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Published: 2020-06-09 04:25:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 1232; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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(Scene 1)At Margari's house, Archie was sitting alone in the living room watching TV. Unfortunately not many shows that he likes are on, he sighs and turns off the TV.
Archie: Is there nothing good to watch?
Eclipse was sitting in the kitchen eating a ham sandwich, he responded to Archie's question.
Eclipse: On what?
Archie: On TV, all the shows that are on right now are boring as fish.
Eclipse then walked into the living room and sat next to Archie.
Eclipse: How are fish boring? They can do a lot of things.
Archie: How would you know?
Eclipse: I remember when i first saw them in the sea and they looked cool with their fancy colours and scales. One fish even had claws and 10 legs!
Archie: That's... an't a fish Eclipse, that's a crab. They have claws and 10 legs.
Eclipse: Well there are definitely fish that do cool stuff, I remember when Margari met some fish and they made her laugh.
Archie: Really? How?
Eclipse: They kept poking at her belly and it made her laugh. The same way when I had my tail and poked her with it, just to cheer her up.
Archie: By tickling her?
Eclipse: I don't know why, but whenever I do it she gets mad at me. She even got mad at the fish.
Archie: When you touch a sensitive part of someones body, it causes a reaction that makes them laugh.
Eclipse: But why does she hate it?
Archie: Well most people don't like getting tickled. Does she ask you to stop?
Eclipse: She says it when I try to do it, then she forgets until I stop doing it.
Archie then thought of an idea to kill his boredom.
Archie: Seems like Margari is very ticklish.
Archie then summoned a feather from his hand.
Archie: Eclipse, let's say we give Margari a laugh of a lifetime.
Eclipse: What do you mean?
Archie: Let's have fun with her by tickling her.
Eclipse: But what if she gets mad at us?
Archie: Don't worry, I have a plan to avoid that.
Archie smiled with a face of mischief and winked.
Eclipse then gave of a sinister smile and winked back.
(Scene 2)
Eclipse and Archie stood outside Margari's bedroom.
Eclipse bared his hands at the ready with Archie behind him.
Archie: Here's the plan, you will go in and hold her down to make sure she doesn't try to get away.
Eclipse: Got it, I'll make sure she doesn't escape from my grasp.
(Scene 3)
Margari was watching some YouTube videos on her phone in her room, wearing a white vest and knickers.
She got bored and looked at the time.
Margari: I should go check on the guys and see if they are okay.
She put down her phone and walked to her door.
As soon as she was about to turn the knob to open the door, it turned by itself.
Margari: What the heck?
(Scene 4)
The door bursts open, making Margari fall onto her bed. Eclipse ran through and jumped towards Margari.
Eclipse: COME HERE MARGARI!
Margari scream as Eclipse lept behind her and held her arms behind her head.
Margari: ECLIPSE! WHAT'S THE MEANING OF THIS?
Eclipse: We just wanna have some fun with you.
Margari: We?
(Scene 5)
Archie entered Margari's room and moved towards Margari with a mischievous look on his face.
Archie: Sorry for scaring you Margari, we got bored and wanted to play with you.
He pulls out the feather.
Archie: Eclipse here told me that you are quite the ticklish one, is this true?
Margari then looked at the feather and her eyes widened with fear.
Archie: Your face seems to say yes, hopefully you're not too ticklish.
Margari: DONT DO IT!
Archie: Do what Margari?
Margari: Don't you DARE think about trying!
She tried to break free from Eclipse's grasp, but he was too strong for her.
Eclipse: Come on Margari, tell us why you don't wanna be tickled?
Margari: It drives me crazy, my parents and siblings tickled me when I was young.
Archie: And is that why you hate being tickled?
Margari: Yes, now let me go before I get mad!
(Scene 6)
Archie: I would, but then we wouldn't have any fun letting you go without your dose of laughter.
Margari: WHAT!?
Archie: You don't hate tickling, you just hate being the victim of tickling.
Margari: ARCHIE I SWEAR TO GOD, YOU BETTER PUT THAT FEATHER DOWN, IM NOT KIDDING!
Archie: Saying that makes me not to want to it.
Margari was now panicking, she tried to kick herself free from Eclipse.
Eclipse: Sorry Margari, but we an't letting you go until we hear you laugh!
Archie: In 3 seconds, I shall make this feather dance on your belly.
Archie: 3...
Margari: ARCHIE!
Archie: 2...
Margari was now shaking with horror, with no way out she held her eyes shut.
Archie then lifted up her vest to show her belly
Archie: 1!
Archie wiggled the feather across her stomach, Margari held her breath, trying not to laugh.
Eclipse: Archie, she's not laughing.
Archie: Trying to hold it in, come on Margari. What wrong with a bit of laughter?
She gave no response, she opened an eye and looked at Archie with a face of anger.
Archie: Giving me the silent treatment eh?
Eclipse: Go for her feet, it usually makes her laugh.
Margari then turned her head towards Eclipse, staring at him with furious eyes, so furious to the point were her eyes turned red.
