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Published: 2011-03-08 17:14:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 6908; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 17
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I'm honestly very pleased about this picture... except the hands, feet and the bra. Need to practice drawing clothing of various kinds, it seems.As with my previous work, feel free to give constructive critique
Now for a question: What would you do with your willing slave?
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o and i forgot if i had a willing slave i'd have a lot of fun with her
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Now, why am I not surprised?
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lol i didn't think you would be
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And you were right XD
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I apologize for the really late comment. It looks great! 
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Thanks
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You're welcome
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I'm gonna do my best
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Glad to hear it
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For starters the arms and legs are too straight, though thast you probably already noted; but as a whole it'S pretty good, you should keep practicing
*ponders upon the question*let me see, and not purt too many details; Torture, sex, torture, sex, etc... once tired of it, killing(probably skip this step though)
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Right now I'm only practicing basic anatomy. I still got a long way to go.
And would you really get tired of having fun with your willing slave?
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probably after a while, would rather have an unwilling one...though once that toy breaks I'd want a new one
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I see. So you're that kind of Domme.
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teehee... in my times of domme-ness I,d rather have one that fights...
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teehee, yes you should, it, not for nothing I go bored once you settled down and so let you go
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...I don't really get what you mean.
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if the sub is all subby and trained it's not as fun; they need to fight or it gets boring fast... *will explain the rest later*
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teehee, sorry BTW, couldn't, attend the room...*sigh*
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It's ok. Maybe another time.
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Alright, another time seems good!
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It's ok. For now just post stories and practice drawing when you can.
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I'll try to keep both writing and drawing.
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I agree with the criticism already stated, plus I agree with the fact the drawings are getting better rather quickly, can't wait to see what they'll be like after a while.
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I do hope they'll be a lot better than this. Also, if I could get a scanner to use, then the quality would be better.
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I'm glad you are pleased with your work. No matter what it is, be proud of it, because it's yours and you put lots of effort and energy into it!
Constructive criticism.... nothing so far. Though, as soon as you master drawing figures, you should try to work a bit on muscles and curves. You know, thighs, calves, elbows and such. They are a bit tricky, but I'm sure you can master it.
And what would I do with willing slave.... sorry, it's not after 22:00, so I can't say it.
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Yeah, I've been thinking out the whole muscles-thing too. But I gotta get the anatomy right before I try going further.
And it's past 22:00 now XD So please do tell me what you would do
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I fully agree. Once you can draw (almost) perfect figure, starting with muscles, tendons and curves is the best thing to do.
Aww, too bad. Now it's morning already, so I still can't say.
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Aww, I wanted to hear your plans XD Well, have fin thinking about whatever it is
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Thank you, and be sure I will.
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Good work here.
The arms are a tad too long, and the legs do lack kneejoints, but this is better than the first sketch you did. You've made some good progress rather quickly.
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The legs are supposed to be stretched out completely, so I didn't add the kneejoints on purpose. But now that you mention it, it does seem like something's missing when I look at them...
I had problems imagining how long the arms would be compared to the head and all, but I think I managed pretty well
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Okay. I know that her legs are to be stretched out, but, even so, you should indicate joints.
But, like I said, you're getting better, and quick.
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Yeah, you're probably right about that. I guess another reason why I didn't was because of habit. I usually draw people with some pants on. With only underwear, it's a bit different.
Thank you. Like I said before, I'm doing my best to improve and learn from both my mistakes and the things I do right (though it's mostly the mistakes I must learn from 
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Alright. I'm glad we're setting up something.
However, for what you do wrong, you do learn a little bit how to do it right.
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So, just keep at it, and I'll give you feedback.
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