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Published: 2012-06-25 14:55:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 435; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 2
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Practicing perspective.Comments on where I could improve appreciated
A sketch of Crowfeather on Windclan teritory.
Warriors: Erin Hunter
Art: Me
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Comments: 15
You might need to work on the nose size, it is rather large for a cat, and the legs seem too far apart to me, but apart from those anatomical mistakes the perspective is fine.
I think you may have missed out the fifth toe (the 'thumb' or whatever it's called) on the 'right' leg (this pictures left) but then again at this momement in time I can't remember if cats have that or not I know wolves do
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Thanks for the advice
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If you really want someone to tell you how to impove, I would say make the noses a bit smaller, and the paws a bit smaller. Other than that, I absoloutly love it! Especially the tail and the eyes. . .
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Thanks. I can never get paws the right size, and his nose is definitely too big.
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wow, this is really really good... one thing that could be improved is that the tail is a little too big...other thank that you did a fabulous job and tha paws are reallly really good too!!!
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Thanks, it is pretty big for a Windclan cat.
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yup, that what i was tinking, but still good job
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