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Published: 2007-02-15 00:19:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 4723; Favourites: 147; Downloads: 11
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Description Walking through the rain
With my heart full of pain
You are in my dreams at night
You are always in my mind
Why did you I have to run and hide
It was all I felt inside
And now this feeling won’t go away
And don’t leave me since that day
I’m feeling the strain
I’m holding the pain
My shadows are not new
My soul is slipping in two
You know my deepest sin
Fill me now like the wind
I’ve walked into a cave
And I’ve touched my grave
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Comments: 33

stuckinthemedium [2012-11-26 06:29:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm crying on the inside...

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xxuracuttiepiexx [2012-06-02 04:20:27 +0000 UTC]

=O that's just =O

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raul6666 [2012-05-29 18:00:05 +0000 UTC]

while I was it the only emotion I could feel was sorrow

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Vampiredarkness4 [2012-05-28 07:12:31 +0000 UTC]

very good!

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ChaosDeLunatic [2012-05-13 17:35:32 +0000 UTC]

This poem made me cry the first times i read it..its so...perfect...it describes my life...even when i think im happy...Thank you for living and making this beautiful poem..

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DarkJanet [2012-04-22 01:24:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm in pain. He broke my heart and soul. I hate Seiryuga

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cheshirequeen13 [2011-08-03 02:23:19 +0000 UTC]

I like the whole touching the grave thing, its almost like ur in so much pain that youcan see ur own funeral unfolding.

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soda4artists [2011-08-03 01:37:35 +0000 UTC]

really good reminds me of my poem: [link]
I don't know why but it does

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darklinkluver101 [2011-06-17 20:08:07 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is truly deep. I love it

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brokenheartedloser12 [2008-10-26 01:48:51 +0000 UTC]

Could have used more emotion. Way more.

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Badgurl4lyf [2008-09-02 17:43:11 +0000 UTC]

that was lovely...

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Kechake [2008-07-17 18:09:09 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful.

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BloodyZone In reply to Kechake [2008-07-18 18:14:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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abcdefghijklmnopq123 [2008-05-28 05:17:20 +0000 UTC]

i Wish i was that good

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darlingdoesnotsuitme [2008-02-10 04:38:31 +0000 UTC]

very good writing

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Clouded-by-Hatred [2007-11-02 08:53:31 +0000 UTC]

It's beautifully written...Love is really another reason to get hurt anyways...Good job...I wish you would make another poem or drwaing in a short time.Good day to you.





+Enjoy every moment with the music...+

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xhatexmex [2007-04-10 20:53:04 +0000 UTC]

your poetry makes my heart smile...

it is so beautiful <3 ^^

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BloodyZone In reply to xhatexmex [2007-04-10 21:06:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks & so is your comment.

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xhatexmex In reply to BloodyZone [2007-04-10 23:04:40 +0000 UTC]

nah...my comment was just honest...

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LamiaFemina [2007-04-07 23:57:15 +0000 UTC]

Come to me my dark prince for you, but come closer I will give you my

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BloodyZone In reply to LamiaFemina [2007-04-08 21:10:29 +0000 UTC]

My sweet witch you are so kind to me.

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restricted213 [2007-02-18 00:25:56 +0000 UTC]



Very emotional, hun.

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BloodyZone In reply to restricted213 [2007-02-18 01:47:15 +0000 UTC]

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restricted213 In reply to BloodyZone [2007-03-02 20:53:40 +0000 UTC]

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Drusilla14 [2007-02-17 00:35:16 +0000 UTC]

Beautifuly written I can see that you have passion for this piece. you did a beautiful piece and great work too add too if that is ok :0

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BloodyZone In reply to Drusilla14 [2007-02-17 01:16:31 +0000 UTC]

It's full of passion.. yes.
Thanks.
It's ok, off course. Thanks.

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Drusilla14 In reply to BloodyZone [2007-02-17 01:17:31 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome hon

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Cribby [2007-02-15 12:25:40 +0000 UTC]

!!!

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BloodyZone In reply to Cribby [2007-02-15 23:42:08 +0000 UTC]

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thequillmaster [2007-02-15 00:32:14 +0000 UTC]

Poema cheio de emocao! So e pena o tema!

Mas nao desesperes! Se se foi embora, doa quanto doer, e melhor saber mais cedo que mais tarde. Espera e vais ver! Ainda vais arranjar alguem que valha mesmo a pena.

Eu esperei 10 anos ate encontrar a minha cara metade! Mas valeu a pena!

Animo!

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BloodyZone In reply to thequillmaster [2007-02-15 23:40:38 +0000 UTC]

Quem espera sempre alcanca.. Ja dizia nao sei quem, nao eh?

Obrigado pelo comentario e pelas palavras.

Eu esperarei sempre.

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thequillmaster In reply to BloodyZone [2007-02-15 23:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Bem dito!

E estaremos aqui para festejar o dia

V

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BloodyZone In reply to thequillmaster [2007-02-17 01:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Obrigado.

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