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Published: 2012-01-10 22:01:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 61276; Favourites: 301; Downloads: 403
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Description Page 1 [link]
Page 2 [link]
Page 3 [link]

NEW STYLE
Page 4 and 5 [link]

Page 6 - Enjoy
Page 7 [link]
Page 8 [link]
Page 9 [link]
Page 10 [link]
Page 11 [link]
Page 12 [link]
Page 13 [link]
Page 14 [link]
Page 15 [link]
Page 16 [link]
Page 17 [link]
Page 18-19 [link]

Have some music for the situation. [link]


MLP FIM belongs to their rightful owners.
Masarras, comic, story are mine
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Comments: 82

Spirittai1 [2012-08-07 03:27:10 +0000 UTC]

If she hurts Luna anymore...

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KeybladeRoxas [2012-04-17 20:35:27 +0000 UTC]

I love the Mane 6 flowers you included.

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Maka560 In reply to KeybladeRoxas [2012-05-16 21:21:07 +0000 UTC]

i loved that

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KeybladeRoxas In reply to Maka560 [2012-05-16 22:17:18 +0000 UTC]

Same!!

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Maka560 In reply to KeybladeRoxas [2012-05-17 00:24:48 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Inkydanna [2012-04-09 14:53:11 +0000 UTC]

The music is gone.

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Bonaxor In reply to Inkydanna [2012-04-17 21:20:18 +0000 UTC]

I know. Sadly I dont remember what was it so I cant put new one.

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Caustizer [2012-01-24 05:13:42 +0000 UTC]

Amazing how Luna manages to look pretty even when she is pulling a Max Payne and getting up after a terrible injury!

Your art style is really improving, and the story is getting more and more interesting as you continue to post these. How many pages in total are you planning on making?

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Bonaxor In reply to Caustizer [2012-01-24 09:35:07 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea how many pages there will be. I need to tell a story and I will just keep drawing and painting. We will see how many of them gonna be in the end.

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leonotherside [2012-01-16 10:31:16 +0000 UTC]

its pretty cool actually... keep it up

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thechief1992 [2012-01-13 06:14:34 +0000 UTC]

this is a very interesting idea i havent seen anything about Celestia being taken over and so far it is very good art and story cant wait for more!

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Bonaxor In reply to thechief1992 [2012-01-13 07:51:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks m8 Next parts soon. Ill try adding 2 pages maybe sometimes 3 if my time let me do that.

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thechief1992 In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-13 09:59:09 +0000 UTC]

Woot woot cant wait and your welcome

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cajobif [2012-01-13 04:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Nice beginning. Beautiful artwork.

Also this story reminds me of this track made by AgileDash: [link]

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Bonaxor In reply to cajobif [2012-01-13 07:53:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you m8. Hope you will enjoy next parts

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OriginalVieral [2012-01-13 03:42:05 +0000 UTC]

le confusion.... is the possessing thing evil or good or just kinda meh?

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Bonaxor In reply to OriginalVieral [2012-01-13 07:58:27 +0000 UTC]

Its good and bad. Bad for person being possessed, good for the one possessing his prey

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OriginalVieral In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-13 19:23:47 +0000 UTC]

eeenteresteeeenk..... continue...

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RaenBoow [2012-01-12 23:14:48 +0000 UTC]

GAH! OMC What is started? O_O
What has thou fanatasy has installed for thee and such....?

I'm very to read on!

I love the hardwork made into this, as all the little things - like the little butterfly in this one! Very good backgroundstuffing

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Bonaxor In reply to RaenBoow [2012-01-13 08:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you m8 Background was probably the biggest pain ( finding all the colors).

Its nice to hear that people wants to read next parts Thanks to all of you I really want to do more Pony paintings

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BronyLink [2012-01-12 17:05:49 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome Can't wait for more!

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Bonaxor In reply to BronyLink [2012-01-12 17:10:09 +0000 UTC]

Nice to hear that m8.

