Comments: 82
Spirittai1 [2012-08-07 03:27:10 +0000 UTC]
If she hurts Luna anymore...
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KeybladeRoxas [2012-04-17 20:35:27 +0000 UTC]
I love the Mane 6 flowers you included.
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Bonaxor In reply to Inkydanna [2012-04-17 21:20:18 +0000 UTC]
I know. Sadly I dont remember what was it so I cant put new one.
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Caustizer [2012-01-24 05:13:42 +0000 UTC]
Amazing how Luna manages to look pretty even when she is pulling a Max Payne and getting up after a terrible injury!
Your art style is really improving, and the story is getting more and more interesting as you continue to post these. How many pages in total are you planning on making?
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Bonaxor In reply to Caustizer [2012-01-24 09:35:07 +0000 UTC]
I have no idea how many pages there will be. I need to tell a story and I will just keep drawing and painting. We will see how many of them gonna be in the end.
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leonotherside [2012-01-16 10:31:16 +0000 UTC]
its pretty cool actually... keep it up
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cajobif [2012-01-13 04:01:38 +0000 UTC]
Nice beginning. Beautiful artwork.
Also this story reminds me of this track made by AgileDash: [link]
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OriginalVieral [2012-01-13 03:42:05 +0000 UTC]
le confusion.... is the possessing thing evil or good or just kinda meh?
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OriginalVieral In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-13 19:23:47 +0000 UTC]
eeenteresteeeenk..... continue...
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small3907 [2012-01-12 12:10:17 +0000 UTC]
awsome
great work
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small3907 In reply to Bonaxor [2012-02-03 16:40:26 +0000 UTC]
why you're very welcome
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JoPaMonis04 [2012-01-12 11:28:34 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! You have placed a a lot of effort in your works. I believe you had a bit of a hard time on Tia's wings. And I like how you made the flowers representing the mane 6.
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Bonaxor In reply to GeneralRex [2012-01-12 17:00:48 +0000 UTC]
I just hope it will be better this time.
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Trueblue02 [2012-01-12 11:15:11 +0000 UTC]
WHY DOST THY SELF ALWAYS COME UPON SUCH MAGNIFICENT TALES BEFORE THEIR COMPLETION?!?!?!?!
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windtitan [2012-01-12 10:24:35 +0000 UTC]
You asked for more feedback, but I can't think of enough new things to say to fill the 100 word minimum of the critique.
What I said on part 3 still stands, although in this part the language is more necessary, and apart from some mechanical and grammatical errors it's solid. That may be because Celestia is obviously not herself, and Luna looks like she's got a concussion. But it's well done and I think the comic as a whole is getting stronger.
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QuilloManar [2012-01-12 06:58:33 +0000 UTC]
What's an 'awake'.
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QuilloManar In reply to Bonaxor [2012-01-13 05:26:39 +0000 UTC]
It says "Your awake"
...
"My awake is what"
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Bonaxor In reply to QuilloManar [2012-01-13 07:46:04 +0000 UTC]
I fixed the text, ok? So its fine now.
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Sgphad [2012-01-12 04:27:23 +0000 UTC]
Small error at the red balloon. Should be "I see you're awake"
Grammar Nazi aside, I am really liking this, and looking forward for more!
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Darthmaul22 [2012-01-12 03:24:35 +0000 UTC]
Luna, no! It's a trap!
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Bonaxor In reply to Clonetrooperkev [2012-01-12 09:14:09 +0000 UTC]
The one from Mortal Combat? Hehe that would be nice crossover...
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