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Yay for creative titles! (Not..)Anyway this is a request from
I decided to so a shiny Lucario.. i really have no idea why
and the riolu is just like O_O ARMAGOD SHINY
.. im hyper today sorry xD
Hope you like it ~StripesdeChipmunk <3
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wow the person who requested it didn't even comment even though this is awesome
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I like everything about this picture! Especially the background... I love the effect. SHINY LUCARIO I want one right now! 
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hahaha thank you
i want one too
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The background seems a little lazy, and there a couple of anatomical corrections that might need some tweaking, but I really like it. Especially the lucario (despite the fact that I prefer the normal ones, you've made the colour really nice here). Well done
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:3 yeah i hate doing backgrounds with coloured pencils haha, they always look awful with me ><
And i know Riolus legs looks like a chickens legs >< hahaha but please tell me anything else? I need to improve :3
And thank you for the feedback :3
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Not awful, just lazy, though it's reminded me that I should learn how to do backgrounds myself. Always happy to give feedback, so let's see...
- Lucario is more or less perfect, just that he looks a little stiff.
- Riolu's a bit the same, looking very stiff, and thus unnatural. His right arm looks a little off, but that could just be the marking on his wrist throwing me, his hips are a little too round, his paws could probably be a little bigger, and I don't quite like his expression. It might just be a spot too much black, but something about that face doesn't seem right.
So my best advice is to try making things look more flowy instead of stiff..I hope that helped but I don't really know how to explain how to do that...
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ahhh i see now
With Riolu, he was supposed to look stiff :3, as in being nervous in meeting the shiny Lucario, like the title says he is starstruck
but nevertheless he may be a little bit TOO stiff ><
Ill be honest i had a hard time drawing riolu haha, i really dont like his design ><, ill try to improve upon it in future :L
would you take a look at this? :[link]
I tried to be more constructive with the background here haha with all the shadows and everything
Id love to hear what you think!
Thanks again :3 <3
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You've done well, I don't tend to point out too many good things in a work if I'm trying to be constructive. And in the other image they look a lot more fluid. And the constructiveness shows.
Not a problem, happy to try and help ^^
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I like it when people point out the flaws! It gives me a base to improve upon
Thanks again <3
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