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Breaking-The-Girl β€” Sometimes...
Published: 2007-02-01 15:29:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 241; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description It echoes sometimes,
As I walk past the door.
The sound of your voice,
Your step on the floor.
I smile to myself,
When I think of the way,
You slipped from my room,
Just before break of day.
How we lay whispering,
Maintained the charade.
Lovers by night.
Good friends by day.
I wanted so badly,
To look in your eye.
But I knew if I did,
They’d see through our lies.
Where we as clever,
As we thought we were being?
You sneaking upstairs,
With nobody seeing.
Could they really miss,
Those lingering looks?
As we sat playing cards,
Or reading those books.
I loved the drama,
But I missed holding you.
Next time will be different,
Only we two.
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Comments: 19

kittytsukasa [2007-02-03 00:03:51 +0000 UTC]

It's so beautiful!

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Breaking-The-Girl In reply to kittytsukasa [2007-02-03 10:05:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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goldenwind [2007-02-02 19:00:21 +0000 UTC]

*uh* you rule. If only I could write like that dammit.

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Breaking-The-Girl In reply to goldenwind [2007-02-02 20:04:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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BaboonsMistress [2007-02-02 04:18:04 +0000 UTC]

god, your amazing

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Breaking-The-Girl In reply to BaboonsMistress [2007-02-02 14:34:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, sweetie. I miss you

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BaboonsMistress In reply to Breaking-The-Girl [2007-02-04 01:02:03 +0000 UTC]

i have been on every night, but we just need to find a time be on together i miss you too

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dazydaze13 [2007-02-02 02:16:47 +0000 UTC]

=] ur a really good poet

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Breaking-The-Girl In reply to dazydaze13 [2007-02-02 14:34:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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LeytonC [2007-02-02 00:12:21 +0000 UTC]

^_^ really nice

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Breaking-The-Girl In reply to LeytonC [2007-02-02 14:35:05 +0000 UTC]

Cheers Ley.

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silentlyFuckedup [2007-02-01 21:34:42 +0000 UTC]

This is a great poem.... Things like that make you smile... for days... great poem...

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Breaking-The-Girl In reply to silentlyFuckedup [2007-02-02 14:36:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. And yes they do

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xEnOniC [2007-02-01 19:05:26 +0000 UTC]

oh i love this one...perfect for fav.
love for writing wonderful verses "bear hug"...you are blessed with writing skills.

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Breaking-The-Girl In reply to xEnOniC [2007-02-02 14:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, hon. Just as you are blessed with fabulous skills of your own.

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xEnOniC In reply to Breaking-The-Girl [2007-02-02 18:34:55 +0000 UTC]

well...you are better i feel gr8 for you

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Breaking-The-Girl In reply to xEnOniC [2007-02-02 20:09:25 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwwwwww

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xancithus [2007-02-01 17:46:22 +0000 UTC]

*envies*

Great poem

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Breaking-The-Girl In reply to xancithus [2007-02-01 18:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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