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LexL52 [2024-02-14 07:07:25 +0000 UTC]
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Jhnmichael2010 [2017-02-07 04:01:40 +0000 UTC]
a friend of mine will love this story! Tickling is his biggest fetish!
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Jake-TheArtist [2014-08-06 18:39:57 +0000 UTC]
that was great! make another part
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Sauurman [2014-05-16 20:40:16 +0000 UTC]
Very nice!
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Animedamel [2014-01-15 03:23:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for sharing and having Anko leaving Kurenai bound and gag for our pleasure. Thank you for sharing
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bondagewriter In reply to Animedamel [2014-01-15 13:44:54 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome. Thank you for commenting and for all the faves.
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side-effect55 [2011-03-24 15:18:21 +0000 UTC]
I like the story. It has a very playful touch to it. The detail you use for the gagging process is great. It gave me a good feel of how disgusted Kurenai must have been by the whole situation.
But I also have a point of critique:
Suddenly, Anko pulled off Kurenai's socks and started to tickle her feet wildly.
That's a lot of action packed into one sentence. I would have elaborated further on that. Either to stress Kurenai's fear and helplessnes while she sees the tickle torture coming, or by making the start of the tickling more detailed to cater to the tickling crowd. But that's just optional.
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bondagewriter In reply to doomie220 [2011-01-31 14:08:48 +0000 UTC]
It's her own fault. As they say: "Curiosity got the ninja tied up" XP
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jonnyrubberman [2011-01-12 22:02:18 +0000 UTC]
nice story dude Kurenai really should of known what being curious did to the cat at least Anko got to have some fun before head off on her misson
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JakTheRenegade [2011-01-07 20:19:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for writing this, this is awesome. I really liked Anko making Kurenai beg for her gag.
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bondagewriter In reply to ED3765 [2011-01-07 15:45:05 +0000 UTC]
LOL, that would have been something XD JAK didn't say anything about that in the request, so I didn't even think of it, but if he had said it, it would have been quite the moment XP
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ED3765 In reply to bondagewriter [2011-01-07 23:17:31 +0000 UTC]
you could always continue the story with Asuma finding her.
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bondagewriter In reply to ED3765 [2011-01-07 23:20:37 +0000 UTC]
I could... but I don't think I will, at least not for the time being.
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