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Published: 2012-02-03 05:31:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 4025; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 22
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And it is done!!Thus begins the first chapter of my fancomic,
SUPER SOLDIER CELESTIAL MOON.
I am still very new to the whole process of drawing comics, so any feedback and constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!!
Updates will hopefully be once or twice a week, either on a Thursday or a Sunday.
Soon to follow (because I'm too excited and Deviantart is mainly where I lurk), I will be posting this story on other comic sites, such as smacjkeeves.com and on tumblr as well. Ideally, I'd love to get its own website up as well, and I will continue to keep potential readers posted in my journal, soon to be updated this week when it is all done.
Thank you so much for reading, commenting, and faving!!
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Comments: 41
I really like the idea of a modern, western version of Sailor Moon.
My only critique is that it is not "astronomists" but "astronomers."
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Ah, thank you! Storywriting is definitely not my strong point so things like this really help!
Glad to hear you like the idea! I can't wait to continue it, I do have a plot for it and everything, I just haven't had time to draw the pages! Hopefully when school ends and summer vacation begins I will have a little more time to dedicate myself to it.
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I look forward to more! I also LOVE the hairdo that you gave Selene on the next page. LOVE IT!
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Thanks!! If you've got an email, note me so that when I update I can send you the link 
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PLEASE DO!
My email addy is just my username here @gmail.com
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Awesome!! I should be able to pick up again sometime in the summer - I do have stuff planned, but I just haven't been able to sit down and draw it / color it / letter it / edit it LOL in between school projects and other art.
Feel free to keep in touch regardless! I'll send you a note with my email in it, we can keep corresponding if you'd like!
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I've recently been re-integrating myself into Sailor Moon, with the re-release of the manga series, and completely happened upon your art by a lucky accident.
I saw your design for Super Sailor Moon and absolutely loved it! and I've read both your pages, I'm completely digging how you draw them in the "western" style and I am beside my fangirly self with joy for the rest of this!
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YEP!
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Jadeite, you sexy beast, you know how to interest a lady. While still at first page.
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Looking good!
Not much to constructively-criticize for now. I have some thoughts, but I'll save that for the next page, once I see if *that* becomes a pattern or it's just done for this particular scene/purpose..
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Worry not, I'll be the last one to criticize anything strictly drawing-related. That's entirely subjective and should only be looked at in the way it serves the context.
I didn't even notice the fingernail it before you pointed it out. So much for that
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GAABLLAGGH LOL
Thank you 
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...I never though I could think of something cute and a whip at the same time, but now I know!!!
AND IT'S ENCOURAGING!!!!
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OH DEAR
Now I'm really worried!!! o___o
I'd love for your constructive criticism. I completely idolize your work, and would take anything you said into immediate consideration. Thank you so much for checking out my page!!
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Patience, young blobble....patience.
Nothing to be worried about.
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*BEAMS*
I feel like a young grasshopper!!! Now I feel like eating rice.
Okay 
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Aha, aha, looks interesting. Will definitely follow this!
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welcome! Please let me know when the next page/portion of the comic is done, I can't wait to read it!
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Sure! I'll send you a note!!
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GREAT! I really appreciate it!
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Looks good so far. I would try out more dynamic panelling though. Give the eyes something interesting to follow as the story moves down the page. I could show you an example from my comic if you're interested.
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