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Lorenoide [2012-01-07 04:41:59 +0000 UTC]
Oohh I´m liking it!
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BorgiaWriter In reply to sweetlacie [2011-12-12 20:31:01 +0000 UTC]
^_^ Glad you went back and read it.
What do you mean about Lily's personality?
I hope you continue reading.
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sweetlacie In reply to BorgiaWriter [2011-12-13 13:46:51 +0000 UTC]
i mean, i haven't read more of her,...of what she actually thinks of James and such XP...i dunno haha,
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BorgiaWriter In reply to sweetlacie [2011-12-13 18:33:02 +0000 UTC]
hmm... well I think I give a good indication of what she thinks about James here, and in the two other chapters.
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SakuraJBlossom [2011-11-05 10:18:47 +0000 UTC]
The two nit-pick suggestions I have are just in terms of basics:
1) "Me(comma)too" so "Me,too."
2) "Wouldn't she have been TAKING notes if she had been there in fifth year? "
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BorgiaWriter In reply to SakuraJBlossom [2011-11-05 15:49:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for spotting those! Any suggestions beyond nit-picks?
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BorgiaWriter In reply to SakuraJBlossom [2011-11-05 15:48:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for spotting those! Any suggestions beyond nit-picks?
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BorgiaWriter In reply to diathyne5 [2011-08-31 14:01:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you like it. I hope to have the next chapter out soon.
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BorgiaWriter In reply to Elexora [2011-08-24 17:58:49 +0000 UTC]
Severus is my favorite character to write (which is probably why I write him the most). I'm glad that line amused you. ^_^
I haven't read too many James/Lily fics, but from the ones that I have read, I feel I can say that this isn't the usual James/Lily fic (especially since most completely ignore Snape, given my understanding...)
I'm really glad you like James and Lily. I had to work hard to get the characters right... Lupin, since he's not the focus of this fic, hasn't has as much development for this fiction... so if he seems a little OOC then that would be why (that and I haven't written a Lupin-centric fic for ages...)
You seem to have a good eye. I hope you continue reading.
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BorgiaWriter In reply to yellow-tulips [2011-08-24 17:54:35 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
I work as hard as I can to understand the characters, since I feel that the only way you can write the characters is if you have complete understanding of them. That's just how I write.
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psychoGG [2011-08-24 03:22:56 +0000 UTC]
coooOOOO000ool !
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lissabug416 In reply to BorgiaWriter [2011-08-24 04:19:10 +0000 UTC]
*hugs back* POOR SEV.
This is a beautiful piece of writing, though.
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BorgiaWriter In reply to makeawish114 [2011-08-24 01:40:57 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I try my best to make sure that my writing is in the best shape it can be in. I hope you continue to read it!
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Scottie-Bailey [2011-08-23 07:45:40 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh! I can't wait to read this as it progresses! More please!!!! *Follows, Watches, and Llamas Borgia*
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BorgiaWriter In reply to Scottie-Bailey [2011-08-23 13:51:44 +0000 UTC]
Aww. Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it! *pets llama*
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BorgiaWriter In reply to lepetityoshi [2011-08-23 13:53:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
You'll have to keep reading to find out *mischievous grin*
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BorgiaWriter In reply to TheLecterToMyClarice [2011-08-23 13:55:29 +0000 UTC]
I love writing Snape... James is a little harder for me to write, perhaps it's because of my bias... but I try to give James a fair chance for this story.
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BorgiaWriter In reply to Phictionmaker7 [2011-08-23 13:58:37 +0000 UTC]
I'm a Snily shipper (have been since the get go...) but this is James/Lily, Lily/Snape piece (though the extent to which those ships get realized you'll have to continue reading to find out).
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Phictionmaker7 In reply to BorgiaWriter [2011-08-24 04:07:39 +0000 UTC]
ohhha mysterous!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (can't spell!) i have a James and lily fic, would u tell me if it sucks or not?
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BorgiaWriter In reply to Phictionmaker7 [2011-08-24 04:17:32 +0000 UTC]
I'll take a look at it. Might take a day or two for me to get to it though.
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