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circecil [2017-07-16 11:55:22 +0000 UTC]
Hey, would you mind if I gave some criticism about your oc and the art?
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circecil In reply to BrandonTheDarkAngel [2017-07-16 12:04:26 +0000 UTC]
Okay, so for the art:
The body looks extremely stiff, especially the arms, they look a lot like right-angles. The torso looks like a rectangle, though you could pass this off as the BATIM style, due to the ingame art of the characters (mainly bendy) having a blocky torso.
Also, the picture quality could be a lot better, and needs cropping.
And as for the character:
It looks very much like a copy of bendy with a few colour changes. If it were to fit into the BATIM universe, i suggest sticking to black and white/sepia because all of the 'ink' characters stick to it as-well.
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Moved-On In reply to circecil [2017-09-23 23:03:28 +0000 UTC]
hey can you please give me some criticism on some of my stuff
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circecil In reply to Moved-On [2017-09-24 08:08:23 +0000 UTC]
Sure! What piece would you like me to give critique on?
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Moved-On In reply to circecil [2017-09-24 09:26:03 +0000 UTC]
Β don't worry about being to harshΒ
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DebEdd In reply to circecil [2017-07-17 17:53:24 +0000 UTC]
I need criticism like this for everything in my gallery
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BrandonTheDarkAngel In reply to circecil [2017-07-16 12:05:44 +0000 UTC]
well I did at wings to him in the most recent version of him to make him different but I do agree with you
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ace-copular [2017-07-10 08:55:28 +0000 UTC]
holy shit its bendy with a red bowtie and some blue gloves
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ace-copular In reply to BrandonTheDarkAngel [2017-07-10 10:19:30 +0000 UTC]
its just a recolor dont call it your oc
just call it like
a c
becaueΒ its not original but it is a character
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BrandonTheDarkAngel In reply to ace-copular [2017-07-10 10:23:23 +0000 UTC]
he is my character I made him like that its not a recolor if it was a recolor I would have said its a recolor but I didn't I created this character for myself like I said he is me except as a ink demonΒ
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ace-copular In reply to BrandonTheDarkAngel [2017-07-10 10:31:31 +0000 UTC]
but it's just bendy with minor changesΒ
that makes it a recolor "oc"
its bendy
colored different
character colored different = recolor
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BlkPanther462 In reply to ace-copular [2017-10-05 03:48:40 +0000 UTC]
ok. a 'recolor oc' is an oc with different colors and that is it. this has minor yet obvious changes. look it up
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ace-copular In reply to BlkPanther462 [2017-10-05 11:51:04 +0000 UTC]
theye still minor
its still just bendy
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BlkPanther462 In reply to ace-copular [2017-10-06 00:32:45 +0000 UTC]
(le sigh) bruh. if you want an oc with minor changes, look at mine. it looks like a copy of bendy. but it is nothing like him.Β
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ace-copular In reply to BlkPanther462 [2017-10-06 02:32:26 +0000 UTC]
design and personality arent the same thing though
as for brandonΒ ive seen 0 personality out of him, so the main thing i look at is the design
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BlkPanther462 In reply to ace-copular [2017-10-08 01:45:10 +0000 UTC]
...true... maybe we should make him one? Also, look at the new design
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BrandonTheDarkAngel In reply to ace-copular [2017-07-10 10:36:34 +0000 UTC]
its not bendy he has my name on the first sketch I have of him I have a description of him and that matches me and I'm not good at drawing and I wanted to keep the look of bendy and if you do look closely he does have my eye color
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Amypony36 In reply to BrandonTheDarkAngel [2017-08-23 12:48:01 +0000 UTC]
Its still look like a rip off of Bendy, coz u just recolored the gloves,bow tie & eyes and adding angel wings 2 dis character won't make it look like a demon coz demon have bat wings.
Also don't u kno wut "OC" stand for?
O = Original
C = Character
The character in ur drawing is a "Fan Character" (FC) NOT an OC
An Original Character is a character dat is created from ur own ideas which is NOT base on any copyright characters, dats y its called "Original Character"
If u don't get wut I'm saying then watch dis video youtu.be/CXw9XbXhDR4 and youtu.be/9RvrrGlFI04 PLS watch it until the end so u can understand & DON'T judge these videos by its "title" but judge it by its "content"
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NoahTigerDragon [2017-07-01 17:36:15 +0000 UTC]
Look really cool
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Mousegirlabc [2017-07-01 15:22:11 +0000 UTC]
Kawaii! <3
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BrandonTheDarkAngel In reply to Mousegirlabc [2017-07-01 15:23:50 +0000 UTC]
and I can't wait to see how you will draw him in his ink form friendΒ Β
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Mousegirlabc In reply to BrandonTheDarkAngel [2017-07-01 15:24:44 +0000 UTC]
hehe, speaking of that, I'm going
to start drawing him that way now
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