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BriskSunrise In reply to shinythrowaway [2015-06-12 07:53:15 +0000 UTC]
I agree. Finding a middle ground is one of the harder parts of this. I'm currently working on the thought of Ash, while trying to keep calm and go with the 'Ashley' thing out of having possibly resigned himself to his fate, still has some issues coping at various points. At this point, he is becoming fine with stuff that is somewhat girly. As you can see from the shopping trip part, he still gets embarrassed from really girly things.
In general, there is only so much one can react to such things until it reaches a point where it becomes harder to write the outright reluctance and similar reactions until it feels like it has become forced and unbelievable. By Johto, Ash will have eased quite a bit into 'Ashley'. By then, a little over a year and a half will have occured timeline-wise. He'll still have reluctance over various things, especially things that end up super girly and frilly.
His brashness and ability to stick his foot in his mouth will still occur, since he's still a kid, after all. His maturity lately is due to everything happening being right there in his thoughts, and his proximity to Erika and the other ladies of Celadon. On his own, and with his friends, he has the ability to relax more and be a little more like himself. I could see him sticking his foot in his mouth and realizing he did. I still plan on hotheadedness and passion being a part of his character even as he matures. That as he gets older, even when he can portray himself as mature and composed, there are many things that could still get him excited and bring out the inner child in him. Pokemon, training, food, awesome (To him) things, etc.
Trying to keep Ash's character while maturing him is definitely a thing I keep thinking about and trying to work on, and I'm glad that you brought it up in order for me to think more on it.
As for the maid Misty image? That's in my drawing plans. I have several ideas I want to do sometime. Not to mention a Maid Ashley & Dawn image. It's just a matter of getting to it. Besides Ashley drawings, I still have other things like the 'Pokedex' drawings with the Oddish/Bellossom, the Trainer Class drawings, the Flashback/Current Groove drawings... a lot of stuff. I just stink at prioritizing XD
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shinythrowaway In reply to BriskSunrise [2015-06-12 20:54:40 +0000 UTC]
Ah, excellent! You're very productive, so I'm definitely not complaining!
I'm glad it helps, and the proximity to Erika and the gym makes sense of things. The best way I can think of to keep reluctance/humiliated feelings/preferences for other things is to simply not have the lessons stick *that* definitively, as it has been rather definitive so far. These both make sense; as you said, being close to his sensei helps keep him in line, but at the same time life lessons don't stick (or have to stick) all that well, especially when it's about traits that clash so hard with his personality. It's something you'd have to lampshade, but IMO it's plausible that he'd still lose his cool in the same way, or even be (dare I say it) boyish. Heck, if you get creative enough, he could have some relapses as time goes on - his Hoenn getup seems particularly lively, for instance, while his Johto one implies a cultured, Yamato Nadeshika character. You're right to watch for this, as if he doesn't then he's not really Ash, which is the real fun.
Best of luck with it, though. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
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tf-whitestar [2015-06-10 02:27:43 +0000 UTC]
that's a very good chapter 11 that you've wrote.
will Ash's hair grow long then will Ash go to a barber shop to get a haircut? ;-?
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AFlyingCar [2015-06-09 07:30:30 +0000 UTC]
I liked this new chapter, can't wait for more!
By the way, your profile picture seems to fit so well with the first line of your description.
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aceina [2015-06-09 04:15:55 +0000 UTC]
ive been wondering is ash going to start identifying as female or what you have not been clear on that
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BriskSunrise In reply to aceina [2015-06-09 04:38:05 +0000 UTC]
Ashley most likely will end up identifying more with being female in the long run, mostly due to the fact that he is -- as of now -- presenting himself as female to people and is getting more and more accustomed to said aspects. This combined with the fact that he is now going to be registered as female means that yes, he is going to start identifying as female for the most part since that's how he will be seen.
At the same time, while he is going to be identifying as female for obvious reasons, Ashley would have less of an issue with the concept of male and female as a whole. The concept will eventually become a bit 'numb' to him since it'll be come less of an importance because of what he learns and everything in regards to that.
Long story short: Yes. Identifying with the female gender is what he'd lean most towards eventually because that is how he is living and presenting himself as to people.
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aceina In reply to BriskSunrise [2015-06-09 04:41:33 +0000 UTC]
ok so is cross dressing as far as things will go then JW
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BriskSunrise In reply to aceina [2015-06-09 04:49:59 +0000 UTC]
If you're wondering if he will ever become a girl in physical gender, then no.