Margari:ECLIPSE! WHY WOULD YOU TELL HIM THAT!
Eclipse grinned.
Eclipse: You might need some help Archie.
(Scene 7)
Archie then pulled out his staff.
Archie: Indeed, luckily I can bring a few extra pair of HANDS!
Archie then summoned 2 extra hands near Margari's feet.
Archie: You'll start laughing eventually Margari, you can't hold it in forever!
He then started stoking Margari's soles with extra pair of hand's fingers.
Margari let out a small moan of agony, she tried to move her feet away but only made it worse.
Archie was now losing his patience, he wanted to break Margari.
Archie: You're doing well keeping in your laughter. But now it's time to go in for the kill!
Archie then summoned feathers in both of the extra hands and started wiggling them near Margari's toes.
Margari was now struggling to hold in her laughter. She couldn't take it anymore.
Margari: Mmmmmm!
Archie then attacked both her stomach and feet with the feathers.
Margari: ahhHHH GOD DAMN IT ARCHIE! STOP IT! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Eclipse: There we go. Doesn't it feel better to let it all out?
Margari: SCREW YOU ECLI-AAAAAHHHHH!
Archie: Mind your manners Margari. This is supposed to be fun.
Margari: HOW IS ANY OF THIS FUN?!
Archie then started to tease Margari.
Archie: Aren't you having fun Margari?
Margari: NO IM NOT THANK YOU VERY MUCH! YEEHAAAHAHAHAHAHA!
Eclipse: looks like she needs more tickling!
Archie then held Margari's arms in place with his magic and allowed Eclipse to assist him.
Eclipse: let's try under here!
Eclipse dug his long nails into Margari's armpits and started poking her with them.
Margari: NANAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NOT THEREHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA!
Margari was laughing so much, tears started poring from her eyes.
Archie: Aw Eclipse, you made her upset.
Eclipse: We'll just have to keep going till she's happy again!
Margari: NO, STOP IT PLEASE! YOU TWO WILL PAY FOR THIS! AHHHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
They continued to tickle Margari for 20 minutes, she was now sweating heavily and had no more energy left to laugh.
Margari: Please... no more... please!
Archie: Well it has been long, alright Eclipse, she's done now.
They stopped tickling her and freed her from the torture. She fell onto her bed, eyes filled with tears and panting like crazy.
Eclipse: That was fun!
Archie: a lot of fun!
They both laughed as Margari slowly regained her breath.
She then stood up and grabbed both Archie and Eclipse by their shoulders.
Margari: I told... you both... to stop...
She then yanked them towards her and they were both horrified by the expression on her face.
Her hair was a mess, she was covered in sweat, her eyes were bloodshot red, steam came off her forehead and her face was full of pure crimson rage.
Margari: If you two try to tickle me again...
She then slammed them up against her bedroom wall.
Margari: I WILL MAKE YOU BOTH SUFFER PAIN WORSE THAN DEATH ITSELF!
Archie and Eclipse faces were pale white.
Margari: I TOLD YOU BOTH TO STOP AND YOU IGNORED ME FOR 20 MINUTES STRAIGHT! MY HAIR IS A MESS, I'M COMPLETELY COVERED IN SWEAT, AND I HADN'T HAD ANY FUN BEING TORTURED BY BOTH OF YOU!
Margari's eyes started filling up with tears.
She then let the boys drop to the ground, they were too scared to say anything.
She then screamed loudly at them, so loudly that it almost made her lose her voice.
Margari: GET OUT! GET THE HELL OUT OF MY ROOM, NOW!!! AND DON'T YOU DARE COME BACK IN HERE!
They both quickly got out of Margari's room as fast as they could. Once they were out, they turned around to see that she was still staring at them, shaking with anger.
She then slammed her door shut and shouted at them one last time.
Margari: YOU EVIL JERKS!
Eclipse and Archie were both horrified. Never in their life have they seen Margari get that mad before.
Eclipse: You think we may have took it a bit too far?
Archie: Way too far.
They heard Margari sobbing in her room. Eclipse wanted to go and apologise but was stopped by Archie.
Archie: Don't, she warned us to stay out. It's best we wait till she calms down.
Eclipse: I knew she would get mad at as, and YOU was the one who came up with the idea in the first place!
Archie: I didn't think she would go off on us like that.
Eclipse: Well now she won't let us apologise!
Archie felt horrible, he didn't mean to over do it. But the damage was already done.
Eclipse: Once she calms down, we are imminently going to say sorry. Especially for not stopping when we were told to.
Archie: That I take full blame for... I didn't mean to drag you into this mess.
Eclipse: I'm going to go back and finish off my sandwich.
He then left Archie alone in the living room.
Archie was filled with guilt. He got Eclipse in trouble for something he planned and made Margari so mad and upset.
He hit himself in the head, thinking about how he was to going make up for all of this.
(Extra story scene)
A few hours pass and Margari was still hiding in her room.
Eclipse had just finished cooking some pizza and was hoping that Margari would come out and eat some.
