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Broken-Requiem — If You Move...

Published: 2008-12-12 21:59:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1468; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 12
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Description Hiro stilled his body, well aware that his partner's fractured conscious would pull that trigger before he could finish a breath, even if her finger wasn't curved yet...

Writing portion to be finished at a later date

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Time of completion: Still unfinished
Tools at my disposal: MSPaint and a touchpad on my laptop
Original Base: [link]

Hey guys. I'm so sorry that I've done so little for this account, despite wanting to get this story running. University has been rough; even with a break, my mind is so run down with reading from textbooks that I don't have the energy to write or have fun.

My writing partner has gotten me addicted to the prospect of bases, even though my only available tools are those listed above. @ YaY. Currently, this base is unfinished. I don't have the chains for Mitexi's organization trenchcoat, a design on Wild Rose (yes, I intend to make that gun the one Mitexi gave Hiro), and I still need to finish the writing portion for the scene itself. However, I'm not finishing these details until I get a mouse or inexpensive tablet. Believe me, drawing with the laptop touchpad is difficult and eventually frustrating. So, bear with me until then.

As a final note, this is a Christmas present to the lovely deviants who have stuck by ~Ying-and-Yang-Inc , ~Broken-Requiem and myself during this busy life. You guys mean a lot to us.

Artwork, Mitexi ©

Hiro Takamura ©

Broken Requiem ©

Don't move Base ©
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Comments: 22

Shattered-Abyss [2008-12-13 15:40:29 +0000 UTC]

Pretty nice

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Broken-Requiem In reply to Shattered-Abyss [2008-12-17 19:38:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. It can't compare to your drawings, but it was an idea. I feel bad that your sister already did the image though...

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Shattered-Abyss In reply to Broken-Requiem [2008-12-17 21:56:04 +0000 UTC]


It's alright, I'm sure she'll find a different image

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Broken-Requiem In reply to Shattered-Abyss [2008-12-17 22:27:55 +0000 UTC]

It's more the lost work that bothers me

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Ying-and-Yang-Inc [2008-12-13 01:18:44 +0000 UTC]

What IRONY. I had this base ready to go and to be posted several months back. O_O I can't help but laugh at this; the fact that you did it while I had this stored away as a present for you.

Well, I'm sure I can find something else to replace it. That's pretty weird, you'd definitely be shocked if I show you the picture, because both are pretty dang close in resemblance. With the exception of a few things here and there of course.

But wow, you did an awesome job with this. And with a touchpad mouse! I applaud you because you ought to do more of these when you get a tablet in the future.

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Broken-Requiem In reply to Ying-and-Yang-Inc [2008-12-13 03:28:36 +0000 UTC]

You know what's eerie? The whole time I was doing this base, I kept thinking "Oh man, what if YaY already did this base...for me?" I'm so sorry - I didn't mean to put away all of your hard work. I just had a scene for it and started putting the picture together. If you have the chains done, we could make it a co-pic? ._. I'm sorry.

Wait until you see the other one I've done. I still need to fix the writing portion of that one since it's so close to being done already. I am pleased about it.

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Ying-and-Yang-Inc In reply to Broken-Requiem [2008-12-13 03:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh, our minds are way too in sync. It's kinda scary up to now because we're making it a record. It's totally fine, I lost my USB drive remember? So all that stuff that was on there, including my TPOH chapters is gone. But it's okay, really. You shouldn't apologize because you posted it, while I kinda left mine hanging around in a drive that I ended up losing.

Can't wait!!!

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Broken-Requiem In reply to Ying-and-Yang-Inc [2008-12-13 08:59:54 +0000 UTC]

Well, I like to think that is a good thing since we are writing the same story, enjoy similar things and the like. Records are awesome; it means they can be broken.

You still haven't found it? That really sucks. But still, I feel bad that you did all that work. You left it hanging because of me, though, right? So aren't I still at fault?

It's going to be mildly mature; just to warn you.

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Ying-and-Yang-Inc In reply to Broken-Requiem [2008-12-13 19:59:17 +0000 UTC]

If you put it that way, then I suppose so. It just struck me as weird because it's a first for me.

Nope, it's long gone for all I know. I'm getting a new 8GB though, so maybe I'll be happier about that. -.-" I did since I made it one of your presents, but it's okay. I'll just find another one and make it better.

When has this story NOT been mildly mature...?

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Broken-Requiem In reply to Ying-and-Yang-Inc [2008-12-17 19:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Hehe. I can see your mind through the computer. 0.0

That really sucks. I remember losing an entire disk of pictures and work; I put it in the computer one day and it just didn't work. I don't think you'll make this "I feel bad" thing go away. You work really hard on these things though...

Heh. I know, but I mean that there will be a warning on the picture. Some people will not be able to view it, but I have to put the warnings on.

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Ying-and-Yang-Inc In reply to Broken-Requiem [2008-12-17 21:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Wha?? o_o

Exactly. I've been bitter for some time over that. I'm "better" in a sense though.

Oh, we're talking 18+??? Oh...well, okay.

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Broken-Requiem In reply to Ying-and-Yang-Inc [2008-12-17 22:29:45 +0000 UTC]



I hope it's all right eventually.

No, not 18+. The rating is for blood, but I think the "mature" content filter doesn't distinguish these things.

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Ying-and-Yang-Inc In reply to Broken-Requiem [2008-12-18 00:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Eventually, indeed.

Huh, so that falls under violence/gore. Gotcha. Haven't done one of those yet, but I can't wait to see.

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courtney911 [2008-12-12 22:20:54 +0000 UTC]

awsome

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Broken-Requiem In reply to courtney911 [2008-12-13 03:28:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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courtney911 In reply to Broken-Requiem [2008-12-13 03:30:02 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome ^^

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GiantMutantCoconuts [2008-12-12 22:04:19 +0000 UTC]

I was looking at this going "Whoa, this is nice!"

And then I read you did it with that mousetrack pad thing on laptops. Holy crap. That makes it just plain AMAZING. My head explodes using one of those to like... surf the web. xD

I can't wait to see the finished product!

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Broken-Requiem In reply to GiantMutantCoconuts [2008-12-12 22:09:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm not finished, and obviously, I didn't do the base work. However, I'm pleased with the results so far. I just couldn't wait to have the proper materials -- I started in a haze of "if I study any more, I'm going to start crying and never leave my room".

Thanks for viewing!

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GiantMutantCoconuts In reply to Broken-Requiem [2008-12-12 23:09:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh, the study brain meltdown. Breaks are a must! xD I'm glad you started though, looks nice. And no problem for the view!

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Broken-Requiem In reply to GiantMutantCoconuts [2008-12-13 03:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. And yes, definitely a must.

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PokkinChoco78 [2008-12-12 22:00:04 +0000 UTC]

wow! i love this! good job

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Broken-Requiem In reply to PokkinChoco78 [2008-12-12 22:03:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. It's not complete, but I appreciate the support. Thanks for the fave as well.

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