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Published: 2014-12-31 19:47:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 350; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Please tell me what's wrong with my art, it's the only way I can improve.------
But honestly in retrospective, I have improved a lot.
I decided to make the head more sharp instead of flat... all it really did was take some of the cuteness out of it..
But yeah, not a bad job for 5 hours, a HB and Mechanical 0.5mm pencil. ^^
Happy new year.
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Her skirt has lost some of its flair in this, it springs out a tiny bit less than in the anime, like its heavier. Her breasts are a tiny bit too large and the bit of white material near the bottom-most buckel isnt mirrored correctly, the left side is not only slightly higher but widens slightly as it stretches outwards, which I dont believe happens on Mami's corset in the Anime.
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Way to go man o: You're definitely improving, certainly, no doubt. xD Keep at it and one day you'll be surprised of how far you've come = P
Take a moment and look at your previous works, compare the old ones with something like this. That's one way to encourage you and make you realize how much of a difference you're making : )
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Yeah, I was surprised that I actually did so well.
Will do, thank you very much.
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This is a great way to end this year! ^^ This just might be your best piece that I've seen from you yet.
And for any mistakes, the neck seems really thin, but she's an anime character, so it doesn't count. So I pretty much see no real mistakes.
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If you really wanna know what I found wrong with it, the colouring on the dark midsection isn't consistent throughout.
but other then that, no mistakes. (yay)
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Huh, I didn't notice that. At least that is the only mistake. I'm sure not a lot of people will notice it unless they look for it.
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It looks really good! The shading and body structure is accurate. The only thing is the the head is slightly too upward. This may just be your art style, but I suggest making the head a little bigger and always think about cheeks! You can always look at reference pictures on the internet for head shapes as well.
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I always make the head to large, I'm looking for a good balance still.
Yeah, Like I said in the description... I made the chin to sharp, and the anime with the said character had /really/ flat chins. (for more of a chibi look).
Thanks for the advice, it's really appreciated.
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Yep! I watched the anime too, so I know the heads are kind of box shaped.
And you're welcome! Sorry if I sounded rude! It really is good! ^.^
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oh no, not at all you're fine. ^^
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Thank you very much.
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wow that's so really REALLY good traditional art! your good.
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I wanted something good on my record before the year was over.
thanks. ^^
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Tomoe Mami from Puella Magica Madoka Magica
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