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BlueStormGeo — Chidori- Through It All
Published: 2011-07-01 05:15:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1377; Favourites: 76; Downloads: 18
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Quite frankly I don't get it either.My colorless blender went dry on me so it was a challenge getting the sky This blended. Also there's other markers I need to replace. Geez....And I was hoping to maybe try commissions again.
Er...the ground appears to dip under the walkway.
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Technically it's the fifth
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Oh wow I need to catch up badly on your work~ This background and perspective caught my eye and might I say it's explosive! The sky, with your supposed lack of blending, looks fluid as if you did use one. Very nice outward spiral effect I can only imagine how many colors you used to make it look perfect. Chidori's form could use some adjusting but you already got enough critique on the anatomy as far as I can see from the responses you received 
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Sankyu! Yep this picture has its positives and negatives. The positive being the colors and overall perspective and the negative being her form. All and all though I think its a great pic
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Hehe I think it's a great picture too 
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cool perspective. But the body structure is a bit too wonky. I know it's in perspective and you want some foreground on the feet, which I find cool. But there's a limit on how far you can exaggerate on a character. The character should be taller, considering how long the legs are. The left arm should be more tilted to the right (that way --->). The hands are too detailed when compared with the rest of the character's style. As my Animation instructors used to say all the time "keep it simple". The hands are also too large for the body and need more structure. They're a bit too flat. The coloring is pretty fantastic, considering it's done traditionally. I really love the way you colored the bricks and did the explosion in the BG. And the pathway is also very well colored. It really stands out, and I think it's the part that attracted my eye towards this piece. The checkered texture on the pathway fits nicely to this piece, since it has a surreal feel to it. So, it was a very good decision on your part. Nice work on the shoes too and the shadows on the ground. One more thing, before I forget. I know you can't go back on any of this, but in future projects...try not getting two very similar colors next to each other when trying to separate two elements from each other. There's only one spot I've noticed it...Where the explosion is, there's a similar red on the character's shirt where the bust is and it's really hard to separate these two apart. I had to look quite a few times to know exactly where one started and the other ended.
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Thanks. I was waiting on a critique like this. Perspective is tricky after all. And you're right, as I was coloring near the bust I thought "Gah...similar colors too close." I'll have to be more careful. Thanks again for such detailed feedback
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you're welcome. I like getting cc too, and most people are scared to give it.
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I think everything blended out nicely. There's enough blending to make it cohesive and it still retains a nice texture. I really always love to look at your colored works, especially your markers. You do a bang-up job of picking out interesting colors. Your eye gets drawn around and around the back. The interesting perspective and composition combined with that rounded blending technique on the sky, it really grabs your eye and sucks it in as if it's traveling on a spiral.
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Ohhh You think so? Why thanks. You're picking up on parts of the picture that I hadn't really noticed myself until now
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It's neato. The eye goes around and around.
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I like it!
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nice effect with that leg and his body
i like it ;;D
(bad english)
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Love the use of techniques in this. Beautiful work!
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Epic perspective is epic. I still can't do people in perspective very well. Buildings, fine. People, .
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Yeah it can be a hassle but it looks great when you pull it off. I've gotten better at it just by drawing Geo.
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Yesserie. Good job. (^_^)b
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I know other people have already said it, but the perspective in this in fantastic
Amazing job
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Yeah, I'm seriously impressed... I hope you realise how far you've come art-wise since I started watching you. It's really amazing and I can't wait to see your progress in the future
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Daww thanks
Amazing what you can do after a little time
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Epic. Color scheme is awesome and trail to me adds a traditional fantasy/wonderland look. Nicely done.
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Thanks.
Wow...you left a normal comment for once. I'm shocked
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Haha. Excuse me for focusing and not being random for one comment.
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Surprisingly I can't be upset over trollface. Well played.
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wow fantastic job on the coloring, it just pops out at you. And the perspective is awesome too!
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Thanks! The perspective was the most fun I think
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np! Perspective is a bother for me
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Yeah it takes some getting used to. Even in this I see some things I could've done better
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still good though heh are you self taught?
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