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BoardwalkBhikku — Your Atlas
Published: 2006-06-21 23:07:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 46; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description It is said this life
Is just a dream
That everyone will someday
Wake to find
             They aren’t what they seem.

They say it’s like heaven there
Or perhaps just something new
But I would sleep for a thousand years
If I could share those years with you.

The sun may freeze
        And the stars may fall
             But I will stand there through it all
And I will bare my shoulders against the skies
          All for the love within your eyes.

I think every soul moves to a tune,
             That weaves it through the tapestry
      And when we end, and the cloth unravels
       Next to you is where I’ll be.

The sun may freeze
         And the stars may fall
                    But I will stand there through it all
And I will take up arms against the time that’s left
     Because it is you who gives me breath.

-Matthew Strenger
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Comments: 3

Jayjay6 [2006-06-21 23:11:40 +0000 UTC]

your poem has a lot of meaning. i've never really read a guy written poem before, but yours was really good. i like how there is a guy who can express his feelings in poetry. its nice.

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BoardwalkBhikku In reply to Jayjay6 [2006-06-22 02:34:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. I think I tend to hit a little hard on the cliches, but I do try to be honest to the emotion. Thank you again

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Jayjay6 In reply to BoardwalkBhikku [2006-06-22 22:32:26 +0000 UTC]

your very welcome.

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