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BourneLach — 4.Ghosts of the past

Published: 2011-10-25 11:25:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 782; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 7
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Description For Naruto-Artists contest

Theme: Ghosts of the past


---Shikamaru has noone to play shogi with now Asuma is gone
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Comments: 17

TwosUp [2013-06-09 10:16:28 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome !!!

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BourneLach In reply to TwosUp [2013-06-09 14:06:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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ElectraPendulum [2011-12-01 20:33:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow....
This is really powerful. Asuma's lighter is like the only part of him that Shikamaru has left. (Until that baby arrives. )
The drawing is fantastic as well... the concept is great. Amazing job.

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BourneLach In reply to ElectraPendulum [2011-12-02 01:45:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow thanks so much

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Mandy-Of-The-Desert [2011-11-30 21:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Great picture..at the end it makes me wanna cry...I hate that Asuma dies...
But I like your idea ^.^

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soph-m [2011-11-30 17:39:09 +0000 UTC]

wow! thats like....great! amazing in fact!

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ForeverPERCABETH [2011-11-30 17:06:06 +0000 UTC]

Very original idea, I like it. I've entered aswell, didn't think about these two. Nice work, faved XD

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RaisingTheCrescendo [2011-11-26 02:48:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm entering this contest also... So good luck.... I really like this idea :\ UGH i should have thought of it first :d Mine is still centered around Naruto.. I b entering it 2mrw.... Im still having issues with shading

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BourneLach In reply to RaisingTheCrescendo [2011-11-27 07:36:13 +0000 UTC]

hey bro! thanks yeah shadeing is abit of a difficult area especially when most of the colours are of similair tones. Good luck too, ill be looking for your entry

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RaisingTheCrescendo In reply to BourneLach [2011-11-27 13:35:14 +0000 UTC]

:] I getting better i used to just do line art....
And thanks for the kind words

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Fernvii [2011-10-29 17:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Hey this is fantastic! I mean, really creative. Perfect job for the theme.

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BourneLach In reply to Fernvii [2011-10-30 07:19:20 +0000 UTC]

Cheers bud

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Fernvii In reply to BourneLach [2011-10-30 18:09:32 +0000 UTC]

Kudos!

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Kishex-Nevarx [2011-10-25 19:36:29 +0000 UTC]

I really like this, and I understand Shikamaru's pain.

The only bits of criticism I have is this;

1) The fact that Shika's holding a lighter and lighting it seems a bit random. Maybe if it was from a regular candle or if Shikamaru was smoking, I think it would make more sense. I dunno, it seems kind of weird.
2) The shading; while I believe it's quite good, maybe you old soften it up a bit?

Other than that, I wish you luck.

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BourneLach In reply to Kishex-Nevarx [2011-10-26 02:41:44 +0000 UTC]

Dont know if you follow the show but the lighter is Asumas (because he smoked)when he died shikamaru had it. and Yea i totally agree with the shadeing im not that good at it.... but im getting better

Thanks for the advice

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Kishex-Nevarx In reply to BourneLach [2011-10-26 20:59:41 +0000 UTC]

Well either or...

Good luck.

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Mochimii In reply to Kishex-Nevarx [2011-10-26 02:26:34 +0000 UTC]

The lighter belonged to Asuma, so it makes more sense that he's using it.

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