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Published: 2010-12-30 22:16:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 2132; Favourites: 105; Downloads: 0
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stalowe wrota do wnętrza przemysłu.....................................
'gates'
steel gates to industrial innards
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The piece in its entirety is its cynosure: it does not guide the eye, but allows it to guide itself....
A very chilling atmosphere, like the setting of the film Aliens or any other well done Science Fiction thriller. The lighting is just fantastic; bright in places so as to cast eerie shadows, but it is also dark in others, allowing the mind to wander, the imagination to wonder and the eyes to play tricks... what goes bump in here, in this dark place? It gives that feeling that something untoward or gruesome, misshapen and terrifying may come quickly (i didn't want to say "jump" or "pop") from around the corner of one of the machines. Or it may instead reach down some horrible, mutated hand or inhuman claw from one of the exposed air vents. I love pieces like this; ones that allow the mind to fill in the blanks, that sends shivers up and down the spine, that plays tricks on the mind.
It is the most excellent execution of technique that allowed for this. The exposure is, to me, perfect. It allows for just the right amount of light, just the right amount of visibility to still allow for unseen movements. The focus seems, again to me, perfect. There is no forced perspective, no one focal point; for an f-stop of 2.8, all things are amazingly clear and crisp. Everything is in focus, there is no one area that screams, "Here! Here I am, look here. I am the centre, the core, the nucleus of it all." The viewer's eyes are thus allowed to wander across the piece, to search out and try to peer into (and around) corners. Yes, the piece naturally draws you down the centre line of uneven concrete slabs toward the terminus (a brilliant touch) but there is so much to absorb along the way, that it takes time.
I for one really enjoy the colour here, nothing is too brightly coloured or over-saturated; the piece has a subdued and even colouring, a subdued and even quality. I absolutely respect (and envy) the restraint displayed in the editing as a whole; though most especially in not over-colouring or over-saturating certain areas (a definite failing of mine e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
"There is no need to worry, nothing to fear, the lights are on... but what happens when the lights go out?"
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Thank you a lot for your critique, I enjoy your point of view
Great to read these all words to see how other people experience my own work!
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you're very welcome
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Really beautiful... although beautiful maybe is a weird word for such industrial environments...
Anyway - it's a great shot. Though it's not the eyecatcher it needs to be. Here's what I would consider:
- I love the cyan shades in the air vent (its great how they seem to hang quite loosely btw), also the red in the switch (?) to the left. Maybe enhance these colors? Also maybe you can make the bright parts a slight bit brighter.
But like I said these would all be efforts to make it more of an eyecatcher. Once I look at it in full as I do now this is pretty perfect.
cheers e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thanks Joerg for honest critique! First of all this is great wiht premium account that I can get more words about shots not only like/dislike
Well, I think word 'beauty' fits to industrial themes - for me this is beauty, and you can see how I really enjoy such themes browsing my gallery
I was trying first to make it bw, but when I was trying differnet options with colours I said this time i will not use bw - it is almost like you said heh. Dark areas I think should remain in this level or dark - adding or removing some of it is just different point of view of other persons - hope you know what I mean
Anyway - thanks again!
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You're very welcome, it's really a great picture.
cheers, and I'll go have a look at your gallery, I generally love industrial (though I haven't done much yet myself... I don't even really like the only industrial shot I posted yet... hm...)
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to znaczy że Twoje imię i nazwisko kojarzą mi się z byciem znaną osobą.
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ale co by nei mówić, nie nadaję się do tańca z gwiazdami ;d
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może więc do mam talent?
chodź pójdziemy we dwoje, będziemy robić zdjęcia na scenie...
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no nie wiem, nie wiem hehe
zdjęcia sceny
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zależy kto by nimi był i co robił :d
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zakładam, że kadra byłaby ta sama.. oj by się działo
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nie mam pojęcia jaka jest :]
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z tego co pamiętam to wojewódzki, chylińska i ktoś jeszcze
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a no tak, to coś mi świta - bo tyle tych programow i nie wiem kto gdzie ejst
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to this one, yes.
sometimes I do't have, so then photo trip is almost like survival in the enemy territory
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Yeah, I know that feeing :>
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very cool! i love the lighting and the composition! very cool feel to this photo! nice work!
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nice to read your kind words
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przypomina mi wnetrze EC Miechowice i jej wnętrze z młynami i kotłami..
Fajny, niespokojny ten obraz..
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dzięki MArek!
elektrociepłownie mają kilka wspólnych elementów jak zdołałem zauważyć odwiedzając już kilka, ale nie jest to dla mnie wadą oczywiście hehe
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ogólnie jak sama wiesz, mam parcie na bw, ale tutaj faktycznie, zupełnie nie pasowało
dzięki!
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no no no, jestem pod wrażeniem
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