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Published: 2003-07-21 04:31:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 4395; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 279
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Description (warning: very VERY long character bio ahead. Please read at your own discretion.)
Name: Kougawa Akebi (Red River, Scarlet Fire)
Age: 14
D.O.B: July 16th
Hair/Eyes: Red/Green w/ flecks of gold
Identifiable traits: birthmark beneath each eye (inherited from mother), 2 scars running down left cheek, earring the shape of a jackal�fs head. Is loud, usually brash, stubborn & flamboyant. Likes her teammates, training, baseball (esp. practicing her fastballs + curveballs), sleeping, milk and eggs. Dislikes feeling weak, walking away from a fight, when girls are bullied, denied from a fight or not taken seriously because of their gender.
Abilities:
Hotarubi (Firefly Ember): heating up small stones (carved til very sharp/picked up frm the ground) in her hands til they glow red, then throwing them at the opponent.
Fuuga (Wind Fang): incorporated w/ her Rouga (Wolf Fang, a glove w/ claws she wears in combat). Concentrates chakra on the tips of each finger til it creates a wind fast enough to slice.
Tettsui (Hammer): putting her hands together and bringing them down on the ground w/ immense strength, causing pieces of rock/earth/pavement (many X�fs heavier than force emitted) to fly up at the enemy
Raidenren (Lightning Chain): coils it around enemy and electrocute w/ lightning jutsu, or wound w/ the hook at the end
Curveball/Fastball: named after her baseball throws. Concentrates chakra into a swirling ball and throwing it at the enemy (similar to Jiraiya�fs Rasengan) Can time/will her chakra to change shape midthrow (eg. Into s/th like a 2edged fuuma shuriken) Can also set the chakra ball in flames w/ a fire jutsu
Advanced Bloodline: Has an A.B. ability to control her own blood (and nobody else�fs) and will it into any shape/state. Her bandages cover the scars obtained frm A.B. training, and frequent loss of blood + pref. in using jutsus that take a lot of stamina require her to rest a lot & obtain iron + protein frm foods (eg. Milk & eggs)
Sekketsu Senbon (Red Blood Throwing Needles): Willing her blood into senbon and throwing them @ opponents
Sekketsu Koushyou (Red Blood Crimson Tide, follow-up move frm RBTN): willing her blood senbon back into liquid form and sending it against the blood current in the enemy�fs blood vessels. Causes rupture of vessels &/or damage of the heart chambers
Dokumyaku Koushyou (Poison Vein Crimson Tide, alt. follow-up move) sprinkling mixture of specially made poison + mild gunpowder onto blood b4 throwing senbons. Rest of procedures identical to above jutsu. (often guarantees immediate death)

Although she is female, Akebi carries herself off as a boy, and most of the village knows her as that except for her teammates, close friends and sensei. She can�ft stand the fact that girls are seen as naturally inferior to guys. In order to achieve her fullest potential, she cannot afford to have male rivals (whether in matches or training) hold themselves back in order to spare a girl �gmercy�h. Her biggest ambition is to ultimately become a jounin and join the anbu team, and most of all, surpass the abilities of her mother, Hibana.
Her parents were both anbu, and Hibana left the anbu team in order to take care of and train her daughter. She respected and loved both her parents, esp. her mother. Hibana once told her �g I train you to be not a woman or a man. I train you to be a shinobi.�h From her mother, Akebi inherited the philosophy that male and female can be equal in strength. Thus, Akebi receives rigorous training everyday. But her mother is sparing in teaching her Advanced Bloodline jutsus as they are risky to execute and deadly if overused. Nvtheless, Akebi didn�ft question her mother�fs decision. Once, the anbu team was sent to an enemy village for a mission, and several members, all A.B bearers, were captured, Akebi�fs father included. The anbu team was ordered not to rescue their teammates until the village�fs ploy had been fully rooted out. It turned out that, in order to gain absolute power over the village, the enemy planned to either seize control of Raigakure�fs A.B bearers or wipe them out by brainwashing and dispatching the captured anbu on an assault on the village. 2 weeks after the mission, Akebi�fs father attacked the Kougawa household (hence akebi�fs scars). While she held off her husband, Hibana told Akebi to wait for her at the baseball court and gave her daughter her jackal earring (Hibana was the �gjackal�h in her anbu team. She wore the earring even after she quit) as a vouch that she would meet her there. It was not Hibana who came to meet her, but her sensei (who happens to be hibana�fs best friend. Ex-lover? Speculative XP) who brought her the news of her mother�fs death. Akebi turned her sorrow into hate, hate toward her mother for breaking her promise, and her inner pain fuelled her will to become strong. From that day onward, she thought of her mother as weak and vowed to become stronger than her mother, a woman, could ever be. She declared herself a man and trained furiously in extreme taijutsu, various high-chakra ninjutsu and A.B jutsu.

Only after the Chuunin Exams did her sensei decide it was due time to tell her the full details of her mother�fs death (to prevent her from further straining herself. She was hospitalized for excessive blood loss in executing all her A.B jutsus during the exam). That day 4 yrs ago, sensei left Akebi at the baseball court to aid Hibana after he found out frm Akebi abt the assault. When he got there, Hibana had managed to subdue the aggressor but was also near death due to overuse of A.B jutsus. Hibana decided, she was going to die with her husband, as his wife. She asked sensei to keep the details from Akebi til the right time arrives, and finally, she executed a self-destruct explosion jutsu which sent the entire house in flames. After Akebi found out about this, she was deeply moved and regretted all the hateful thoughts she had abt her mother in the past. She declared that from then on, she would strive to become a strong woman, just like her mother, Kougawa Hibana. (thus breaking the news that she had been female all along ^^;

*braincramps and dies*
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Comments: 18

alleemaria [2013-12-16 19:12:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow... Nice character^^

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IrukaAnbu44 [2008-02-14 03:41:17 +0000 UTC]

nice style!