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SonicANIMEfan [2015-06-09 01:45:45 +0000 UTC]
Same way the 8th gym can be as it is... game logic, no more questions.... Oh, if one is looking for video game cosplays, Touhou Project
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BriskSunrise In reply to SonicANIMEfan [2015-06-09 01:51:51 +0000 UTC]
I was speaking more in regards to gyms in the anime and not the games when I was talking about Blaine's.
But in regards to game gyms... Clair's is fully insane.
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SonicANIMEfan In reply to BriskSunrise [2015-06-09 02:13:49 +0000 UTC]
well it works for them at least...aaaanywaaaaays... lookin' for Cosplay ideas for Ashley?
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BriskSunrise In reply to SonicANIMEfan [2015-06-09 02:22:30 +0000 UTC]
I wasn't looking for any more cosplay ideas at the moment.
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AshK1980 [2015-06-08 23:43:31 +0000 UTC]
Great work on this awesome update! Keep up the terrific work! This story is shaping up really well! Keep up the great work!
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Makolic [2015-06-08 22:57:38 +0000 UTC]
I forsee high-heels in his future, and a few embarrassing moments as well.
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BriskSunrise In reply to Makolic [2015-06-08 23:12:20 +0000 UTC]
He already has to deal with high heels in his work uniform at the perfume shop~
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Makolic In reply to BriskSunrise [2015-06-09 02:35:57 +0000 UTC]
Wonder if he would wear espadrilles?
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BriskSunrise In reply to Makolic [2015-06-09 02:47:15 +0000 UTC]
I had to look up what those are. They look neat.
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Makolic In reply to BriskSunrise [2015-06-09 03:36:10 +0000 UTC]
XP welp just extra idea's I suppose.
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Cylestea [2015-06-08 21:27:28 +0000 UTC]
nice update do you feel in addion to Ash ( ashley)) having 2 pokemon that wasn't in the series we see more that are new or that ash passed up on getting ?
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BriskSunrise In reply to Cylestea [2015-06-08 22:00:57 +0000 UTC]
There are two more Pokemon that I have plans on Ashley obtaining at the moment, and then another Pokemon he doesn't capture, but befriends and does a few more things with.
Besides that, I currently have no other Pokemon in mind at this time during the 'Kanto' arc. That could change, but we'll see. The biggest issue with giving him a bunch of Pokemon is the need to work on giving them screen time and developing them.
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Cylestea In reply to BriskSunrise [2015-06-09 00:49:05 +0000 UTC]
can rotate them out like primape. Also if he/she abandons one make sure he/she keeps the promise to return i.e. Pigeot i never forgiven Ash for never going back
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BriskSunrise In reply to Cylestea [2015-06-09 01:38:39 +0000 UTC]
Ash didn't really abandon Pidgeot. He let it go so it could protect the Pidgey and Pidgeotto. There's nothing saying that he didn't potentially visit it off screen or anything. It might be difficult to just take Pidgeot away from there without the Fearow and Spearow potentially returning.
But I do understand where you're coming from. As much as I don't like the idea, Pidgeot being left to protect the other birds might be an essential thing even in the AU to keep those Spearow and Fearow in line. However, even if so, Ashley WOULD visit Pidgeot again.
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PrincessAshley91 [2015-06-08 20:21:52 +0000 UTC]
A great chapter, i love the part at the school. Ashley inspiring all those kids with her battle was great. I also liked the shopping trip, never thought Erika would have such a sense of humor, suggesting a ballet outfit for Misty xD this PLIA thing makes sense, though how Team Rocket got past it to run the Viridian gym makes less sense to me than the volcano gym
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BriskSunrise In reply to PrincessAshley91 [2015-06-08 20:35:01 +0000 UTC]
Because Giovanni is a guy with good publicity. The general populace knows absolutely nothing about his involvement with Team Rocket due to him being good at covering it up and keeping it out of the public eye.
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griever789 [2015-06-08 20:20:38 +0000 UTC]
Yeah you kind of have to think their is some corruption and incompetency in pokemon government to allow Sabrina and Giovanni to have gyms.
Fushia city where he can get his poison badge, and then maybe go to the safari zone..though probably won't end up with 40 taruos again...maybe he'll end with 40 milktanks lol. Though it could be a good opportunity for Erika to talk to ash about his fear of trading pokemon he seems to have (which I think came from the whole ss anne incident where he nearly drowned trying to get back his butterfree)...as I mentioned before that episode where Jessie got wobbufett Ash got a bunch of offers for trade for one of his Tauros and of course refused even though he had 40 of them and was never going to use them for anything.
