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BOBNME — For Every Death
Published: 2006-04-16 21:58:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 90; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Rushing into the hospital entrance , the contractions are killing you again...
You feel the waters break and you know its time I came out.
You feel its gonna be okay , you call the family
Nan and grandad , you know the score.
Older brothers are there,
And even with grandads weak heart he still makes the journey.

I'm turning on your inside I want to get out and see my new family,
Grandads hearts beginning to fail as he makes it inside the hospital.
He falls to the floor clutching his chest...
He says that all he wants is to see me...
All he wants before he has to go.
The Nurses say no he has to go into the emergancy ward...
He could die . he argues that he doesnt care...
he wants to see me with the tears in his eyes...
The pain is killing him, but I'm tearing him apart.
And I havent even arrived.

I already miss him.
As I slowly enter the world.
Fresh, Born , Healthy.

The Heartbeat in the other room stops,
And as they cut off my cord.
The spirit next door ascends back where it belongs.

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Comments: 11

BOBNME [2006-04-20 21:05:50 +0000 UTC]

lol , nah if u read it too often , it eventualyl depresses you , just a bit every now and then ^^ ,
like alchohol good but only at certain times

xxx<3

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Wilting-Heart [2006-04-20 18:28:43 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome
I don't read your poetry very often and I should really
xx <3 xx

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Wilting-Heart [2006-04-20 17:58:38 +0000 UTC]

Very well written Mike. I like this one. It nearly made me cry.
Well done
xx <3 xx

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BOBNME In reply to Wilting-Heart [2006-04-20 18:12:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot ^^

xx <<3

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iheartpirates [2006-04-18 09:41:09 +0000 UTC]

very poignant! if you went through and sorted and the way this s written, with capital 'I's were there swhould be etc, it would be great

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miss-psycho-bunny [2006-04-17 20:54:30 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Thats great...I love poems where the final point is most significant! Me like <3

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BOBNME In reply to miss-psycho-bunny [2006-04-17 21:46:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^ <3

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Acorn-Chan [2006-04-16 22:00:52 +0000 UTC]

This is very nice... deep and meaningful. It's hard to come acrosss stuff like this on DA too often (by my experience, anyways) Well done.

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BOBNME In reply to Acorn-Chan [2006-04-17 05:38:03 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks a lot , this was my first time writing something like this ^^
thanks for the awesome comment ^^

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Acorn-Chan In reply to BOBNME [2006-04-17 11:01:29 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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BOBNME In reply to Acorn-Chan [2006-04-17 12:12:17 +0000 UTC]

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