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bloodyteardrops — A Knife Through the Heart
Published: 2004-06-30 05:42:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 84; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 11
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Description A knife through the heart

A knife is slowly driven through me where my heart once was
My flesh tears and I feel the blood trickle down my shirt
the blade slowly emerges through my back as my tormentor laughs
is this the sick pleasure you want?

I have been holding this in all along
now my heart and soul is slowly creepng across the floor
My memories...joys...anger...depression...
are now blended together into one puddle of life

The puddle now becomes an ocean of crimson emotion
drowning all who are brave enough to approach it
I have been overwhelmed and I am slowly drowning
breathing in my toxic life I am quickly overtaken

I then experience all of these emotions that have been held in for so long
the hurt... the loss... the pain.. and then the joy
They are a part of me ... I am whole again
I take them all in slowly...gently...savoring each one... happy to have released them

I exhale and once more feel the pain in my chest
I smile and realize that this is part of life
Everyone goes through it... but some need more help than others
the knife is slowly pulled from my chest...
leaving behind only a faint reminder of what I have felt...
something I will remember forever...
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Comments: 4

x4everntearsx [2004-06-30 05:50:43 +0000 UTC]

oooh i love it

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KMaree [2004-06-30 05:45:13 +0000 UTC]

beautiful piece, and i love the way you worded that, some need more help than others....even though some help cant be found in others, you are still so sooo right on that.

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bloodyteardrops In reply to KMaree [2004-06-30 17:36:51 +0000 UTC]

Aww.... thank you so much. This is my first deviation and i wasn't so sure about it. Thank you!

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KMaree In reply to bloodyteardrops [2004-06-30 17:42:44 +0000 UTC]

couldnt have kicked it off better

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