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looks brilliant till now!
I like naruto more in his school uniform outfit, but thats just me 
Can't wait to see the finished one!
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Simple crit, Sakura looks old(too old for comfort). Try decreasing those auxilliary facial lines...i think?
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looks very good, great start on this...I don't read the manga (yet XD) so I don't see anything you need to add/ fix
I can not tell exactly where his elbow is, but it seems that Naruto's forearm is slightly too long, but as stated before I cant get a definite on where his elbow is to get it accurate enough
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okay thanx
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