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Published: 2016-04-15 18:53:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 303; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Description I would seriously wish time would go by faster, just so I could improve faster. ; A ;
I was actually just sketching a little bit yesterday but ended up doing something about it
today. With this drawing, yet again, I have realized that I need to do something about my
backgrounds since they're rather boring and too simple (in my opinion).

I want to be able to draw once more before the weekend ends but can't assure you that
anything will be up since I'm quite busy with my studies. If I finish everything most
of my school-related work early, there's probably a big chance that I will do something quick.

Also, I thought of streaming this earlier but wasn't sure how far I was going with it,
and whether I wanted to finish it or not. ; v ;

I should draw a full-body or a half-body at least some time, by the way...

Critique is appreciated! :>
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Comments: 7

MumuuTan [2016-04-22 16:32:44 +0000 UTC]

                                     

GJKRLEQUGUERGQMREYURMIYHDHGSEJHSEEZEESHMSYUGIQMTGERJUHRHTMGULRJRGHSRUGIRSRELTHDJGDSG I CAN'T SAY ANYTHING *just fangirling stuff y know*

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Broccorice In reply to MumuuTan [2016-04-22 17:24:44 +0000 UTC]

Wait till I get around to drawing Hoseok; that's where the true
fangirling will beginning.

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MumuuTan In reply to Broccorice [2016-04-22 17:28:50 +0000 UTC]

I WILL FANGIRLING OK 

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hojunski [2016-04-16 02:03:12 +0000 UTC]

very nice~ I really like the coloring!


as for critique (from an amateur's perspective): 

- the only thing that really stands out is that his neck is too thick

the base of the neck is fine, but you can notice that it widens as it gets closer to his head 

make sure it's consistent width since we're looking at him straight ahead and not from above
- his collarbones are a tad bit too low - just bring it up a bit
- last thing, not too sure if you did it on purpose, but it seems as though the source of light is coming from his right side (considering the highlight on his right ear and overall right side of the body). if that's the case, you have to make sure that his shadows fall to the left of his body (not right side) 

overall, very nice work

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Broccorice In reply to hojunski [2016-04-16 07:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much - and for the critique as well!
It really helps so I will try to take it into consideration in the future! :>

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FrederikkeFrode [2016-04-15 18:55:18 +0000 UTC]

hvor er den smuk! :>

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Broccorice In reply to FrederikkeFrode [2016-04-15 18:56:58 +0000 UTC]

Mange tak--

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