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Bluejayartist β Jay's Path pg. 127
Published: 2015-09-08 03:08:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 2017; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 3
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hey i'm trying to get back into updating on time and it's monday so here ya go(i'm trying out this new thing for dialogue, is it alright??)
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That's right Jay, don't let my son miss the story.
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I dont have a problem with it, but if you want you could try making the speech bubbles slightly transparent. if you can 
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I like it, but I feel it covers the area and it's a bit... Distracting, almost.
Other than that this is perfect
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ahaaa flash is so cute in the first panel!Β
and I really like these speech bubbles!
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Flash's face on frame two is amazing xD
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i love the text much better handwritten
so curvy
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Hey, I'd like to do some page redraws of Jay's path. Would you be uncomfortable if I redrew my fav pages?
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Not at all, I always love seeing jay's path fanart!
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Alrighty~ cool~
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uh oh, cinnamon roll mama is mad.
(I like the speech bubbles a lot! I find it much easier to read the text.)
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ah i actually really like the new speech bubbles, they're easier to read than the small text!!Β
also omg that last panel is adorableΒ
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