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brokenxbeauty โ€” 'Best Friend'
Published: 2006-09-28 20:45:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 3374; Favourites: 118; Downloads: 11
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Description You left me here,
alone in the cold.
I can almost see the wind blow.
It brings back memories,
memories of you.
The way you used to smile,
you know, back we were two.
three musketeers minus one, "best friends".
The warth of your hug,
and those silly jokes you told,
while trying to cheer me up, force one smile out of me.
I opened up to you, telling you everything.
& now thinking back I realize...
you told me nothing.
Nothing worth knowing, anyway.
Whatever happened? Did you just get bored?
I'm not always cheery, not always interesting,
but I thought best friends was more than that.
Maybe I was too eager,
eager to believe I finally had someone,
some to call my best friend.
Because you...
you were the closest to it,
almost the closest I'd ever had.
& now,
now you're just every other "friend" in the hallway.
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Comments: 29

Sailorplanet97 [2020-04-02 10:44:49 +0000 UTC]

i recognize this, i had that with my 2 closest friend i used to have

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kirakk2 [2019-07-02 13:58:14 +0000 UTC]

Me and my friend just went through this situation, I think I'll send it to her just to make her mad lol

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WeAreTheOriginals [2018-01-07 19:56:41 +0000 UTC]

Know how that feels too well.

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skylathewolfy [2017-06-14 14:45:09 +0000 UTC]

That is a sad poem losing a friend is like losing a family member

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201Toast [2016-12-05 18:00:51 +0000 UTC]

I lost my best friend name Raye.He has cancer he never showed up and I miss my best friend

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andrewmackey [2016-09-23 06:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Had to send this to my ex best friend. Great read. Youre an extremely talented individual. I look forward to seeing more

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LawlessLoveless [2016-08-16 11:59:24 +0000 UTC]

Know this feeling all too wellโŠฐโŠนโ€ข

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wini109 [2016-04-07 03:43:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh My Gosh.... I have a relationship JUST like this with a friend of mine. Thank you for putting it so eloquently into words. I love it!

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lshack [2016-03-25 05:00:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm saddened but your plight.
Not every pain is similar and I can't say I lost a close friend.
Yet I feel the pain I had last year and your words
Strong with emotion brought them up.
Thank you for sharing I hope
That your plight.
Is over.

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KatieCuteGirl91 [2016-02-12 18:50:08 +0000 UTC]

This did happen to me in the past

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ThisEcuadorianBoi [2014-02-21 03:14:06 +0000 UTC]

This is ... AMAZING ^.<

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gamepwn [2013-03-27 15:24:30 +0000 UTC]

It's the worst feeling in the world. Feeling alone, forgotten about to people you once considered yourself to be so close with. When they don't even seem to give a shit after all the little moments and times you had together. Life is a mystery that likes to shove a shitload of surprises on you.

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gamepwn [2013-03-27 15:20:10 +0000 UTC]

This made me feel like crying I've lost my best friend this year and last year it was a girlfriend that moved away and just forgot about me and goes off falling for some other guy. Like that. Not to mention many people I once trusted are gone. Beautiful poem my friend. I feel like never opening myself up to anyone again or trusting anyone again.

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kagurawind [2012-10-12 00:35:58 +0000 UTC]

So true! Love it, can relate!

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Elaje [2012-09-26 01:33:48 +0000 UTC]

I thought you'd want to know that this poem made me cry
And also that not a single book or poem has ever made me cry before.

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TriSarahTops14 [2012-02-29 23:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Made me cry...

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OverlordAyame [2012-02-28 09:45:08 +0000 UTC]

Why does this poem fit me so much...well my bestfriend hasn't left me yet but still why...

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gakisun4u [2011-09-04 15:23:40 +0000 UTC]

heart ache ><


It's so beautiful

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Resa-chan [2011-01-16 00:07:43 +0000 UTC]

This happened to me before. :/ But, now I have a person who really is my best friend. He's a better friend then anyone else will ever have. ^^

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skyeatsarin [2010-07-25 18:37:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow, made me sadface. :/ But I really like your writing. Keep it up.

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animeFrEaK10924 [2010-05-01 19:17:48 +0000 UTC]

i felt this hurt not to long ago. i love

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franniefairy [2010-01-20 06:02:19 +0000 UTC]

Your poetry really touches me. i can realate to this one. i have been moving around for so long, i became scared about making friends because i'm always leaving them. then i met a girl like me, and i opened up to her. i laughed and we understood each other. then she got me in a corner and told me she never wanted to be friends... i miss her.

but your poetry is absolutly awesome!

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SidselCullen [2009-10-01 15:29:40 +0000 UTC]

I like your stuff, I feel I really can relate to it, this reminds me of the boy who used to be my best friend
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Benjamin...

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Krissi001 [2009-08-07 14:12:06 +0000 UTC]

I think that this happened to everyone from time to time

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NoOge [2009-05-24 06:21:48 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is just really amazing
great work

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X-XlozX-X [2009-02-07 19:40:01 +0000 UTC]

its relay well written and u can tell it comes straight form the heart well done

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xoover-rated [2009-02-06 17:05:15 +0000 UTC]

oh wow.. i've felt this alot lately with a couple people.. great job though i love it

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naiomii [2008-12-28 13:12:39 +0000 UTC]

i like it. the same thing kinda happened to me. nice job

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ButterflySoph [2008-03-19 04:17:03 +0000 UTC]

Aww thats really sad, I Like it, well done!

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