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Blue-F-Phoenix β€” First piece in England

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apples-ishness [2016-07-04 13:39:03 +0000 UTC]

This is the kind of painting that really draws you in and it seems like you could stare into the character's eyes for all eternity. There is definitely a sense that the character is trying to tell you something - perhaps she is distrustful, skeptical or distressed. The point is you don't know what she is thinking, and that is why you could stare back at her for a long time, wondering what she is thinking.

In terms of improvement I have a few suggestions:
- There is so much wonderful detail in the character's face that other areas that have less detail seem unfinished. For example, her hair and the scarf. The folds in the scarf appear rushed and there does not seem to be much definition in the fold shapes. As for the hair, adding more highlights and hair strands might liven it up.
- Overall the shading is very good, but some areas could do with a little more darkening. For example where the hairline and the face meet there is very little defined shading. Also, the eye socket could do with a little more darkening especially from the eyebrow downward. As it is the eyebrows seem a little floaty because they do not cast a very strong shadow.

These are only suggestions and only intended to help add to an already fantastic painting.

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Blue-F-Phoenix In reply to apples-ishness [2016-07-04 16:12:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the detailed comment. I really appreciate it and will take this into account

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Foxy-Knight [2016-07-04 10:24:39 +0000 UTC]

I am not sure if this was intentional but for some reason I am reminded of the story the Omen. It's probably just me stereotyping because of the red eyes and that's hardly fair of me. Onto the non-stereotype review, I LOVE IT! Sorry that was a little forward, what I meant to say is I am very impressed by the technique. I have worked with many digital artists during my time on DA and I have always been impressed most by the technique which mirrors actual paintings, it adds another layer of realism which in my eyes brings the image more life and in this case it feels like those piercing red eyes are looking right into my soul (I'm not still thinking of the Omen I swear).

The subject of the portrait has a sort of paradoxical look of predatory innocence meaning even though I think I'm looking at a child those eyes automatically make me think of danger, which is a direct class of the two visual elements and I'm a big fan of stuff like that. So this digital portrait really stands out to me both in realism and in the feelings it evokes, very nice work and I would love to see more!
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Blue-F-Phoenix In reply to Foxy-Knight [2016-07-04 10:29:05 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! Thank you so much for that comment I'm honoured. You are so spot on. I didn't have Omen in mind but I was thinking of a little girl with very dark scary secrets. Nothing in particular but something chilly. This is also the style I prefer (brush painted feel), so I'm glad you like it

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Foxy-Knight In reply to Blue-F-Phoenix [2016-07-04 10:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Part of me was thinking the omen and another part was thinking Vincent Valentine from the Final Fantasy VII franchise (for the red eyes). And it is a good piece, glad I was able to spot the meaning

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sefira101 [2016-07-03 03:10:23 +0000 UTC]

I love the detail you put into this! The way you did a 'painted yet realistic style' give's it a unique look. My favorite part is the contrast in the scarf and eyes. The bright red really set's it off and gives a definite vocal point. All in all, great job!

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Blue-F-Phoenix In reply to sefira101 [2016-07-03 07:45:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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sefira101 In reply to Blue-F-Phoenix [2016-07-03 13:43:01 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!~

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StrangelyShiny [2016-07-02 21:37:29 +0000 UTC]

I love black and red color schemes. They just look so chilling, yet there's a creepy elegance behind them.

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Blue-F-Phoenix In reply to StrangelyShiny [2016-07-03 07:46:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Shining-Scribe Come back soonΒ 

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StrangelyShiny In reply to Blue-F-Phoenix [2016-07-03 07:48:47 +0000 UTC]

My hope it that my semi-absence (I'll still be on at times ) will be done by the 7th or the 8th. ^^

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HuesoPapi [2016-07-02 16:53:18 +0000 UTC]

This looks really nice! I love the detail and the expression

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Blue-F-Phoenix In reply to HuesoPapi [2016-07-02 17:31:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Glamra [2016-07-02 14:19:28 +0000 UTC]



I really like the way you shade, the color choices and her expression.

My only problem is that the shoulders look too narrow compared to her head and it looks like she doesn't have a neck. But maybe it was a stylistic choice. So feel free to ignore this.

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Blue-F-Phoenix In reply to Glamra [2016-07-02 17:32:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm not going to ignore it, but yes it was a conscious decision to make her look small. My intention was to make it more of an illustration than a realistic portrait. Thank you for your comment though Β 

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JSenpaiDaNinja [2016-07-01 15:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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Blue-F-Phoenix In reply to JSenpaiDaNinja [2016-07-01 19:06:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks This one was a quick yet really fun and satisfying piece.

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Atariakana [2016-06-30 20:00:25 +0000 UTC]

Lovely shading on the face. I really love the painterly feel ^_^

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Blue-F-Phoenix In reply to Atariakana [2016-06-30 20:02:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I do prefer the "painted" feel more than "realistic" feel, so I'm glad you like that too

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JMFAnimations8 [2016-06-30 18:03:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I feel like she's staring into my soul, Awesome!Β 

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Blue-F-Phoenix In reply to JMFAnimations8 [2016-06-30 18:07:55 +0000 UTC]

Yay. I wanted to make her intense and a tad creepy

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JMFAnimations8 In reply to Blue-F-Phoenix [2016-06-30 18:15:07 +0000 UTC]

Well you succeeded. Impressive work my friend.Β 

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Blue-F-Phoenix In reply to JMFAnimations8 [2016-06-30 18:16:30 +0000 UTC]

Awww thank you so much Music to my jet lagged ears.Β 

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HappyMasky [2016-06-30 13:42:19 +0000 UTC]

The eyes are just perfect :3

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Blue-F-Phoenix In reply to HappyMasky [2016-06-30 18:07:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! That's the fun part

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CupcakeSlays [2016-06-29 19:54:22 +0000 UTC]

It's lovely!!

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Blue-F-Phoenix In reply to CupcakeSlays [2016-06-29 19:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you CupcakeSlays

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CupcakeSlays In reply to Blue-F-Phoenix [2016-06-29 19:59:50 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, keep it up

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