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browneyedgirl07 — 32. Exploration
Published: 2008-10-27 00:54:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 64; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description I explored the cupcake frosting with my hypersensitive tongue, each sprinkle a burst of color to my unsuspecting mind.  I explored the frosting with my tongue, because my fingers still had superglue on them.  I explored the frosting while my mind filled with images of broken instruments, swirling notes, wishing patterns, and the color of frosting sprinkles.
My tongue danced along the frosting and devoured every grain of sugar, one by one, until all that remained was the cupcake.

My teeth explored the cupcake, ever crevice, every ridge in the soft, chocolate bread.  They found freedom and gold in the cupcake.  Stark white against dark brown must have been a sight to see, but when I tried to look, the cupcake was already in my mouth.  My mouth could explore the taste that reverberated across my palate and back to my tonsils, which I never got removed but feared I someday might have to.  As the taste bounced around, it wondered what the point of tonsils is, as I surely didn’t know.
My teeth explored the cupcake and my mouth explored the taste until there was nothing left, and all that remained was the plate.

My fingers explored the plate, clean save only a few brown crumbs that decorated black ceramic, giving spots to a striped surface.  The stripes were indented in the plate.  As my fingers explored the plate, the clay crumbled to dust, until all that remained was stark nothingness.
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Comments: 16

KogoChiara [2008-11-04 22:58:00 +0000 UTC]

I think that your exploring the world too much and ruining the magic by making this piece have a point! It's interesting just to read it and not analize it too closely. That's not really how I feel, I just couldn't resist throwing your logic back at you.

Once again the descriptive language is superb. I like the super glue part, but the tonsils part seems kinda random and out of place. I'm not sure why tonsils are more random than super glue.... but yeah. Maybe it's just that the super glue fits better with the rest of the piece.

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browneyedgirl07 In reply to KogoChiara [2008-11-04 23:28:59 +0000 UTC]

Haha, sorry! I didn't realize you felt so strongly about it!! Just kidding, of course!

Thanks. I actually did have super glue on my fingers when I wrote it, left over from an emergency repair on my clarinet. Maybe the tonsils part was out of place because I wasn't writing from truth? Just a thought. But thanks for mentioning it!

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KogoChiara In reply to browneyedgirl07 [2008-11-05 01:48:17 +0000 UTC]

Were you also eating a cupcake while you were writing it?

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browneyedgirl07 In reply to KogoChiara [2008-11-05 12:39:14 +0000 UTC]

Nope! That line struck me while I was eating breakfast, actually, for no reason at all. When I'm tired, COMPLETELY random words run through my head. So there I was, eating, and that line ran through my head (in a fashion a little more disjointed), and I thought, "Woah. There's a good line." So I held onto it.

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KogoChiara In reply to browneyedgirl07 [2008-11-16 17:52:37 +0000 UTC]

That happens to me too occasionally. I usually forget it though, before I can write it down.

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browneyedgirl07 In reply to KogoChiara [2008-11-16 23:30:33 +0000 UTC]

Same, but I tried my best to hold onto this one.

... And that's why that little book thing is so helpful! Thanks for that!

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KogoChiara In reply to browneyedgirl07 [2008-11-18 16:40:09 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I'm glad you like it!

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Bandgeekandproud [2008-10-28 11:25:53 +0000 UTC]

I liked this one. It's true that the more we explore, the less blank edges of the map there are.
good work! =]

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browneyedgirl07 In reply to Bandgeekandproud [2008-10-28 22:57:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Bandgeekandproud In reply to browneyedgirl07 [2008-10-28 23:18:43 +0000 UTC]

no prob, bob ^__^
oh no..OH GOD HERE IT COMES!!!
//_____\\
AAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!!

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browneyedgirl07 In reply to Bandgeekandproud [2008-10-29 00:04:48 +0000 UTC]

*Pretends to know what you're talking about*

AHHHHHH!!!!

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Bandgeekandproud In reply to browneyedgirl07 [2008-10-29 11:14:16 +0000 UTC]

uhngh...
THIS --> //_________\\
is what's gonna eat us...jeez...

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browneyedgirl07 In reply to Bandgeekandproud [2008-10-29 20:25:39 +0000 UTC]

ooooh....

yikes.

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Bandgeekandproud In reply to browneyedgirl07 [2008-10-30 00:39:05 +0000 UTC]

heck yes

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rainbowball-o-fluff [2008-10-27 02:06:04 +0000 UTC]

some how i am hungery after reading that.
1st comment > "because my fingers still had superglue on them" this acctually made me laugh out loud.
2nd comment> I agree with what you said in author's comments, we are looking a bit too deep for more and more answers. SOME PEOPLE NEED THAT MAGIC. =]

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browneyedgirl07 In reply to rainbowball-o-fluff [2008-10-27 23:40:50 +0000 UTC]



Yeah, I thought that was cool because a select few people would get it, and everyone else would just think it was purposely random.

MAGIC!

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