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Published: 2006-04-14 00:00:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 10
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Description I cant feel my hands,
you've tied them up havent you ,
I can hear your breathing,
You're so confused arent you ,
The presure on my wrists is causing me to blue ,
And the burns from your "little game" seem to sting,
I feel the beat of your heart as it races to make a final decision.
This guns pointed at my chest,

This was all we ever had to love,
The blackness fills my eyes and your soul.
The guns still pressed against my chest,
My eyes detect you cocking the gun ,
I bet you can smell my fear,
I cant help it you know,
It you that has the gun,

The silencer pushed against my chest
and I begin to shake ,
the tremble in your hands and heart begins to show,
This is it now or never ,

Take me back or blow me away ,

you take the gun and put it in your own mouth,

I can hear it silence your screams,
It ends your dreams ,

The screams still haunt my dreams
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Comments: 4

BOBNME [2006-04-20 18:11:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot kirsty ^^

<<3

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Wilting-Heart [2006-04-20 17:53:39 +0000 UTC]

It's such a sad, sad poem and so deep. I agree that it is haunting.
I think it's my favourite that you have done
xx <3 xx

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miss-psycho-bunny [2006-04-14 14:34:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Mike! I realy like it! That has to be one of your best me thinks! I love the tone of it......Realy haunting like the end...
good good!! <3

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BOBNME In reply to miss-psycho-bunny [2006-04-14 16:06:47 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot <3

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