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Published: 2006-01-20 15:14:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 134; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description the dead eyes that follow m
everywhere i go
the manic laughter
that stays inside my head
the bloody corpses
that haunt my every dream
the high pitched laughter
the eyes dead and dull
black and forgotten
red and unforgiving
the nails growing long
a scream
then...
everything is peacefully gone
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Comments: 8

six-ugly [2006-01-21 04:31:25 +0000 UTC]

I dun much like macabre. but good one, this is.

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bloodtaintedink In reply to six-ugly [2006-01-24 01:16:57 +0000 UTC]

teheheh. you sound like yoda. yoda kicks ass
but thank you very much!!!!!! WEEEEEE GOOD REVIEWS TODAY!

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six-ugly In reply to bloodtaintedink [2006-01-24 07:46:29 +0000 UTC]

yoda is teh shit

a pleasure it is.

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bloodtaintedink In reply to six-ugly [2006-01-24 16:09:30 +0000 UTC]

tehehehe.

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Godfromabove [2006-01-20 15:35:17 +0000 UTC]

nice poem!
erm i will make one small point even though i think you will notice it instantly on your first line youve written "follow m"
lol just thought i would let you know that (and i make that mistake alot aswell!) -(shakes fist at keyboard)-
very nice idea of slowly decaying death!

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bloodtaintedink In reply to Godfromabove [2006-01-24 01:17:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you. i always make mistakes though...but thanks for pointing it out to mua.

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Godfromabove In reply to bloodtaintedink [2006-01-24 16:48:12 +0000 UTC]

lol we all make mistakes so dont worry about it! but then again why was the spell checker invented (wait a min that cant spell many words write either!!)
lol thanks for the read twas good

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bloodtaintedink In reply to Godfromabove [2006-01-25 02:48:50 +0000 UTC]

lol....i don't think very well...heheh...i don't have much of common sense

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