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BrandonTheDarkAngel β Brandon The Ink Demon with his tail
Published: 2017-07-01 14:53:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 370; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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Brandon is owned by meBendy is owned by themeatly
ask me if you want to draw him
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heh. no problem
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*randomly flys away*
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Hey, would you mind if I gave some criticism about your oc and the art?
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Okay, so for the art:
The body looks extremely stiff, especially the arms, they look a lot like right-angles. The torso looks like a rectangle, though you could pass this off as the BATIM style, due to the ingame art of the characters (mainly bendy) having a blocky torso.
Also, the picture quality could be a lot better, and needs cropping.
And as for the character:
It looks very much like a copy of bendy with a few colour changes. If it were to fit into the BATIM universe, i suggest sticking to black and white/sepia because all of the 'ink' characters stick to it as-well.
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hey can you please give me some criticism on some of my stuff
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Sure! What piece would you like me to give critique on?
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Β don't worry about being to harshΒ
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I need criticism like this for everything in my gallery
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well I did at wings to him in the most recent version of him to make him different but I do agree with you
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holy shit its bendy with a red bowtie and some blue gloves
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and blue eyes and that is me as bendy
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its just a recolor dont call it your oc
just call it like
a c
becaueΒ its not original but it is a character
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he is my character I made him like that its not a recolor if it was a recolor I would have said its a recolor but I didn't I created this character for myself like I said he is me except as a ink demonΒ
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but it's just bendy with minor changesΒ
that makes it a recolor "oc"
its bendy
colored different
character colored different = recolor
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ok. a 'recolor oc' is an oc with different colors and that is it. this has minor yet obvious changes. look it up
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theye still minor
its still just bendy
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(le sigh) bruh. if you want an oc with minor changes, look at mine. it looks like a copy of bendy. but it is nothing like him.Β
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design and personality arent the same thing though
as for brandonΒ ive seen 0 personality out of him, so the main thing i look at is the design
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...true... maybe we should make him one? Also, look at the new design
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good that he improved!
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its not bendy he has my name on the first sketch I have of him I have a description of him and that matches me and I'm not good at drawing and I wanted to keep the look of bendy and if you do look closely he does have my eye color
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Its still look like a rip off of Bendy, coz u just recolored the gloves,bow tie & eyes and adding angel wings 2 dis character won't make it look like a demon coz demon have bat wings.
Also don't u kno wut "OC" stand for?
O = Original
C = Character
The character in ur drawing is a "Fan Character" (FC) NOT an OC
An Original Character is a character dat is created from ur own ideas which is NOT base on any copyright characters, dats y its called "Original Character"
If u don't get wut I'm saying then watch dis video youtu.be/CXw9XbXhDR4 and youtu.be/9RvrrGlFI04 PLS watch it until the end so u can understand & DON'T judge these videos by its "title" but judge it by its "content"
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that's my Bendy OC
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anybody can use him
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I wish we had more time
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I was ready
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sorry I am very tired but be ready tomorrow
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Your Welcome
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you're welcome! cx
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and I can't wait to see how you will draw him in his ink form friendΒ Β
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hehe, speaking of that, I'm going
to start drawing him that way now
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