HOME | DD
brokenxbeauty — Invisible Girl
Published: 2006-09-27 01:31:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 5981; Favourites: 241; Downloads: 15
Redirect to original
Description
she's the girl who doesn't talk,too hurt to say a thing.
she's the girl who misses you,
seeing you makes her heart pang.
she's the girl who hardly cries,
she wants to come off tough.
she's the girl who fakes a smile,
you'd never know her life was rough.
she's the girl who you put last,
but say you love her most.
she's the girl who'd cry & cry,
if you became a ghost.
she's the girl who messes up,
she can't do anything right.
she's the girl who gives up first,
no, she won't win the fight.
she's the girl who'd give everything up,
just to be with you.
she's the girl who needs you most,
the girl you look right through.
Related content
Comments: 57
wow... I know it was dedicated not to me but... it's nice))))
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I honestly relate to this a lot. Very well written
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I know what this feels like...
I have not experienced it myself, but a friend of mine has...
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
yeah, this is kinda like my crush and I. though, it's not really HIS fault, the TV screen is likea two-way mirror. oh, shoot, I said too much!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Me.....thats me.....
May i use this on my Deviant ID?
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Clear description. Well written. Easy to relate to the emotion of this.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Another poetry writer has stolen my diary. Mind if I come up with a little tune to go with it?
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I see my self in it too, gosh it's like lookin in the mirror!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
(T-T ) This hits waaaay to close to home, and for that, I have to love it. People act like I'm a shadow. Never seen but seeing everything, never heard but hearing everything, never needed but needing everyone. This is beautiful.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Sounds like someone I know
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I'm sorta like this in school invisible to everyone till some one need me :C
but this is such a beautifull poem like the others
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
theres this guy at school that i really like, but he is my Ex so he doesnt think of me in that way anymore... he loves my best friends big sister (he is a year older than me and she is in his year so yeahs..) , so, not only is he blind but also i know how much he loves her. i can see it in his eyes, i can see it in his smile, but he cant see any of those things in mine.
what i'm getting at is, if you dont mind, may i please sned him this poem for Valentines day? it is exactly how i feel and i have loved him for the last 2 and a half years of my life and i just dont know what to do if i lose him... i wonder if this poem would get my feelings across to him and easier. so yeahs, would you mind if i sned this to him? please? xx
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Sorry for reviving an old post, but I wanted to say something when I saw your comment. I'm a guy but I've been in this same situation. It really sucks knowing you have history with a person but they act like none of it happened and instead focus on somebody you know. I don't get how they neglect the past. I hope things are better for you now. By the way, did you send it to him?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
its sad to know that this was happening to you, and so im here for you if you need a shoulder to cry on (sounds wierd, but you get what i mean)
i did send it to him in the end, but because he proved to here how much he cares and because they were so happy togeather i felt bad for sending it to him in the end... and i think that im finally being able to move on as like, obviously hes happy now, and im now going into year 11 so he is now a sixth former... and me and my friend Chris (or Fox im character form XD) love each other, but we said that we will wait untill the end of school because that way we wont have to deal with each other getting hurt by others and that way we dont need to worry about our exams and us getting in each others ways... anywho, (so sorry for the long and late post, blame exams againz XD ) my situation's better nowz, because i have somebody who cares for me and i know that even though im never gonna forget the times i had with Kieran, i can remember what i did wrong so this time, i know that its not gonna have to be the way it was before, because we are all happy in the end... i hope your situations better and im here for you if its not xx 
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
This just makes me wanna cry, it just reminds me of myself at school. At 1st grade I was hanging out with the most popular kids but in 2nd grade everything changed. And now I'm in high-school and the popular kids are hanging with my best friends from kindergarten.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
So far, I've seen three of your poems. All of them have been painful and grabbing, I really respect your abilities and your style. The poem is like a slice of life, it makes your heart cry out for the invisible girl, because we've all been her at one point. You must have been her, to be able to connect so deeply with her in your poem. You may not know it, but you have a lot of talent. You're doing a fantastic job with your poetry. Good work!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
It hurts how much this is true for me, the one people rely on and take for granted but the one whos pain is never noticed and is always seen as the after thought.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
i love it. sadly it fits me perfectly. lovely poem though
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
That. is. just. like. me. I am so glad i finally found something that expresess how ifeel
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
i know you've probably gotten this alot but I have to say I drastically relate to this poem. The words seem so severe, and I am thouroughly impressed at the way you word this. Truly a work of art. I love it. <3
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
This one describes me perfectly! It's actually a little spooky O-o Oh well, Very nice work
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
this made me cry because thats me... i am the invisible girl... you have just described me in a nutshell... wow
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Your poems are beautiful and have so much meaning. This is an amazing poem
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Wow! Another great poem! And I actually love the rhyming, it keeps the poem flowing. And I can relate.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE EVERY WORD
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
| Next =>