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motioncity182 [2007-05-07 20:51:42 +0000 UTC]

hey hey, i did a coloured version of this...i'm not sure whether it's quite finished, but I've reached an end point for the moment.
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Adrian-MalSeraph [2007-04-05 13:00:53 +0000 UTC]

Flying cop car!

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MicahJGunnell [2007-04-03 06:44:33 +0000 UTC]

I agree with some of the other crits...for me, the problem with the "blasts" on the tires is that they are too dark. They should probably be one of the brighter things in the picture. I really liked some of regen's suggestions, like having the "robber" car riddled with bullet-holes. Aside from that, I hope you make the foreground car a lot darker, becase to me right now the BG car looks like its right above the FG car, which makes it look super-small. I know you know more than I do about atmospheric perspective though, so I'm sure you'll fix that with value. For me, the little car thing and the kind of awkward pose of the cop shooting kind of throws the whole piece off, which sucks, because its otherwise a very solid piece. I'm looking forward to seeing the marker version, because I have a feeling you're going to fix alot of those issues in that stage. Hurry up and upload it fool!

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mechangel2002 [2007-03-30 05:30:23 +0000 UTC]

Sweet action to it

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rdelarosa [2007-03-16 00:29:11 +0000 UTC]

i agree w/ some of what k. rian was saying. i think the dude w/ the gun looks like he may be shooting at the hood, with the angle he is at. but its not bothering me that much. but i do think you should push the shooting scene more. i only see a few bullet hits on the car. since this is an intense scene, i'm thinkin more bullet 'deflections' and some bullet holes on the windshield(since you already have some on the hood). you can also have some shot out headlights too, and maybe about some bullet casings flying around as well... i guess w/ all the action goin around, you may want to lose the blast effects from the car, and 'soften' that up so its not as distracting.

for me, havin a car barely escaping, and riddled w/ bullets tells more of an interesting story.

anyways, thats my feedback. sorry i'm just responding now...

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retrorobotboy [2007-03-09 05:37:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh Yeah, really cool drawing man! I can feel the action you got going here. Awesome to see it in color eventually, my friend.

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Blaw81 [2007-03-09 04:28:54 +0000 UTC]

well...i think other than the ef-x on the wheels of the car, which are awsome and totally needed, it sucks. oh wait...let's wait for the markers.

i still love you......

*sigh*

DKY

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mindintomatter [2007-03-09 01:46:21 +0000 UTC]

speed lines are great. fg vehicle looks great, perspective solid as always. My problem is with the effects like the smoke and the rocket blasts coming off of the flying car. Those blast effects are too sharp, angular, guess I would have liked to see more motion to them. I'm sure the greytone version will look great.

ooh, and nice manhole effect in the front. not sure it's necessary, but it's cool

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rianmiller [2007-03-08 23:13:12 +0000 UTC]

If I had to complain about something, I'd say that based on the way the cop is holding the gun and the angle of the car he's in, it looks like he should be shooting the hood of his own car. Shaun's idea of angling the car differently might do the trick, but I think it's all about that cop's arm. Maybe it should be higher like he's getting leverage to shoot over the front of his car or he should be aiming more out in front of himself instead of more or less straight down. That's my two cents. Outside of that, I think it's great. I don't think the blasts on the tires are too distracting, and I think they'll look even better once you get the gray tones in the picture because they won't contrast everything quite as much as they do now. I quite like how everything is realistic except for the leaping car. It's got a very cool lightweight sci-fi feel to it. All around, good stuff.

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ShaunONeil [2007-03-08 18:39:08 +0000 UTC]

as usual i'm a fan. i think the car in the air is a little funky, but i'd live if it didn't change. maybe if it had less of a downward pitch? then i think i'd shut the fuck up. cuz i certainly can't do this. 10 points.

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KajusX [2007-03-08 16:58:09 +0000 UTC]

i loved the show 'cops.' i had the action figure for Long-Arm, the cop with the handcuff grappling hook attached to his wrist.
and this piece is baadaass, chris.

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WillCaligan [2007-03-08 15:48:43 +0000 UTC]

I remember cops. This is a great pic. Hope you do more with it.

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Maieth-mk2 [2007-03-08 15:10:47 +0000 UTC]

Great work. Loads of movement, great perspective and lots of detail. well done.

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1aCoL4 [2007-03-08 15:10:38 +0000 UTC]

hawt

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