Hm I have to wonder how long you need to wait until baby pokemon can get into fights, I mean Misty never used tokopi for any fights except for one to cheese a fight since Pikchu does not want to harm the baby pokemon. I don't know if that means baby stage pokemon in general shouldn't fight or if Misty was spoiling tokipi.
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BriskSunrise In reply to griever789 [2015-06-08 20:31:52 +0000 UTC]
It was 30 Tauros, and I actually don't plan on him catching 30 Tauros. XD
I think Ash's general problem with trading Pokemon is usually because he ends up attached to his Pokemon and wouldn't want to just trade them for another Pokemon like that.
As for baby Pokemon, I'm going to go with possibly a week. That after they're born, it's best to let them get used to things before starting to train them in battle or otherwise. Even then they can still be rather immature, but are capable of being trained. Togepi... well... that's all because Misty DID spoil the thing rotten.
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griever789 In reply to BriskSunrise [2015-06-08 20:46:23 +0000 UTC]
Yeah though like I said I mean I think Ash only used one Taros once...maybe he used them a couple of times for league battles that I forgot. Otherwise their just sort of sitting their. That not to even mention what became of Kingler and Muk who never even traveled with Ash once. But I know in a meta sense that just because of course once he goes to a new region he has to catch new pokemon so they can sell toys or something.
Well regardless maybe he can catch a new grass pokemon in the safari so he has something other then bulbasaur and Bedew to use if he ever has to serve as a gym trainer.
Yeah Misty did spoil that togepi..I do think at least at the start misty kind of sucked as a trainer only because of her psyduck which some people could possibly make arguments of abuse for. Seriously their has to be a trick to training those...
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BriskSunrise In reply to griever789 [2015-06-08 21:05:47 +0000 UTC]
Ash has used Tauros during the Orange League match with Drake, a battle during the Pokemon Swap Meet in Johto, against Gary in the Johto Silver Conference, and then once more against Anabel during the match and rematch against her. Other than that, the whole heard typically appears whenever Oak's ranch is shown, or Ash visits back home.
As for Kingler, after the Kanto League, it appeared again during the Whirl Islands in Johto against Misty. Ash was planning on using it during the Johto League, but it was injured saving a trio of Voltorb and would be unable to compete. Ash had to use Squirtle instead. Besides that, it makes occasional appearances when the Ranch is shown, and when Ash returns home.
With Muk, after the Kanto League, it was used once in the Orange Islands, and then during the battle against Gary in the Johto League. It then appeared during the Sinnoh League when Ash was training his various Pokemon before the league matches. Like the other ones, it also appears during Ranch moments and when Ash returns home.
Misty was honestly way too hotheaded and impatient to deal with Psyduck, sadly.
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griever789 In reply to BriskSunrise [2015-06-08 21:12:04 +0000 UTC]
Yeah Psyduck seems like a pokemon you kind of have handle delicately, like you would a mentally challenged child...that or just get prescription for some sort of strong pain meds for it. But yeah I never understood if she didn't really like it that much why she didn't just release it or send it back to the cerleon gym.
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SoraWolf7 [2015-06-08 20:00:28 +0000 UTC]
This was a good chapter. It doesn't really feel like a filler between the gym battles, it feels more like a continuation of Ash's learning and self-exploration.
Also, having Ash be registered as Ashley for a long period makes sense, and the way you've drawn Ashley's future incarnations really shows that Ash won't just consider himself a guy or a girl, but just Ashley.
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BriskSunrise In reply to SoraWolf7 [2015-06-08 20:24:52 +0000 UTC]
I liked the idea of the Pokemon League itself getting involved with the change of identification, because it would honestly make sense that they would get involved with something like this in order to make it more official. It also makes it easier for Ashley to BE Ashley for the long term while actually being registered and considered a girl, instead of being someone trying to hide the truth of gender from everybody.
There would still be problems here and there with some people if his physical gender were to be found out, but officially being registered as a girl would diminish certain problems that would otherwise be present.
And yes, even though the way Ashley is living leads to him associating more with the female gender, he would at heart see himself less male or female, and more just Ashley.
Honestly, I'm trying to consider the perfect point to change it up and use the name 'Ashley' in the narrative instead of 'Ash'. That instead of saying 'Ash', say 'Ashley'.
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TerraZero20 [2015-06-08 17:51:53 +0000 UTC]
A great chapter to continue the story :3
Also, small note but its nice to see that you used the proper terms and names for Ashley's outfit when training in Kyudu. So many writers just use the terms top and Japanese trousers, its refreshing to see someone call them what they are.
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