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    The mountain upon which he sat loomed over the village, its shadow like a tangible malice.  Smoke rolled down its slopes and ascended into the sky, a miasmic odor accompanying it.  A typical day.  The town of Story was waiting for Writer’s next volley of wrath to come tumbling down the mountain.

    The Champion’s Guild had a board full of job listings.  The protagonists, heroes, and motley crews were dispatched to clear the smoke and quell whatever evil had been roused by it.  In their usual fashion, success came moments before failure.  This drew the ire of Writer more than anything else, but despite his best attempts, his own creations always managed to stop his assault.

    The league of antagonists, villains, and monsters was more independently based, only loosely affiliated with one another.  Their worry was not over what Writer wanted to do, because Writer always held a special place for them in his heart.  Besides, only a member of the Champion’s Guild was equipped to dispose of them, and only then if there was a history.  And it was in these times when Writer was in a mood that they flourished.  While the pompous, vanilla saviors stemmed the tide of chaos, those who lurked in shadows were free to stir up strife.

    So it was on that day that Writer decided to, once again, annihilate his own creations.  He gave strength to evil and disadvantaged good.  He tipped the scales of balance and grinned favorably at the ensuing turmoil.  Though, this would not be the first time he had done so, and he knew the end results would be the same.  He was weary of the never-ending cycle.

    Writer decided to erase the village.

    The valley rumbled and rolled up as a scroll.  Characters and plot points began trying to weasel their way into Writer’s mind, to preserve themselves in his neurons even after their ink had been forgotten.  His precious children, the disenfranchised evil ones, moaned as their origins were stripped from them.  Their motivation purged, they curled as dying spiders, resenting the father who would debase them.  The protagonists and other heroes deadened their hopes and stalwart determination.  Then all the world as they knew it and all within were as a white husk.

    Writer wailed atop his mountain.  There was more to be had, though it would only be born of great anguish.

    He reached out to the page and gripped it tightly.  The valley collapsed into itself, as he crumpled the paper.  Then into everlasting darkness it plummeted, as he tossed it into the waste bin.

    Paper was archaic anyway.

    The keystrokes came, and the great mountain thundered with creation.  A new Story was being built, etched into the ether of fibers and electricity.  Its spires arched up, resolute, defiant.  It was a nexus of fictitious elements.  It was segmented into districts, interwoven yet foreign to one another.  Streets of neon and smog tangled with steam and steel.  Castles of obsidian and forts of pearl.  Overgrown jungles, ripe with flora and sweet mist.  Still there were cold places, mansions of ice with bitter winds howling through the eves.  Void expanses between laser guided rails and plasma propelled crafts.

    Writer sat back and examined his new work.  Certainly it was larger and shinier than his previous attempts, but he wondered if it would behave the same way.  With a sigh he tapped the keys once more, and characters fitted into their natural roles.  There were debonair steamboat entrepreneurs and gritted men, ashen with factory dust.  Vampire lords skulked the shadows, hunted by sellswords and paladins alike, while peasant armies fought for their feudal masters.  Animals and wild men mingled with one another, both hunted by the social elite of developed nations.  Wolves howled in the snow, and people of frost eked out sustenance in the ice.  Fleets of spaceships flitted in the black gaps, porting here and there in cities which teemed with life both familiar and unusual.

    Pleased with the new design, Writer leaned contentedly within the bridge of his colossal vessel.  It was his new mountain from which he would scatter the pompous lives of those below with but a few flicks of his fingers.

    Then things were as they always had been.  Story unfolded just as its predecessor had.  The paint was new, sure, but the walls were the same.  Writer watched, seething, as the fantastical lives below surged forth with hope.  He shook his head and clasped together his hands.  He had strived for as long as he could remember and wanted for only one thing.  For them to fail as he had.

    Fingers trembling with rage hovered over a panel.  The keys upon which mattered not, only his intent did.  He depressed the inputs, cursing under his breath.  He would throw everything he had at them, if it would only change Story into something new.

    There was a terrible barrage, as the canons of his ship unleashed unreasonable payloads upon the world below.  The atmosphere peeled back, clouds scattering like ripples in a still pond.  New clouds of dust and fire rose up, rapidly decaying mushrooms.  Writer grinned at the devastation.

    On the surface was ruin.  The gleaming utopias, the verdant gardens, all were buried in ashes and desolation.  Static characters were lost, those without names or real purpose, and so too were even a few with names.  Their deaths meant, for simple sake, weight.  Yet, the truly meaningful ones remained, resolute, hopeful.

