TheLostNarrator [2005-10-21 04:45:33 +0000 UTC]
you definitely captured the feelings of a young innocent child great poem
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BrooksysLittleSister In reply to TheLostNarrator [2005-10-21 10:13:47 +0000 UTC]
thankyou muchly deary.....that is what i hoped for
TheLostNarrator In reply to BrooksysLittleSister [2005-10-21 21:04:46 +0000 UTC]
no problem
BrooksysLittleSister In reply to TheLostNarrator [2005-10-22 10:35:07 +0000 UTC]
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Alatariel-Luinwe [2005-10-20 21:09:51 +0000 UTC]
Awww i really like this, you really capture being young and things you do i love the ending too it just fits so well !
BrooksysLittleSister In reply to Alatariel-Luinwe [2005-10-21 10:09:44 +0000 UTC]
lol shes a very special friend so it was deserved.... she's helped me and vise verca.....
blood-filled-tears [2005-10-20 13:02:01 +0000 UTC]
hey.... thats me!
BrooksysLittleSister In reply to blood-filled-tears [2005-10-21 09:55:30 +0000 UTC]
*in shock*!!! no.......