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BorjaPascual — Ana 7 by-nc-nd

Published: 2010-08-26 22:05:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 830; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 35
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Description Model: The beautiful Ana
Photographer: Me,
Special thanks: Sara, for making this set possible

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©2010 Borja Pascual.
It is prohibited to distribute, copy, modify or refer to this picture without my express authorization. It's not allowed to share my work without my express authorization. I have full permission of the model and its legal representation for using this picture. It is prohibited any kind of disrespect towards de model. Disrespecting users will be banned.
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Comments: 16

Squirrelflight-77 [2010-11-23 00:32:48 +0000 UTC]

Hello! I'm part of the Critique Squad at This is a very beautiful portrait and I love the subtle detail on the hair and skin. And I think the processing works very well for this image. It's soft and introspective. I think the eyes could be a bit sharper and it would have more impact if she were either looking toward you or straight ahead. Overall a wonderful portrait!

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BorjaPascual In reply to Squirrelflight-77 [2010-11-23 08:15:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! About the sharpness... what can I say: Sony A200 with the default lens. >_<

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Squirrelflight-77 In reply to BorjaPascual [2010-11-23 13:11:12 +0000 UTC]

Not so.. I have the A230 and the kit lens is definitely capable of producing a sharp image. If you look carefully you will see that your focus area in this image is off. In the top right corner the hair further back is in focus and on the other side the hair is also in focus further back. You were just a little too close. Just keep playing with it..

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BorjaPascual In reply to Squirrelflight-77 [2010-11-23 15:10:04 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha it's true! thanks for the feedback!

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ImagesNRC [2010-11-22 22:36:09 +0000 UTC]

Have come across your images as part of the Portraitclub critique pool. It stands out boldly against the other images for a number of reasons; It's use of black and white with the strong left/right diagonal as well as the off-camera eyes. It is full of emotion and yet void at the same time. The skin treatment as well as the light areas in the lower right and top are a bit distracting and are what is keeping this image from being outstanding. Overall I find it a wonderful piece of work that anyone would be proud to have created! Well done. Do more!

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BorjaPascual In reply to ImagesNRC [2010-11-22 22:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! About the skin treatment, I wanted to create some sort of porcelain feel, but maybe I got a little over the top. About the light areas, I'm fixing them with PS right now Thank you!

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ImagesNRC In reply to BorjaPascual [2010-11-22 22:44:52 +0000 UTC]

Porcelain is tough to achieve correctly. Done right it looks great. But I don't really think it needs it. the image is so strong simply from your use of crop and angle and that wonderful expression.

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BorjaPascual In reply to ImagesNRC [2010-11-22 22:49:39 +0000 UTC]

better now?

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ImagesNRC In reply to BorjaPascual [2010-11-22 22:57:53 +0000 UTC]

Can I see your before and after? Looks good overall. Did you lighten the eyes?

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BorjaPascual In reply to ImagesNRC [2010-11-23 08:00:46 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha I'm afraid I wrote over it ^^U I just darken the zones you said and made my sking work a little bit subtle

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76204016 [2010-09-09 11:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Great shot... I delete almost all my deviation stacks..
This impressed me ,I couldn't pass it by

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BorjaPascual In reply to 76204016 [2010-09-09 17:43:29 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much! Oh, and thanks for the faves, and the llama, and watching...

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76204016 In reply to BorjaPascual [2010-09-09 21:18:29 +0000 UTC]

No problemO at all..
You deserve it all

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BorjaPascual In reply to 76204016 [2010-09-09 21:52:42 +0000 UTC]

^^

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LemurianWanderer [2010-09-09 00:43:34 +0000 UTC]

This is a great portrait!

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BorjaPascual In reply to LemurianWanderer [2010-09-09 17:43:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot! and thanks for the fave, too!

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