    He sat back and ground his teeth.  If they were so determined to persevere, he would be sure to make it difficult.

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Comments: 46

Master-Dungeoneer [2018-05-11 08:24:11 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely beautiful and couldn't explain my writing process any better. Damn good work here

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to Master-Dungeoneer [2018-05-13 00:50:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! That means quite a lot to me.

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Greekblade937 In reply to BlizzardBlitzer [2018-05-30 13:26:29 +0000 UTC]

It’s beautiful and I really want to create something l

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to Greekblade937 [2018-05-31 21:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.  Create away!

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Spirit-nature [2018-04-28 18:30:43 +0000 UTC]

The writing process as a conflict between the creator of a story and the characters within it...
Well, that's an interesting perspective for storytelling indeed: it reminds me of a phrase I read earlier this week;
"Writing is like being possesed by an idea you're constantly arguing with."

Also, the second story being bigger and more complex than the first could be seen as a representation of the way a writer's skills grow as they keep creating.

All in all, this was quite the enjoyable read, and although you said this tale was more intended for fellow writers than readers, I think it may help people understand how writing feels like.

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to Spirit-nature [2018-05-03 19:06:16 +0000 UTC]

It's a bit of a spin on George Martin's "architect and gardener" writing types.  I find myself to be the latter, and tending to stories does feel like a genuine struggle at times.  It's been a recurring topic with some of my writer friends, and trying to depict it in an allegorical form seemed the best way to convey it to a general audience.

I'm very glad you enjoyed it.  Thank you so much!

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eener9lilly [2018-03-30 06:45:30 +0000 UTC]

wow thats

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to eener9lilly [2018-04-01 02:08:07 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I suppose so.

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MAGEBAD [2018-03-30 06:15:54 +0000 UTC]

Do you like Guns 'N' Roses 

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to MAGEBAD [2018-04-01 02:07:49 +0000 UTC]

Can't say I do.  Years ago I used to listen to them.  In fact, they were my favorite band.  However, I've more or less moved on from that style of music.  Don't own a single one of their songs anymore.

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MAGEBAD In reply to BlizzardBlitzer [2018-04-01 03:03:22 +0000 UTC]

What of music do you listen to now

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to MAGEBAD [2018-04-02 16:35:30 +0000 UTC]

Mostly heavy metal.

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MAGEBAD In reply to BlizzardBlitzer [2018-04-03 10:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Like Slayer

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to MAGEBAD [2018-04-03 19:26:52 +0000 UTC]

In alphabetical order the bands I listen to are as follows: After the Burial, The Agonist, Archspire, As I Lay Dying (Tim is making a comeback, it seems), Asking Alexandria, August Burns Red, Aversions Crown, BABYMETAL, Betraying the Martyrs, a couple Black Dahlia Murder songs, Born of Osiris, Bullet for My Valentine, Children of Bodom, Demon Hunter, The Devil Wears Prada, Evanescence, For Today. Honour Crest, In Flames, Inferi, Irreversible Mechanism, Jeff Loomis, Killswitch Engage, Kronos, Light the Torch, Linkin Park, Lorna Shore, Memphis May Fire, Metallica, Oceans Ate Alaska, Parkway Drive, Pyrithion, Red, Revocation, Rings of Saturn, Shadow of Intent, Shokran, Skillet, Starset, Trivium, Upon a Burning Body, Veil of Maya, Wage War, Whitechapel, Within Temptation, and Wovenwar.  Not all of those are metal, but most of them are.

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LostGryphin [2018-03-30 02:15:46 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD! Very amusing to read.

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to LostGryphin [2018-03-30 03:25:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and thanks!

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Catgirldstr11 [2018-03-29 23:07:02 +0000 UTC]

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to Catgirldstr11 [2018-03-30 03:24:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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modestlobster [2018-03-29 20:40:29 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic =] "For them to fail as he had." is a great line; makes one think... If they fail, does Writer succeed? But if they succeed... does Writer still fail? Great expression of the process; well captured. Thank you for writing it. P.S. I loved "canons of his ship", whether an intentional 'typo' or not!

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to modestlobster [2018-03-29 22:05:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
Oh, good catch.  Did not see that.

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Mmkaay [2018-03-29 20:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to Mmkaay [2018-03-29 22:08:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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FaolSidhe [2018-03-29 18:03:29 +0000 UTC]

Salomon Reinach, a French scholar (19th century) once said that there never were new ideas, only old ones brought back to shining fashion after a long slumber.

