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Published: 2017-09-11 15:48:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 8842; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 31
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Description Born in a genetics lab for splicing animal DNA, Malok was the unexpected result of dinosaur cloning. scientists were trying to create a special new breed of Utah Raptor meant for military usage. Raptors are, faster and stronger than normal troops. their only flaw was that they attacked anything that wasn't a member of their family. a cluster of eggs was produced and when all subjects hatched, one seemed to have stood out. a Raptor with a mostly black hide.

Malok was the black sheep of the pack... in more ways than one. he stood upright and didn't growl and snarl like his brothers and sisters. scientists noticed how Malok stood out from the rest and wanted to test him to see just how different he really was. Malok showed actual intelligence. he was able to recognize numbers and the letters, and he was not as hostile to humans as his brothers and sisters. at age 2, he was beginning to understand what was being said to him. his level of intelligence was only possible for apes, but it didn't stop there. Malok was soon able to write his name on paper at age 3.

Malok was shown to have more potential than what the project of cloning Raptors had previously expected. Malok is a fast learner and he is growing quickly. General ***** saw this as the perfect chance to create a super soldier. as previously said before, the Raptor clones are stronger and faster than normal troops and they are most effective in groups. imagen if you had one that's also intelligent and trained in the usage of firearms? while it sounded like a cheep science-fiction movie at first... could you really say anything else if it worked? Malok was taught in the usage of weapons and survival skills. but one day everything changed.

A little girl with blue hair and yellow eyes was brought into the facility. N.A.S.A said this girl was discovered on another planet far from the Sol system. Malok only saw her a few times before the day came when all staff members of the facility were suddenly killed by a unseen force. the little girl escaped the facility... and so did Malok. he saw the little girl one last time before both disappeared and went their seperate ways.

Malok stayed to the forests hiding amoungst the trees and avoiding human contact. he survived by stealing from campsites and killing deer and rabbits for food. he was able to kill a fully grown grizzly bear by slitting its throat while it slept with his claws. he then skinned the bear and used its fur coat as a way to disguise himself. because of this, many people exploring the forests believed they had seen Big Foot. so I would say the disguise worked. yes, he was seen, but no one knew that it was a escaped military science project they were looking at.

But then one day, a hunter and his son were out looking for deer. they had spotted a elk and were prepared to fire, but suddenly Malok appeared out of a bush and attacked the elk. he had grabbed the elk by its head and twisted, breaking its neck instantly. the hunter and his son were left in shock. they had just witnessed a lizard man kill and elk with its bare hands. Malok then spotted the 2 and walked towards them. the hunter raised his weapon preparing to fire. Malok stopped and held up his hands to show he didn't have any weapons. then... something unexpected happened. "Please... put the gun down. I don't want to have to hurt you" Malok just spoke. the hunter was frozen, he didn't know what to do. Malok then snatched the gun out of his hands. he turned back towards the elk and picked it up and carried it away while still holding the rifle. of course, no one believed the man and his son that their gun was stolen by a lizard man.

A few weeks later, a under cover agent disguised as a camper was found dead in the forest with a gun shot wounds in his chest. the pistol he had carried with him was missing...

Over the next few years, Rangers reported seeing a large black creature in the woods. campers also reported some camping supplies went missing and seeing strange footprints around their campsite. gunshots would be heard but when Rangers went to investigate there was never anything found other than bullet shells. however, many dead animals were discovered over the years with large teeth marks in them. a family had brought their pet dog a few weeks ago and the animal started barking agressively at something in the tree. the dog then chased after it. a few moments later, the animal came running back in a panic with large claw marks across its body. a few days later, a Ranger Station was broken into but all that was stolen was food and a few guns. there was growing concern of a creature that could be a threat to campers.

Malok then left the area and went north. he knew he was starting to bring unwanted attention to him so he couldn't stay in one place for long.

A few years later, rumors of a black creature began circulating again in Canada but only for a few months. a police car was also broken into and the shotgun kept inside was missing. a few weeks later, a young woman was out with her camera just for the fun of searching for Big Foot came across a stash of guns. shotguns, pistols, revolvers, and even a assault rifle. she didn't know what to think at first. was a hunter out here trying to kill more than just deer and bears? but then, Malok found her and took the camera away and smashed it. before she could scream, he hold her mouth close. the woman passed out from the lack of air. when she woke up, she was back near her car but her camera was still missing.

Malok was sitting in a tree eating some jerky he stole when suddenly... he saw her again... the little girl with blue hair... but now she's taller... MUCH taller. all this time he thought he was scary, but this left him speechless. she must have been over 240ft tall. she was bigger than the tree he was sitting in. then another giant woman appeared. this one with dark skin and red hair. Malok then climbed down and gathered up what ever weapons he could carry and fled. whatever is happening, he knew he would be in trouble if they found him. that woman with the dark skin and red hair... she did not give off a friendly aura.

