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brokendollies991 — I have a Heart
Published: 2005-01-23 06:27:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 73; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Sleep here with meLay me down once in this room
Take my hand, i'll show you where my heart is
A collapse of all my walls
Bring me downtown and i'll show
my old world, now gone for you
Right now my untitled poem
Doesn't describe my kiss
It's light and it's fun
tastes like english chocolate
Sweet, and filled with joy
linger gently, opened for you
Fingers seeking palms,
and hands, and wrists
Eyes searching for bare skin
eyes searching eyes
Perfect, pleasant, lying in you
feeling you in me.
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Comments: 8
I don't think I've ever had someone go through the trouble of participating in a poetry-romance 'collaboration' like this before. Thank you for the symbolic love. I'll try to return the favor with prose worthy of such skill as you display here.
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no problem, i combined my admiration for you, and my love for past lovers.. haha it was easy from there.
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That's a word I don't usually have directed my way: admiration, it burns!
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But that usually leads to other things.
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rub some ointment on it if it burns.
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normally...i say something like, "oh, this is cute"..when i want to comment, but i don't really care for the work.
but this...i don't know. maybe it's just that it gives me the same feeling i get when i'm with someone i really like.
but..
i don't know. i just like how you've captured everything. even a lighthearted kiss.
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wow thanks alot! I appreciate your appreciation.
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