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islandofsodorfilms [2017-01-17 16:42:36 +0000 UTC]
is the ghost of Christmas present Bertram?
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Ry-BluePony1 [2016-12-29 02:03:48 +0000 UTC]
Creepy and very good! I bet the ghost of Christmas yet to come kinda looks like Lady, well she was faceless
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ThomasAnime [2016-12-27 05:36:39 +0000 UTC]
This is a great chapter you wrote. It truly inspired Duncan to change.
However, I wonder what caused Duncan's supposed demise in the 'future' segment? Was he in the same accident that destroyed Luke?
I believe the Ghost of Christmas Present is Bertrum, but I have no idea who portrayed the Ghost of Christmas Yet to Come. Do you know who portrayed that Spirit?
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BlueEngineLiz6 In reply to ThomasAnime [2016-12-27 05:55:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
I guess I didn't write that part out as well. But the thin controller was probably sick of Duncan's attitude that he scrapped him. Is there anything I can do to change this part?
The ghost of the future is suppose to represent smudger more when he reveals himself.
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ThomasAnime In reply to BlueEngineLiz6 [2016-12-27 10:18:08 +0000 UTC]
Since this chapter has the Narrow Gauge Engines and the Thin Controller talk about the demise of both Luke and Duncan , this seems to imply their demise occured simultaneously or within a short time of each other, so I'd like to think the upcoming accident that the Ghost of Christmas Present warned about resulted in the destruction of both Luke and Duncan, with Luke's being regarded as a tragic accident while Duncan's was regarded as karma from not listening to advice.
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BlueEngineLiz6 In reply to TheLOKRailfanDA [2016-12-27 04:31:38 +0000 UTC]
Well I guess I didn't described it enough but Duncan was scrapped because of his behavior... Hmm... anything I could do to fix it? Also, did you figure out who the ghost of present is for it certainly isn't duke.
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BlueEngineLiz6 In reply to TheLOKRailfanDA [2016-12-27 04:54:49 +0000 UTC]
ok.
maybe, but Duncan wasn't there to save Luke. in the original story, scrooge died in bed on Christmas day. probably if he didn't change his ways when the spirits tell him.
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