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Squirrelflight-77 [2010-11-23 00:32:48 +0000 UTC]
Hello! I'm part of the Critique Squad at This is a very beautiful portrait and I love the subtle detail on the hair and skin. And I think the processing works very well for this image. It's soft and introspective. I think the eyes could be a bit sharper and it would have more impact if she were either looking toward you or straight ahead. Overall a wonderful portrait!
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BorjaPascual In reply to Squirrelflight-77 [2010-11-23 08:15:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! About the sharpness... what can I say: Sony A200 with the default lens. >_<
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ImagesNRC [2010-11-22 22:36:09 +0000 UTC]
Have come across your images as part of the Portraitclub critique pool. It stands out boldly against the other images for a number of reasons; It's use of black and white with the strong left/right diagonal as well as the off-camera eyes. It is full of emotion and yet void at the same time. The skin treatment as well as the light areas in the lower right and top are a bit distracting and are what is keeping this image from being outstanding. Overall I find it a wonderful piece of work that anyone would be proud to have created! Well done. Do more!
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ImagesNRC In reply to BorjaPascual [2010-11-22 22:44:52 +0000 UTC]
Porcelain is tough to achieve correctly. Done right it looks great. But I don't really think it needs it. the image is so strong simply from your use of crop and angle and that wonderful expression.
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ImagesNRC In reply to BorjaPascual [2010-11-22 22:57:53 +0000 UTC]
Can I see your before and after? Looks good overall. Did you lighten the eyes?
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BorjaPascual In reply to ImagesNRC [2010-11-23 08:00:46 +0000 UTC]
Hahahaha I'm afraid I wrote over it ^^U I just darken the zones you said and made my sking work a little bit subtle
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76204016 [2010-09-09 11:13:47 +0000 UTC]
Great shot... I delete almost all my deviation stacks..
This impressed me ,I couldn't pass it by
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BorjaPascual In reply to 76204016 [2010-09-09 17:43:29 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much! Oh, and thanks for the faves, and the llama, and watching...
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LemurianWanderer [2010-09-09 00:43:34 +0000 UTC]
This is a great portrait!
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