Eclipse: Margari! I made pizza! Come get it while it's still hot!
She didn't respond.
Eclipse then knocked on Margari's door.
Eclipse: Margari? You haven't eaten anything in hours, at least come and satisfy your hunger.
Margari still didn't say anything.
Eclipse: Well, if you wanna have some, it's on the kitchen table.
Eclipse then sat down with the pizza on the table.
Archie was still in the living room, feeling guilty and ashamed.
Margari then came out of her room, wearing a dressing gown. She looked at Archie who was sitting on the couch. She then proceeded to the kitchen table.
Eclipse was too busy eating to notice Margari.
He was about to take another slice until he saw her.
Her hair was now fixed and she wasn't covered in sweat, but she was still angry.
She was looking at the slice of pizza in her hand, and took a small bite out of it.
Eclipse then stood up from his chair and cleared his throat.
Eclipse: Margari, I want to apologise for what I did.
Margari stopped chewing on her slice of pizza.
Eclipse: I can see that you're still mad at what we did to you, but we did it because we wanted to have some fun. I didn't mean to go crazy on you, I'm sorry Margari.
Margari took no notice and proceeded to chew on her pizza slice.
Eclipse heart sank. He felt like he had hurt Margari very badly.
Eclipse: Margari please! I'm sorry! I promise to never tickle you like that ever again!
Margari then looked at Eclipse, she sees that he was begging for her forgiveness.
Margari: Okay Eclipse... I accept your apology.
Eclipse then sat down in his chair.
Margari: But I still won't forgive you for ignoring my request to stop.
Eclipse then started to tear up in disappointment.
Margari: For 20 minutes, I begged you to stop. And you still continued.
Eclipse then hid his head in his arms and cried.
Eclipse: I didn't mean to... IM SORRY! I NEVER MENT TO HURT YOU!
Eclipse was bawling infront of Margari, but she only watch him cry.
Archie then stood up for Eclipse, he had enough of letting Eclipse take blame for his actions.
Archie: IT WASN'T HIS FAULT MARGARI!
Margari and Eclipse both looked at Archie.
Archie: I told him to not listen to you.
Margari eyes then widened after hearing that.
Archie: I just want to have some fun and i told everyone Eclipse to not let you go.
Eclipse wiped his tears and proceeded to listen to Archie.
Archie: Don't shame him for something I told him to do, I should be getting all the blame... I didn't think... I...
Archie then started to stutter on his words and was got angry at himself.
Archie: I made a stupid decision. I didn't think it would had effected you that much.
He then started to cry as we was explaining himself to Margari.
Archie: I DON'T WANT YOU TO THINK I DID IT ON PURPOSE, I JUST MADE A BAD MISTAKE. MARGARI, IM SORRY FOR TORTURING YOU BY TICKLING YOU FOR A LONG TIME! Please forgive me for my actions.
Margari was surprised to hear such an apology from Archie.
Margari: Archie, I wouldn't have minded the fact that you tickled me, but for 20 minutes. That was completely out of order!
She then got up from her chair and walked to Archie.
Archie: I know, I am a idiot for doing so, but I didn't think you would get so mad at us.
Margari then hit Archie, causing him to fall down.
Eclipse: Margari!
Margari: You hurt me Archie... never in my life had I ever been so mad at someone, I wanted to hurt them back.
Archie got up from the floor and hugged Margari.
Archie: I'm sorry Margari. Never again will I ever do any tricks like that, EVER!
Margari then hugged Archie.
Margari: And I'm sorry for yelling at the both of you.
Archie then let go of Margari and pulled out his hand and made a fist.
Archie: Friends?
Margari fist bumped Archie's fist.
Margari: Friends.
Eclipse then smiled happy as all was made up.
Eclipse: Well, this pizza an't gonna eat itself.
Margari and Archie then sat down with Eclipse and they all ate the pizza.
After they finished. Archie was about to get up from his chair when something poked him.
Archie: HEY WHAT THE-
Archie then lost his balance and fell over.
Margari: looks like I'm not the only one who's ticklish.
She then got up from her chair and picked up Archie
Archie: Why you little...
He was about to poke Margari back but then was held back by Eclipse.
Eclipse: Sorry Archie, this wasn't my idea.
Margari: PAYBACK TIME!
She then started tickling Archie.
Archie: HEY! THAT'S NOT FAIR, AHAHAHAA!
Archie the summoned a pair of hands and picked up Margari and laid her down on the living room couch.
He then push away Eclipse with his magic and brought him to the living room.
Archie: So you both wanna play like that huh?
Margari & Eclipse: Bring it!
They all started tickling each other, trying to avoid getting tickled.
5 minutes go by and they were all laying down on the floor, laughing and crying.
Margari: I think... we better end this on a truce.
Archie: Agreed...
Eclipse: Now I know why... you hate tickling Margari.
Margari: As long as you know your boundaries, I don't have anything to argue at.
They all laid on the floor, agreeing to their truce. Never to do anything like that ever again.
But it won't stop them from trying to get revenge on one another.
The End.
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