Even at a distance, he could still see the two giant women. but he was curious about them so he stayed where he was but still out of enough sight. he just sat and watched them. he's never seen humans this gigantic before. suddenly he heard something. "Are you getting hungry? I could get you that black lizard over there" the dark skinned woman said looking directly at Malok.

SHE CAN SEE HIM?! FROM THIS FAR AWAY!? HOLY F**K!!

Like that, Malok bolted. he dropped a few guns but didn't care, he wanted out of here now! he was in such a hurry that he didn't even notice the road he was running towards. right there, Malok was hit by a car. he quickly got up and continued running with a broken arm. the pain was intense but it would be nothing compared to being eaten alive by giant women. Malok did his best to mend his arm but it would take time to heal. for right now he just needs rest.

Malok was sleeping when he felt something softly petting his back. he slightly opened his eye can could see something... blue? must have been the sky. but then he noticed something... his arm doesn't hurt anymore. he sat up to check it and the gash had been closed. then he felt something soft go down his back again. he looked up to his surprise to see the giant girl with blue hair from before looking at him with a concerned face. "Are you ok mr. lizard man?" she said. Malok didn't know what to say. did she heal his arm? how? "Yes... thank you" Malok said. the giant woman smiled and said to come to her incase he gets hurt again. she then left and Malok just sat there. was she really the same girl from all those years ago? gee... she got big.

Malok remained in the forest and watched her from a distance. after a while he felt brave enough to step out of the shadows to actually meet her again. but the dark skinned woman would still like to eat him so he tries to keep a distance from her. though the woman with pink and black hair is very pleasant as she likes to pet him too. he's been alone for almost 2 decades... he's starting to likes this. especially Xegito and Torige always petting him softly.







Well... here he is. my 9th OC. why am I getting a new OC? its because I've had this character planned for years actually. if you seen my journals then you know I have a video game idea planned but I'm not sure if it'll ever become a reality. so... I just decided to use him here on dA. besides, I love dinosaurs. Raptors being amongst my favorites. XD

So just like Naxon, Malok will also be a victim of Xegito's growth spurts. whenever my female OCs grow big, Malok will be there with Naxon getting squished. pretty much my version of Scrat from Ice Age. Lol
www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCTNio…

After this, I have no more OCs planned. I know I've brought in 5 this year alone. well... 2 of them are revamps of already existing OCs I had, so technically 3 new OCs, but still. any other characters I make will just to show you what they looked like. such as how I mentioned Torige had sisters before the Synlaku home planet was invaded. but I'll just show what they looked like and nothing else really.

But I hope you guys enjoy my gun stealing lizard man.
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Comments: 7

theshadowedtwo [2017-09-14 05:25:57 +0000 UTC]

He has a Xegito theme on his head

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broku5000 In reply to theshadowedtwo [2017-09-14 20:35:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he does have Xegito's theme with the blue hair, yellow eyes and the black, red and white colors. but I'm glad you like it.

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whitebearboy [2017-09-12 04:06:39 +0000 UTC]

Cool character, I love how Xegito and Torige treat him like a little pet!

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GokuMartin [2017-09-11 19:01:13 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

You are a talented artist and writer, broku! Keep up the good work!

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Dragonkingmark [2017-09-11 16:36:55 +0000 UTC]

Malok looks awesome ^^

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Clonecamando1471 [2017-09-11 16:10:39 +0000 UTC]

Had a feeling it would be a Raptor.

And one that steals guns no less, we're doomed...

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broku5000 In reply to Clonecamando1471 [2017-09-11 18:45:51 +0000 UTC]

The general got what he wanted. a soldier who can survive for long periods of time by himself in the wild and remain undetected, he is extremely dangerous in hand to hand combat, and he can steal items and weapons without ever being seen. too bad for him that he joined the Synlakus instead of the US Military. Lol

But Malok is not to be underestimated. while he doesn't have super human abilities like all my other OCs, you still she use caution when fighting him. while his training was never completed, he still knows enough hand to hand combat skills to get by. such as the technique of twisting the arm to break the bone. and with how many weapons he steals, you never know if he's hiding a gun on him that he'll use should things get bad. plus he has his own natural weapons such as his claws and dagger toes which he can use to do this.

youtu.be/_hczDLGpjyg?t=1m13s

So while he doesn't have super human abilities, he still has his own way to make up for it. I plan for him to by my version of Redhood from Batman.

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