Its funny...Can't wait, can't wait....if there only was a time machine...ehhh.... Where is Doctor Who when we need him

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small3907 [2012-01-12 12:10:17 +0000 UTC]

awsome
great work

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Bonaxor In reply to small3907 [2012-01-12 14:59:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks m8

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small3907 In reply to Bonaxor [2012-02-03 16:40:26 +0000 UTC]

why you're very welcome

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JoPaMonis04 [2012-01-12 11:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! You have placed a a lot of effort in your works. I believe you had a bit of a hard time on Tia's wings. And I like how you made the flowers representing the mane 6.

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Bonaxor In reply to JoPaMonis04 [2012-01-12 14:59:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks m8. The more people see my work the more iam willing to paint ponies.
So you actually noticed the flowers easter egg Nice m8

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GeneralRex [2012-01-12 11:21:35 +0000 UTC]

oOOo, sinister, love the work on Celestia's eyes, VERY cool looking

the dialogue is a little off, but I read that english isn't your first language so no worries, Cool comic none the less

I await #6

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Bonaxor In reply to GeneralRex [2012-01-12 15:04:49 +0000 UTC]

Nice that you like her

I'm gonna search for someone that can help me with texts.

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GeneralRex In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-12 16:49:12 +0000 UTC]

excellent, then I shall await your next page, can't wait to see how the new script reads

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Bonaxor In reply to GeneralRex [2012-01-12 17:00:48 +0000 UTC]

I just hope it will be better this time.

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Trueblue02 [2012-01-12 11:15:11 +0000 UTC]

WHY DOST THY SELF ALWAYS COME UPON SUCH MAGNIFICENT TALES BEFORE THEIR COMPLETION?!?!?!?!

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Bonaxor In reply to Trueblue02 [2012-01-12 15:02:00 +0000 UTC]

SO THEE CAN CHANGE THE FUTURE OF THE PLOT OF WHOLE COMIC

Cuz you know...its just the beginning, right?

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BB-K [2012-01-12 10:43:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh oh, now what?!

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Bonaxor In reply to BB-K [2012-01-12 10:47:12 +0000 UTC]

Wait for next part

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windtitan [2012-01-12 10:24:35 +0000 UTC]

You asked for more feedback, but I can't think of enough new things to say to fill the 100 word minimum of the critique.

What I said on part 3 still stands, although in this part the language is more necessary, and apart from some mechanical and grammatical errors it's solid. That may be because Celestia is obviously not herself, and Luna looks like she's got a concussion. But it's well done and I think the comic as a whole is getting stronger.

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Bonaxor In reply to windtitan [2012-01-12 10:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much m8

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QuilloManar [2012-01-12 06:58:33 +0000 UTC]

What's an 'awake'.

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Bonaxor In reply to QuilloManar [2012-01-12 09:17:26 +0000 UTC]

You dont know or just making fool out of me? I meant that she isnt sleeping any more, maybe I made a mistake there.

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QuilloManar In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-13 05:26:39 +0000 UTC]

It says "Your awake"
...
"My awake is what"

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Bonaxor In reply to QuilloManar [2012-01-13 07:46:04 +0000 UTC]

I fixed the text, ok? So its fine now.

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QuilloManar In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-15 02:48:15 +0000 UTC]

Gracias.

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Sgphad [2012-01-12 04:27:23 +0000 UTC]

Small error at the red balloon. Should be "I see you're awake"

Grammar Nazi aside, I am really liking this, and looking forward for more!

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Bonaxor In reply to Sgphad [2012-01-12 09:15:42 +0000 UTC]

Grammar NAZI ATTACK LOOOOOL Thanks for finding an error.

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diosadelkaos [2012-01-12 03:55:20 +0000 UTC]

hnngg!! awesome comic, can't wait to next pages

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Bonaxor In reply to diosadelkaos [2012-01-12 09:14:48 +0000 UTC]

Thats good

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Darthmaul22 [2012-01-12 03:24:35 +0000 UTC]

Luna, no! It's a trap!

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Clonetrooperkev [2012-01-12 03:23:25 +0000 UTC]

I blame Shao Khan

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Bonaxor In reply to Clonetrooperkev [2012-01-12 09:14:09 +0000 UTC]

The one from Mortal Combat? Hehe that would be nice crossover...

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Clonetrooperkev In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-12 14:45:52 +0000 UTC]

lol MLP in Mortal Kombat. I can imagine Pinkie Pie's fatality . Oh how about Celestia? That'd be fun

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