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BlueSoulber — Commission --- AFter Battle Kiss
Published: 2013-12-16 03:42:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 689; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 4
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A long over due commission. Spent the entire day on it, hope you like it!!Cara and Brom belong to
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Haha I really like the muted colors! I have such a horrid problem with too many colors. XD
Also... KISS YOU GUYS ALREADY. This feels like one of those scenes where you are on your seat just waiting for it. XD
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omg that means a lot thank you!!!
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The colors are stunning. I also love their expressions and the background, and the anatomy looks well done.
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aww thank you so very much!!
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Very vibrant and eye catching, the shading is perfect
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This is such an emotive and stunning piece, I love the way you draw expressions! ^-^
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I enjoy the colors, line variations, and the atmosphere of this piece. It's wonderfully done!
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I love the colours! They look so warm and glowing. I really like the gold texture on her sleeve.
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thank you soooo very much!!!
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They looks so cute together, love the colors and the lines, looks really like a page for an album !
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There are two things I would like to add to help you improve in these kind of pieces.
1. the woman isn't looking at the man, she's looking at something out of the picture, behind him.
There are some good tutorials about eye focus here, but can't really find them atm :/
In short, they eyes should be closer together so they would look to something right in front of her and not completely to the side of her.
They guy is still standing in front of her, isn't he.
If so, then they guy's head shot be a bit 3/4, but more towards the girl, so you could see more of the back of his head.
About the line art (the second part of the critique)
You have wonderful lighting in this piece. And it would be nice if you could blend it in into the outlining itself too. If you have a piece with all brown tones in it, it might be fun using dark brown line art. And when you've got something highlighted like the hair, don't be affraid to use alost white lines there.
I hope this helped.
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Yes, thank you that was a well written critique.
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This is a gorgeous piece- I love the tenderness in their expression and the detail on her bodice is lovely! The pose is really intimate and I love their flirtatious expression and their 'almost' kiss
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aww thank you for the lovely comment!!
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I love your romantic pieces so much!
looks like he went through a really rough time! D: he really deserves a kiss!
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