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Published: 2006-01-09 22:44:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 59; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Filth covers the guilded youthas a valient shield protects innocence.
The media converged into crime
and youth grew into vengence
Standards are lowered to excuse
poor excusses
Water trickels and then rushes
to holes within the walls we built
A ruch to the manipulated
and a quiet death to hostility
problems reaching to the unprotected
and disease seeping, spreading to the old
Young eventually becomes old
and what do we choose to believe
but a crime
and concurrent beliefs to judge
the corrupt will blacken the lives
we lead
and leaders will vanish
If something does not happen
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Comments: 6
I like it. you are getting more personal and less formal, although the beginning is still extremely glamourous. but hell, you are you and I am I and I suppose I cannot make you get down and dirty in your poetry 
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Please explain the idea of thought poems to me vs. the emotional aspect of poems... I want to understand better!
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well..lets see... basically, you have a lot of really technical phrasing and ideas weaving in and out and then imagery to set the mood. the way I think I do things, is I have a lot of imagery and just kind of have a flow of emotions based on images. you have one liners, whereas my poems could not be taken apart, they are a whole. just different ways of doing things, you know?
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Is there a better way to do things... or is it more of just whatever you feel like?
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whatever you feel like. you should never conform to what doesnt come natural.
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