Long have I struggled with this desire of something truly new, and it's probably not over yet.

Your words are food for thought. I thank you.

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to FaolSidhe [2018-03-29 18:12:09 +0000 UTC]

There does seem to be some fundamental incapability to make truly new things.  Something doesn't come from nothing.  The best I can do, really, is mesh certain elements together in such a way that it seems new or just has never been done some particular way before, but the components are all familiar.  It can be frustrating.

Thank you as always.

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LindArtz [2018-03-29 14:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful work!!

Congratulations on your much deserved DD! 


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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to LindArtz [2018-03-29 16:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank ye kindly!

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TrashChameleon [2018-03-29 10:26:19 +0000 UTC]

Yes, this story speaks to me. Well done, fellow writer, this story is beautifully unique and well worded.

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to TrashChameleon [2018-03-29 15:42:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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xlntwtch [2018-03-29 07:55:20 +0000 UTC]

This is a fine piece. I couldn't help but think about politics in the US - Writer as President; other characters also fit in. Or get taken out. For now.

Hope you enjoy different interpretations. I also read it like a writer would, which can be a bit frustrating. (:

Congratulations on the DD. I like your story.

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to xlntwtch [2018-03-29 15:42:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.  This was written for other writers to display creative frustration, so it seems to have done as intended.

Thank you again.  It was a pleasant surprise this morning.

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BornWithTheSun [2018-01-04 05:22:19 +0000 UTC]

So late commenting, but I really enjoyed this! Love the imagery of the writer as some sort of vengeful god-- that kind of frustration is very relateable when the storyline just will not go the way you want.

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to BornWithTheSun [2018-01-04 22:58:04 +0000 UTC]

Hey, temporal placement is of no concern to me.  I'm just happy you enjoyed it whenever you read it.  Yeah, this is one of those ones I thought might relate best to other writers, and then we could all sit here and gripe about it.

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BornWithTheSun In reply to BlizzardBlitzer [2018-01-07 19:33:25 +0000 UTC]

I think my favorite part is that the characters are totally at the writer's mercy. I really enjoyed the image of them cowering in fear of the god-like writer up on the mountain.

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to BornWithTheSun [2018-01-12 23:50:46 +0000 UTC]

It's kind of empowering.  It's like that feeling you got as a little kid, when you played pretend either with action figures, dolls, or tying a blanket cape around your neck.
I just liked making the writer extra petulant.  Like how the Greek gods were depicted to be.

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BornWithTheSun In reply to BlizzardBlitzer [2018-01-14 23:24:53 +0000 UTC]

I enjoyed his bad temper as well.

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LaurenIpsome [2017-09-04 16:09:07 +0000 UTC]

You forgot the part about Muse sitting on the shelf in the background, chewing on her restraints and muttering "Needs more sex scenes."

I absolutely love this! It turned out even better than our conversations about it. I think we grind our teeth more than we grind our proverbial gears, hum? It's great work though, my friend. Now.... *gives a sidewise glance out the window toward Story* Where was I....?

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to LaurenIpsome [2017-09-06 00:58:27 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, I don't think I have a muse.

Thank you.  I figured you might enjoy this one.

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LaurenIpsome In reply to BlizzardBlitzer [2017-09-06 18:06:10 +0000 UTC]

I very much did. I hope you write more of this. It's a great introduction to a whole new world.

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ant-under-glass [2017-08-31 11:11:43 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely fantastic piece with wonderful imagery, can't say I've ever read anything quite like this before! 
Definitely very deserving of the feature -- well done!

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to ant-under-glass [2017-09-02 05:43:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.  Those are very strong words.

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Sleyf [2017-08-31 09:41:59 +0000 UTC]

   
Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful (and relatable) story  Be sure to check out the other features sharing the Monthly Round-up!

From the admin of

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to Sleyf [2017-09-02 05:42:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the feature!  It is greatly appreciated.

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Sleyf In reply to BlizzardBlitzer [2017-09-02 06:57:45 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Snivystorm15 [2017-08-28 12:44:40 +0000 UTC]

[Writer vs Storyline...
Gosh, you put it in a story and I understood it completely X'D
Well done, Blizzard ^-^]

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BlizzardBlitzer In reply to Snivystorm15 [2017-08-28 16:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.  You must feel similarly.

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Snivystorm15 In reply to BlizzardBlitzer [2017-08-28 18:40:36 +0000 UTC]

[You're welcome ^^ Yeah, sometimes X'D]

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