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NarutosGirl93 [2006-06-05 03:19:47 +0000 UTC]

Wow..awsome! *brain dies from overuse* Awsome story too.

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Keioseth [2006-05-09 03:21:56 +0000 UTC]

very nice, I love the poses!

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pinali [2004-07-30 18:02:33 +0000 UTC]

Now that is an awesome original design. :3 Kudos to ya!

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razorwirepuppet [2003-07-25 23:43:33 +0000 UTC]

That character kicks arse. CRACKAPOW! It'd be cool to have all those powers, I'd heat up some rocks and throw them at people I don't like, and when I bleed I could turn it into some kickass fountain work. lol.

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lildevilchick [2003-07-22 21:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, cool lokin nin. I luv the colorin. Good luck in the contest.

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farris [2003-07-22 15:34:40 +0000 UTC]

neat-o char!
Methinks your char is the best lightning-nin. ^_^

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crazi8s [2003-07-22 13:21:18 +0000 UTC]

cool I likes it u and neondragon damn such a hard decision to make now good luck to u both now!

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killermuffin [2003-07-21 18:23:46 +0000 UTC]

wow!! 8D This is awesome! Very creative abilities and history. And her design is AWESOME!! DD good luck! x3

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mangacat [2003-07-21 13:44:01 +0000 UTC]

YOU KILL ME! And Sen too, BUT ME MORE *DIES ALL OVER THE PLACE*

*cough*

But seriously, I love her! I mean the bg stuff isn't too overdone you know? XB Major Traumatic Events that take place, instead of making her dark and angsty, make her more... lol crazy/driven, which in my opinion is loads better than dark and angsty when concerning oricharas. =;;__;;= and she gets uber awsome killer attacks. YARGHSDF, you make me wanna rewrite my chara bio (I wonder if that's allowed?)

hahaha, your style here looks very Kishimoto! I'm glad my nin's not going up against yours.

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akichin [2003-07-21 12:23:04 +0000 UTC]

Waaiii~~ welcome back! Akebi-chan is like, so totally cool!
It's especially nice how we get to see more of the character since there're 3 shots of her. ^^ Character design is so spiffy!! And the chain... *dies* The blood looks nice and erm.. bloody. as usual.
And the bio.... well developed, very. ^^

*goes clapping for Akebi-chan. X3*

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frostious [2003-07-21 09:57:50 +0000 UTC]

*tacklehugs* you're BACK!
er, um, anyway. major WOWness, where do you all get your ideas from? shouldn't your heads, like, burst or something. o_O in either case, she is MAD AWESOME, one of the best (if not the best) original submissions i've seen. the story/background is wonderful, her jutsus are mad imaginative and scary (*hides isoshi*), and the drawing... uwaaah, the drawing... *diesdiesdies* why are you SO DAMN GOOD?! >_O her hair, her clothes, her face, her weapons - they're all so gorgeous and unique i can't help but be jealous! i love the idea of the kanji "river" on her back, that is so cool. i can't stop oogling at the chain on her waist, that is so dang detailed. O_O

blahblahblah, i talk too much - all that rambling could be shortened up to three words:

I - LOVE - IT! instant , plus you definitely have my vote! ^___^

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saturndewicked [2003-07-21 09:50:19 +0000 UTC]

aaaa... sou da ne. a no hi itta no... ^________^ welcome back (congrats on surviving the plane). interesting character you've got there, especially on the blood one.

it reminds me of one of the fics i've read, gw, about this tribe (to which heero belongs) that paints shapes of weapons onto their body using their (magical) ancestors' blood, so that the blood tattoos can be 'taken out' to be used as weapons. profficient users can move their tattoos around their bodies at will... it's an interesting concept, so i was wondering if you have any interest in sketching someone like that out

you know, that 'girl dress as boy' thing is so you ^^;; i was wondering why it was a boy... until i read the bio. eh, she's straight?

deshi

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skorchedutopia [2003-07-21 05:35:06 +0000 UTC]

You've got my vote, kiddo. ^-^

Quite some thought you've put into this. Great stuff.

Meow.
~The Notorious Miss Amanda

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crackfairy [2003-07-21 04:56:52 +0000 UTC]

I love it...I'd write more...but I talk to you by AIM already anyhow...

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cqb [2003-07-21 04:53:48 +0000 UTC]

Hey this is an awesome character design- both artisticly and descriptively, all her techniques and well thought out and cool as hell! :3 All the blood jutsus are top notch!

Kickass nin

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bruceleewannabe [2003-07-21 04:48:54 +0000 UTC]

First of all.. WELCOME BAAAAAACCKK!!!

Wow. Great story! You really got some character there. I mean.. she's solid. ^^ And can definitely kick Sammy's ass. THERE! She should like Sammy cuz he's a weak male! Woowoo!
and right on the deadline too
Crap, i forgot to talk about the drawing again.. o.o; That's coo! she kinda reminds me of Naruto ^^ Maybe it's the scars. either way, she reeks of spunkiness as he does. (wait.. reeks? ;_; )
eh yanno what i mean. :3
-BLW

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