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Published: 2005-01-10 23:49:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Description Millions of crystals
Frost on the trees
A black and white picture,
Or so it seems

Fall on my face
I won't cool you off
I am also frozen
The time has stopped

There are no sounds
It's peaceful and grey
In this cold blanket I lay
I enjoy it while I can
For I will be in the midst of Hell
In just another day.
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Comments: 1

Snowdevil [2005-01-11 07:34:37 +0000 UTC]

I like it. It's all really excellent but it doesn't flow well from beginning to end. lines are good, but parts are choppy. BUT, all i really care about is meaning, and i love the way you portrayed it. Also you.

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