blw7920 [2011-08-31 17:52:34 +0000 UTC]
I took to heart your comments, IssacClarke, and so I altered the one arm holding the pop-can to make it more relaxed, the other arms on both girls seem fine to me. I did try to use the XNALara program to put smiles on both their faces in post-editing, but it's tricky, so I went back and re-edited their smiles, now that I've figured out better how to pose the lips. They do look better with more pronounced smiles, which I've been wanting to get right all along. The dark hair is a change of pace look for Jill I think, and I've had requests from other DA members to make Jill a brunette in some of my pics, and so I don't plan on changing it, but I appreciate the comments and input!!!
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IssacClarke [2011-08-31 13:03:42 +0000 UTC]
This is great but there's two problems. 1) They seem to tense, here's a suggestion. Instead of having there's arms at a perfect angle, move it around a bit so they seem more relaxed. 2) Put a smile on their faces! Although I personally feel the hairstyle also took away from Jill, that's a designer choice and I'm sure someone's liked it so, that's up to you.
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