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bluwish In reply to ??? [2022-07-03 11:20:29 +0000 UTC]
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bluwish In reply to PoppywhisperSkywish [2017-11-10 07:50:22 +0000 UTC]
In their expressions, I was going for cutely fierce despite knowing their unknown odds against The Greatest Villain of their time *winks at Tom*. I mean like "wtf, we're first years and the Wizarding World expects us to defeat a monster that even the Aurors fear??" but ehh, seems like most people ain't got the point but that's ok, I'm used to it =w="
Thank you for the critique! :>
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inmymoonsuit [2017-10-13 03:27:03 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Firstly, I'll say I may be an exceptionally harsh critic, as I am on myself; I'd therefore like to preface my critique by stating how much I love this piece. Having grown up with the book series, I think you did excellent work and justice to the characters, and I like the artwork you've created.
Stylistically, I enjoy the simplicity of the composition and muted background. I like the rhythm of the figures' heights and colors present in their dress and hairstyles, and I feel that the image reads well from top left to bottom right. My greatest complaint in regards to style and technique would have to do with some of the blurry strokes and instances where you seem less sure of your hand. This style works as well as it does because of its immediacy and edges, so I find the blurred bits to be especially weak.
I find the purposefulness of the characters' expressions to be a positive quality, while I would like to see more of their individual attitudes expressed. The unified seriousness works on some level, but lacks some degree of dynamism or depth. I'd like to see Harry's conflictedness, or Ron's fearfulness, for example. With this said, I LOVE that you've chosen to include Hermione as a person of color.
Overall, I like the image and hope to see more of your work! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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bluwish In reply to inmymoonsuit [2017-10-13 13:09:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!!
I appreciate the constructive criticism and seeing that your critique plays both the perks and quirks of my work (which is exactly what I want to know, and the reason why I have this work open for critiques) :>
Your judgment is especially welcomed and works best like a sandpaper: rough and harsh but helps you get smoother and sharper which is all for the best. Honesty like this is wonderful and helps me in my artistic pursuits as I try my hand in art, first as a hobby, presently an endeavor and hopefully someday as something professional.
Glad to see someone who also loves how I depicted Hermione as someone of color! I'm tired of everyone assuming she's white just because the wonderful Emma Watson played her. No matter what color she's depicted as, the character stays true to itself not by its appearance but how they're portrayed in art or prose so y'all should learn that skin color matters not but what the person decides to do or tries to be. Don't make character judgments based on what someone looks like, what you prefer or what you assume they should look like.
And seeing your bio, I agree that art is the place where skill meets play!!
Thanks for taking the time to critique, you've been a great help!!
Have a great day :>
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inmymoonsuit In reply to bluwish [2017-10-13 21:07:42 +0000 UTC]
I LOVE the sandpaper analogy. That is really perfect!
I find it interesting that people object so much to the character -- who is canonically not described as white -- being depicted as black, yet instances of white-washing get excused all the time. As a white person, I understand that we all have to come to terms with prejudices we may have, and while it can be uncomfortable to face ourselves and our shortcomings, it is so worth it. Just like critique and artmaking, we become better for accepting our shortcomings, even when pointed out by others; but unlike artmaking, issues of race affect more than just our individual journeys toward being better artists. By facing the problematic nature of preferring to see a capable, smart character as white, we can insure that we grow as individuals, but that a strong role model is available to kids who may have historically felt underrepresented. So bravo for doing the brave thing!
And you're welcome. I'm so glad I could be helpful. Enjoy your day as well.
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bluwish In reply to LIT7 [2017-10-02 02:00:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank youu
This critique made points about some of the strengths that were detailed in my work. You're all about positivity and made feedbacks not only about the details but also my style and you mentioned your thoughts and reactions about the aforementioned picture.
