KogoChiara [2008-11-04 22:58:00 +0000 UTC]
I think that your exploring the world too much and ruining the magic by making this piece have a point! It's interesting just to read it and not analize it too closely. That's not really how I feel, I just couldn't resist throwing your logic back at you. Once again the descriptive language is superb. I like the super glue part, but the tonsils part seems kinda random and out of place. I'm not sure why tonsils are more random than super glue.... but yeah. Maybe it's just that the super glue fits better with the rest of the piece.
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browneyedgirl07 In reply to KogoChiara [2008-11-04 23:28:59 +0000 UTC]
Haha, sorry! I didn't realize you felt so strongly about it!! Just kidding, of course!Thanks. I actually did have super glue on my fingers when I wrote it, left over from an emergency repair on my clarinet. Maybe the tonsils part was out of place because I wasn't writing from truth? Just a thought. But thanks for mentioning it!
KogoChiara In reply to browneyedgirl07 [2008-11-05 01:48:17 +0000 UTC]
Were you also eating a cupcake while you were writing it?
browneyedgirl07 In reply to KogoChiara [2008-11-05 12:39:14 +0000 UTC]
Nope! That line struck me while I was eating breakfast, actually, for no reason at all. When I'm tired, COMPLETELY random words run through my head. So there I was, eating, and that line ran through my head (in a fashion a little more disjointed), and I thought, "Woah. There's a good line." So I held onto it.
KogoChiara In reply to browneyedgirl07 [2008-11-16 17:52:37 +0000 UTC]
That happens to me too occasionally. I usually forget it though, before I can write it down.
browneyedgirl07 In reply to KogoChiara [2008-11-16 23:30:33 +0000 UTC]
Same, but I tried my best to hold onto this one.... And that's why that little book thing is so helpful! Thanks for that!
KogoChiara In reply to browneyedgirl07 [2008-11-18 16:40:09 +0000 UTC]
Yay! I'm glad you like it!
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Bandgeekandproud [2008-10-28 11:25:53 +0000 UTC]
I liked this one. It's true that the more we explore, the less blank edges of the map there are.good work! =]
browneyedgirl07 In reply to Bandgeekandproud [2008-10-28 22:57:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
Bandgeekandproud In reply to browneyedgirl07 [2008-10-28 23:18:43 +0000 UTC]
no prob, bob ^__^oh no..OH GOD HERE IT COMES!!!//_____\\AAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!!
browneyedgirl07 In reply to Bandgeekandproud [2008-10-29 00:04:48 +0000 UTC]
*Pretends to know what you're talking about*AHHHHHH!!!!
Bandgeekandproud In reply to browneyedgirl07 [2008-10-29 11:14:16 +0000 UTC]
uhngh...THIS --> //_________\\is what's gonna eat us...jeez...
browneyedgirl07 In reply to Bandgeekandproud [2008-10-29 20:25:39 +0000 UTC]
ooooh....yikes.
Bandgeekandproud In reply to browneyedgirl07 [2008-10-30 00:39:05 +0000 UTC]
heck yes
rainbowball-o-fluff [2008-10-27 02:06:04 +0000 UTC]
some how i am hungery after reading that. 1st comment > "because my fingers still had superglue on them" this acctually made me laugh out loud. 2nd comment> I agree with what you said in author's comments, we are looking a bit too deep for more and more answers. SOME PEOPLE NEED THAT MAGIC. =]
browneyedgirl07 In reply to rainbowball-o-fluff [2008-10-27 23:40:50 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I thought that was cool because a select few people would get it, and everyone else would just think it was purposely random. MAGIC!