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bohemianscribbler — to wait, to want by-nc-nd

Published: 2007-07-18 16:02:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1137; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 4
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smaller photo: ~3Arwen

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l'attente

c'est la vie au ralenti,
c'est le cœur à rebours,
c'est une espérance et demie:
trop et trop peu à son tour.

c'est le train qui s'arrête en plein
chemin sans nulle station
et on entend le grillon
et on contemple en vain

penché à la portière,
d'un vent que l'on sent, agités
les prés fleuris, les prés
que l'arrêt rend imaginaires.

(r. m. rilke)
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Comments: 12

SquidProQuo [2007-11-17 19:40:47 +0000 UTC]

Wow so my french is so bad after all, because I understand the poem!

"c'est le train qui s'arrête en plein
chemin sans nulle station
et on entend le grillon
et on contemple en vain"
That refrain just works so well with the photo.

Amazing.
This is a deeply personal piece and I love the sentiments it conveys.
Lovely.

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bohemianscribbler In reply to SquidProQuo [2007-11-17 22:27:26 +0000 UTC]

so glad you like it.
and thank you for the feedback ^^

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3Arwen [2007-09-04 12:03:13 +0000 UTC]

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bohemianscribbler In reply to 3Arwen [2007-09-04 12:13:37 +0000 UTC]

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monsterlienchen [2007-08-07 20:23:26 +0000 UTC]

I sometimes hate french.. beacsue I am not good at it.. but the poem sounds quite interesting.. and all those scribbles look so personal.. great!

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bohemianscribbler In reply to monsterlienchen [2007-08-07 20:35:48 +0000 UTC]

the photo couldn't have been impersonal because of the girl in the smaller pic. we go back a long way together. and the poem was really fit for the moment when i took the shot

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monsterlienchen In reply to bohemianscribbler [2007-08-07 20:40:30 +0000 UTC]

that's one of the greatest things.. when poems just fit perfectly.. and you even have a photo.. wow!

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bohemianscribbler In reply to monsterlienchen [2007-08-07 21:02:13 +0000 UTC]

yep, that's why it's worth carrying your camera around everywhere you go and shooting until people start getting annoyed

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monsterlienchen In reply to bohemianscribbler [2007-08-07 21:53:12 +0000 UTC]

jap.. today this wonderful special girl.. I knew was so annoyed and I got no good shot.. *sniff*

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bohemianscribbler In reply to monsterlienchen [2007-08-08 00:00:24 +0000 UTC]

i know ... it happens ...
but what can you do?

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aquiestubojuan [2007-07-24 00:16:09 +0000 UTC]

great picture... it's a great composition for the poem

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bohemianscribbler In reply to aquiestubojuan [2007-07-24 19:57:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i value your comment greatly

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