Kudos to you, mate
Have a great day :>
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Notthatobscure [2019-09-08 06:18:32 +0000 UTC]
Really adorable <3
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bluwish In reply to Zimmm [2019-08-22 11:24:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! ^^
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Kazusa78 [2019-03-31 21:29:25 +0000 UTC]
It's a beautiful and amazing piece of art even if I don't really agree with this appearance of Hermione (because of movie adaptation and J.K. "Hermione's white face). Still, I adore your work
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bluwish In reply to Kazusa78 [2019-04-01 00:54:40 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm also fond of white Hermione, it's just that I mostly enjoy portraying her as a person of color as I enjoy playing around with her palette!
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Kazusa78 In reply to bluwish [2019-04-09 16:59:06 +0000 UTC]
I see, it's a great thing that you have a courage to enjoy thing like this. Keep making amazing art <3
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Dentlos [2019-02-21 22:40:09 +0000 UTC]
J.K. Rowling should've done a better job of describing Hermoine. Then we wouldn't need to be bickering over her ethnicity. I still choose this over Emma Watson.
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bluwish In reply to Dentlos [2019-02-23 10:24:27 +0000 UTC]
Y E S
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TheLaughingGiant [2018-10-23 15:31:24 +0000 UTC]
And this is what Harry Potter would look like as an animated series.
A chapter for each episode.
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MattOodles [2018-04-11 18:40:37 +0000 UTC]
These are wonderful character designs for the HP trio! I love the simplification and paper cutout feel that your shading enacts.
The lighting is awesome, but it doesn't entirely make sense. There's no evident light source, not even any hint of background lighting. The white highlights look a bit harsh. I'd go with a warmer/cooler color and mess with opacity--something that will give your piece a color mood.
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bluwish In reply to MattOodles [2018-04-14 03:02:39 +0000 UTC]
I used a warm color palette here and the light source was from above but I guess I messed some up cos at this stage I was still experimenting with lighting so I didn't really had the hang of it then ^^
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MarshIsATheatreGeek [2018-04-11 06:15:13 +0000 UTC]
aaa!! i love the way you did this!! the determined looks and the magnificent color choice : O
i dont mind that you changed hermione to be a person of colour, i think she's a beautiful and talented girl either way : 3
keep up the great work!!
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Mrs-Durden [2018-03-09 21:18:45 +0000 UTC]
I find this to be really cool, I love the way you envisioned and drew the characters, but I think your use of white on them to I guess portray light didn't really translate so well, it's too heavy handed, it needs to be more subtle and blended into the rest of the colors, if that makes sense!
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bluwish In reply to Mrs-Durden [2018-03-10 08:57:45 +0000 UTC]
Noted! Thanks~ ^^
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Hyaroo [2018-01-27 12:18:17 +0000 UTC]
Well, if they ever made a Harry Potter animated series, I'd definitely like to see these designs (or similar) for the characters.
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bluwish In reply to Hyaroo [2018-01-30 12:07:09 +0000 UTC]
I've been working on it but it's a long way before I even animate a full ep..
I think I'll make a short animatic instead
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Hyaroo In reply to bluwish [2018-01-30 12:08:00 +0000 UTC]
Animation takes a long time. ^_^*
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bluwish In reply to Hyaroo [2018-01-30 12:09:45 +0000 UTC]
Yeah..
Even now, I'm still at the storyboard part
Sucks I have to juggle my time between acads and personal pursuits (the latter I haven't had the time to continue)
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serge-fiedos [2018-01-11 14:53:07 +0000 UTC]
very nice !
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DisturbingGreen [2018-01-04 08:17:41 +0000 UTC]
THE ROUGH TEXTURE WORKS SO WELLWEIRIEWRI
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bluwish In reply to Moca13 [2018-01-03 14:01:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^^
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Moca13 In reply to bluwish [2018-01-03 14:17:05 +0000 UTC]
Welcome ^^
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bluwish In reply to KaidokJ [2017-12-13 12:28:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! :>
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WILLIFINK [2017-12-08 20:13:10 +0000 UTC]
But it's cute
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WILLIFINK [2017-12-08 20:12:52 +0000 UTC]
But it's cute
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