Comments: 8
snowflake23 [2003-02-20 11:38:38 +0000 UTC]
I feel like that now
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ladida [2003-02-04 12:26:22 +0000 UTC]
very know feelings, beautiful all of it
but mostly i like the same part as nebelkriegerin
"i smell you from a thousand miles..."
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nebelkriegerin [2003-01-29 10:35:04 +0000 UTC]
Fortunely no longer feeling like that.
This is the part I like most...
i smell you from a thousand miles
i haunt you with one touch
i hold your mind in my hands
to pull you towards me
to lure you to my trap
i hide in darkness
so you won't see me
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succor [2003-01-25 17:04:49 +0000 UTC]
Very nicely written...
Keep expressing yourself in your writing; I find it's one of the only things that helps me.
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smokedragon [2003-01-25 10:36:00 +0000 UTC]
This has such beautiful lyrical flow to it. Excellent piece.
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sunshinegurl [2003-01-25 10:06:22 +0000 UTC]
I know those thoughts have had them before.
But writing is the only way to solve my problems or atleast help them. you dont seem to be afraid of showing your emotions well thats what I get out of your poem.
Just keep smilin.
Keep your head up.
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paranoiz [2003-01-25 09:57:47 +0000 UTC]
how many times i felt like that!
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