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Published: 2002-11-21 12:32:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 16
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the nightmare she brings

with sharp claws and dark eyes

i close my eyes tight

gripping my pillow

scared that she will come

crawling throught the night

with nightmare she brings

like smoke creeping

i feel it on my skin

cold wind

i know she's coming

i try to scream

no sound came out

she's there i know

i cried for help

no one there

i tried to run

but she's there

breathing at the back of my neck

drooling and laughing

wanting to have me

she grab my arm

her laugh echoed

i saw through her eyes

the darkness of her soul

no sound came out as i scream again

i closed my eyes

prayed to wake up from this nightmare

she whispered words that i couldn't understand

she grab my other arm

and started to shake me

i screamed loud

and sound came out my mouth

i woke up



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Comments: 2

ladida [2002-11-21 22:57:35 +0000 UTC]

she should meet with my Mr Nightmare

Serious now, on the whole it's nice concept, um i was a little confused with the tenses.. in my opinion you need to work it a little more (my honest, humble opinion of course)



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nebelkriegerin [2002-11-21 21:42:21 +0000 UTC]

Truely enjoyed reading the poem and looking at the image. She's always there, always trying to suck the life ov those she most love - cause fear to bring self-knowledge.

Keep it up.

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