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Description Appala's prophecy

Chapter 3

"Um… thanks" I muttered as I looked down at my feet. "Oh no problem at all after all I am speaking the truth" he said as he winked those caramel brown eyes at me again! "Um… thanks" I muttered again. "Well, we should take you to the infirmary first" said Carson then he lifted me up with those tan arms that were thick in the muscles. "The what?" I asked in confusion. "The infirmary" he said as if it were obvious. "Oh mkay I guess" I said as he carried me off. We reached the infirmary and he set me down and walked off after kissing my forehead. "Alright what have we got here?" asked a girl with a bow in her hands and a quiver on her back. "Um who are you?" I asked in confusion. "I'm Cami daughter of Apollo healer, archer, and musician!" she answered very enthusiastically. "I'm here to take care of that nasty, nasty wound ya got on your shoulder" she said as she touched my shoulder. "OW!" I yelled as her finger came into contact with my skin. "Omg im so sorry can you take your tank top off for me?" she asked. "Ugh sure if it's necessary" I said as I took of my tank top. "Alright this might hurt a little" Cami said as she touched my back and it turned to a nasty scar. "Done it should be a little sore other than that you should be good to go!" she said then looked kinda confused as I walked halfway out the door then I was yanked back inside. "Oh that's what I forgot silly me here ya go" she said as she handed me an orange shirt with the words Camp Half Blood on the front with a cute little Pegasus underneath. "That's your camp shirt and here's your necklace" she said. "Now you can go" and with that she shoved me out the door I was whisked away by Carson and dropped off at the Aphrodite cabin. "Hope you have a wonderful first day see you at capture the flag after dinner me and Percy and Annabeth of course decided we would have Aphrodite's kids with us tonight" and with that he turned on his heel and ran off. "Well, you're lucky" said a voice behind me. "And why would that be?" I asked as I whipped around to see a girl with a black braid running down her body with blue eyes and bangs she was pretty. "Well Carson has said many a time no daughter of Aphrodite can I like to shallow or stupid but hey he seems to like you" she said as she flipped he braid behind her back. "Oh... well I'm Appala" I am happy to hear that I think. "I'm Amber" she said "welcome to the family" she said then gave me a huge hug and dragged me into our cabin. "So you will be bunking with me sis!" she said and patted the top bunk. "Well it's time for training come on I'll show you around" she said as she whisked me off.
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Comments: 16

AlexMCopeman [2013-07-15 19:19:49 +0000 UTC]

wow you are amazing, i am drawing cami now

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brightshadow1222675 In reply to AlexMCopeman [2013-07-16 19:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha thanks you are two

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Maclafel7 [2013-07-07 23:01:22 +0000 UTC]

You're really smart to make each chapter so short. Most people on the internet don't have any attention span, so this is a really good idea!

Whoa, she's a demigod with two god parents?? That's so cool

And I love when OCs meet actual fictional characters, like Percy and Annabeth

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brightshadow1222675 In reply to Maclafel7 [2013-07-08 00:40:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks irk?! And her grandpa is Zeus her mom Aphrodite her dad was a demigod who fell in love with Aphrodite he then died in the hands of ares. I love it too

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Maclafel7 In reply to brightshadow1222675 [2013-07-08 23:07:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay. I was a little confused about that. Lol, Ares' revenge!

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brightshadow1222675 In reply to Maclafel7 [2013-07-09 16:01:02 +0000 UTC]

yeah i was to for a long time lol

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PrincessButtercup20 [2013-01-07 02:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Coolness!!

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brightshadow1222675 In reply to PrincessButtercup20 [2013-01-07 02:05:55 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!! any advice?! im actually going to draw everyone! Carson,Appala,Cami,And Amber!

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PrincessButtercup20 In reply to brightshadow1222675 [2013-01-19 18:53:18 +0000 UTC]

You could always have someone spell and grammer check it for you. That always helps me. And when there's a conversation between someone you make the conversation a new paragraph.
Exanple:
"I'm Cami daughter of Apollo healer, archer, and musician!" she answered very enthusiastically.
"I'm here to take care of that nasty, nasty wound ya got on your shoulder" she said as she touched my shoulder.
"OW!" I yelled as her finger came into contact with my skin.
"Oh, my gosh! I'm so sorry can you take your tank top off for me?" she asked.
"Ugh sure if it's necessary" I said as I took of my tank top.

Hope that helps!

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brightshadow1222675 In reply to PrincessButtercup20 [2013-01-21 18:20:47 +0000 UTC]

It does thank u

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PrincessButtercup20 In reply to brightshadow1222675 [2013-01-21 18:56:24 +0000 UTC]

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brightshadow1222675 In reply to PrincessButtercup20 [2013-01-21 21:03:49 +0000 UTC]

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PrincessButtercup20 In reply to brightshadow1222675 [2013-01-21 21:09:46 +0000 UTC]

How's the next chapter coming?

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brightshadow1222675 In reply to PrincessButtercup20 [2013-01-22 04:26:05 +0000 UTC]

I've been to busy

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PrincessButtercup20 In reply to brightshadow1222675 [2013-01-24 23:56:00 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I know what you mean.

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brightshadow1222675 In reply to PrincessButtercup20 [2013-01-25 01:36:08 +0000 UTC]


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