MumuuTan [2016-04-22 16:32:44 +0000 UTC]
GJKRLEQUGUERGQMREYURMIYHDHGSEJHSEEZEESHMSYUGIQMTGERJUHRHTMGULRJRGHSRUGIRSRELTHDJGDSG I CAN'T SAY ANYTHING *just fangirling stuff y know*
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hojunski [2016-04-16 02:03:12 +0000 UTC]
very nice~ I really like the coloring!
as for critique (from an amateur's perspective):
- the only thing that really stands out is that his neck is too thick
the base of the neck is fine, but you can notice that it widens as it gets closer to his head
make sure it's consistent width since we're looking at him straight ahead and not from above
- his collarbones are a tad bit too low - just bring it up a bit
- last thing, not too sure if you did it on purpose, but it seems as though the source of light is coming from his right side (considering the highlight on his right ear and overall right side of the body). if that's the case, you have to make sure that his shadows fall to the left of his body (not right side)
overall, very nice work
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